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Title: chapter 1
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 17:18 PDT
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just started reading...seems great!
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Reviewed By: antisocial mint (nli) On: June 30, 2004 14:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome! they are married now!! and in love!! great stuff keep it up!!
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Title: The Ad
Reviewed By: C to the Izzle On: June 29, 2004 19:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I began to read your story on fanfiction.net, and as I continued to read, I began to love the story more and more. I haven't read a lot of InuYasha fan fiction, but for some reason, I feel that this will probably be some of the best I will read. I'm very glad to see how well your story is developed, and I'm glad to see that you took time to develope the characters instead of rushing into it, assuming that everyone knew the characters. Overall... this fiction is really great. Wonderful!
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Reviewed By: sunshine07 On: June 28, 2004 22:38 PDT
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that was GREAT!!!!!!!! soo sweet!!!!!! i hope sesshy and kagura get back together!!!!!! and inuyasha and kagome stay together when her grandpa tells her the truth!!!!!! plz update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: E. Marie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 18:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way things are developing between Sesshomaru and Kagura...the unanswered questions (ex: Sesshomaru's clause from his father's will) and the foreshadowing of doom and gloom to come have me excited for the next chapter! Thanks for the frequent updates!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 28, 2004 17:01 PDT
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Like I said before sorry for the delay. This was another excellent chapter, I am shocked that some people missed it but I think there has been a lot of Inuyasha falling for Kagome, just it was never over stated and always reflected quietly in his changes of behaviour. Glad to know so many people appreciate your work, it is truely excellent. I look forwards to seeing what the next chapter holds and finding out what exactly is the condition that Sesshomaru is bound by. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 28, 2004 16:30 PDT
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Sorry for the delay in reviewing, was in Canada. Excellent chapter! Should have seen that coming. Be interesting to see how this continues to play out, will read the next chapter when I reach it in the long list of e-mail notifications. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: UpDaTe!!!
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness (not logged in) On: June 27, 2004 21:16 PDT
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Hi. I'm not sure if I've reviewed before, I'm pretty sure I did. Anyways, if I didn't, well, I'm reviewing now. So Kagome and Inu-chan getting hitched, neh? Interesting. I bet Kagome's grandpa is gonna do something about it, huh? Kagura and Sesshy should work out their problems and issues. They deserve to be a couple. I mean, they've been pining over eachother for God knows how long. I like how this story is going. Please update really soon. I'm sure you are gonna have a lot of reviews soon. Update soon! ~Psycho Demoness~(^..^)-meow
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Title: chapter 20
Reviewed By: AnimeObsessionFantasy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2004 00:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wowee ^-^ heh, at first i was surprise of the couple Sess/Kagura heh, tho i think they are a kool match lol =D great story!
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Reviewed By: Hexe On: June 24, 2004 16:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ Well, this is the first time I've ever reviewed on Media Miner...anyway...er, I can still log in on FF.net, so I dunno what your problem is...hmmm Anyway, Plz update soon with another chapter! I can't wait till Inu Yasha proposes! ~Hexe
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 21:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWW I WANT INU AND KAG TO FUCK EACHOTHER
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 11:50 PDT
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that chappy was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved it!!!! i hope kagome forgives Sango and Mir. : ) Ok...welll Plz update SOON!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Elisa On: June 23, 2004 11:22 PDT
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I loved this chapter! It was very revealing about about where the relationships stand. I knew that when Kagura and Sesshoumaru spent the night together that it could turn out either really good with some issues resolved, or VERY bad. I'd hoped that it would turn out good, but it didn't suprise me that they fought the morning after. They have way too many issues to be resolved before they can have a stable relationship. But hopefully they will talk about their problems & REALLY try to work them out. I am very happy that Inu & Kag had the foresight to wait. I can't wait to see him propose! Please, don't have him mess up just when he and Kagome are doing so well!
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Reviewed By: jc On: June 23, 2004 02:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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rather than worry about how mayn chapters it should be, just continue on as you have been going because a rushed story is one that no one wants to read and I think that your progress is good. To some people, the longer the story, the better! Keep up the great work and I look foward to the rest of the story!
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Title: nicely done
Reviewed By: smittin kittin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 00:17 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so behind on this fic finally caught up & boy is my timing great! I love the complexity of this story! I love how the different relationships overlap. What is the deal w/Kags grandpa? If he didn't want her w/Inu why such an elaberate set up? Love this fic can't wait to see how S/K work through their complicated & painful history. One more thing. When Kag/Inu get married won't Souta be his girlfriends uncle by marriage? ^o^ Thanks for sharing your fab fic! Update soon! Please & thank You!
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