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Reviewed By: firetrixs On: August 05, 2004 11:53 PDT
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I loved the chapter however, I have one big question. I thought that Kagome ran away from the study where Sesshomaru and Inuyasha before Inuyasha's confession, so how did she hear it when she ran away?
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: August 05, 2004 09:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah yes another brilliant story!!! great job. i only wish i could write as well as you do. this was amazing and i can't wait to read more of your work.
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Title: Good luck!!
Reviewed By: 1 Miroku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 09:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY YOU DID IT! IT was really good, I'm sooooooo happy for you being nominated you rock congrats and I'm gonna vote for you right now. Can't wait for everything like your next story,etc. Congrats to you and as you know you and Meche rock. See ya.
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 08:15 PDT
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I VOTED FOR UR STORY!!!!!! : )
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Reviewed By: sunshine07 On: August 05, 2004 08:06 PDT
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that was GREAT!!!!!!! i can't wait until u write the epilogue!!!!!!!!!! i loved this story!!!!i'm sad that its about to be over : ( but it was GREAT : )
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Reviewed By: yuki_chan_89 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 22:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was an amazing ending, u deserve to win that people's choice award. so, goodluck. im bursting with excitement to read ur new story and i hope u update soon with the epilogue and alternate endings; those are always good. ciao.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 21:32 PDT
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Great chapter. It's sad to see that the story is ending. I'll be interested in reading the alternate ending, seeing as I'm wondering how it will end up. Anyway, good luck with the new story. It looks really good, from what you had written about it.
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 21:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i'm so sad to see this Fic ending but all good thing's dont last forever you kno? well any way!...........keep up your good work and i look forward to reading all other Fic's from you!
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Reviewed By: Zoingy On: August 04, 2004 20:22 PDT
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AW man!!! I'm crying!!! I swear!!! Your good....dead good. That chappy was so sweet!! Please keep updating! Bye Your number1 Fan: Zoingy (kaoru-chaness
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 19:20 PDT
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Awesome story. I love it. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Radhika14024 On: August 03, 2004 16:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pinkI cant bieleve ff.com sdeleted ur account. I was looking for this story for days... update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 07:44 PDT
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The "Tide Saga" is good. And I loved your version of the demon ceremony. Beautiful. I'm little disappointed in Kagome though. She just passed the bar and already screwing up. You can't anull (yeah I know, spelled wrong) a consimated marriage. And I think it's safe to say they have done that throughly. Good job on the lemons by the way. All very streamy/sweet. It was cute to have Miroku leave Kirara. Such a sweet gesture. I think Sango is abosolutly right. Kagome is running away just like she did with Hojo. For someone that insisted they be friends even after the break up she never talk to or about him again once finding out he was gay. And I wonder what was so bad that it kept her from flying. Not that I wanted her to leave but I doubt that InuYasha could have grounded each plane she would try to leave on. I hope Sesshomaru doesn't try to harm InuYasha seeing as it wasn't completely his fault and he did tell her long ago that he wanted something real between them and only met with the lawyers to humor her since planned on never using them. Now she has go talk to both Inuyasha and her grandfather. It will be interesting to see how this turns out. Can't wait for your next chapter.
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Title: oh biscuits!
Reviewed By: fudge On: August 01, 2004 23:05 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm begging you to update really really reallly really really soon! I just enjoy this story so much. Keep up the amazing job and I can't wait to see what happens next. :)fudge
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Title: I love it!
Reviewed By: manina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 21:27 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful fic! amazing! Can't believe I didn't find this before (found it nominated in protégé, I'm sooo voting for you) Btw, I'm majoring in biology! And I adore it! :D Pawqara
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Title: oh this is so passionate!
Reviewed By: foxy roxy On: July 31, 2004 17:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i had to rate everything 10, because frankly, its purrfect. i really hope this story has a happy ending, because sad one's make me sad--obviously-- there isnt much to say though, i hope u update soon, im sorry u got booted rudely off of ff.net and i hope everything goes well for you. anyways, ciao amiga.
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