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Title: Great!!
Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 18:26 PST
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Just finished reading this story and I must say it was wonderful!! I loved every minute of it. Good work!!
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Reviewed By: *~Sorena~* On: October 20, 2004 16:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've already reviewed this story, but I felt the need to review it again because of how wonderful it is. This fic, out of all the fics I've read (and I've read tons) was one of the most entertaining and well-written ones I've ever had the chance to read. :) The characterization of Kagome and Inuyasha, although not too on the dot (but then again, this is better) is very interesting to read. You are such a wonderful writer and I can only hope you continue to write such great fics. A huge fan, Sorena
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Reviewed By: ps On: October 14, 2004 15:31 PDT
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ok, the pregnancy was a cop out, i mean come on! everyone always ends it that way. It should have made things worse not better, I lived through a relationship which fractured almost exactly like this one, and the pregnancy too, it only made it so much worse. It was a great story, but the love conquers all bit was way to happy endingish in the end. It would have been perfect if she wasnt pregnant.
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 18:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your story! It amazing and awesome but sad and heartfelt. I like your relationship with Sesh and Kagura more than any onther Seshy relationship ever! just enough lemon and lime to keep me satisfied too!
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Reviewed By: AngelHeart2122 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 22:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story. You did an incredible job. I think I liked the first ending better though. I am glad that you wrote both because both endings were enjoyable to read. I am definitely going to have to read more of your stories. Not only did you have a great original idea but you also wrote it beautifully. I hope you continue to write because you are truly talented.
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Title: Rainstorm61879
Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 20:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Personally I liked the alternate ending best. I loved the story. You did a great job.
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Reviewed By: Okibi Usagi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 18:45 PDT
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i read this on ff.net but i never read the eppologe or alternate ending, i like the original one best tho. this story rocks so do you other ones! ^_^
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Reviewed By: booferret On: September 14, 2004 17:37 PDT
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I think I liked the concept of the second ending better but I think the first one was written better. Great story I really enjoyed it keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 07:18 PDT
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omg! my lover recommended this story to me and i am so glad that she did! this story was beautiful and real. you did a wonderful job of making the characters follow their set personality from the anime, and yet making it real enough to survive in modern times. it was a beautiful story, one that i will have to read more than once. i love the fluff, the angst, and the great little spurts of humor that liven this story up! i'll be reading more of your work before too long. and as for my favorite ending, the alternate ending. it's more romantic, ne? although both endings were beautiful and wonderful. you did a wonderful job on this story. and i love it!
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: jdls [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 18:47 PDT
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omg i love both endings!! hehehe theyre both so great!!! awww i wish i cud write as well as you!!!! thakns again for a really great story :D and keepwriting and keep up the great work :D
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Title: awww!!
Reviewed By: jdls [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 18:42 PDT
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lol i love it!! 4 boys?! holy!! poor kagome lol inu must be the equivilant of 4 on his own...lol heheheh too cute!!1 ur a great writer and i'm SOOO impressed by this story. i love it with a passion, thanks for a great read and keep up the great work!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: jdls [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 18:36 PDT
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YAY i love it!!! yay hehehe awww shes pregnant?! theyr'e tooo cute!!! yay *double claps* great job!
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Title: awww :(
Reviewed By: jdls [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 18:30 PDT
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sad aww this time....wow ur such a great writer!!! i feel so bad for kagome, and i'm mad at but sympathize with inu!! heheh awww its all to cute tho :P
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Title: heheh
Reviewed By: jdls [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 18:20 PDT
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:'( noooo almost over?! but i heart this story, i heart it with a passion!!! lol heheh they're sooo busted, i love it!
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Title: awww!!
Reviewed By: jdls [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 18:14 PDT
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hehehe i love couples getting together...heheh rin ish a tricky one! lol *claps* yay ! :D
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