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Reviewed By: peacecraft906 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 18:42 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I stumbled on this fic by accident and now i am hooked!!! I love it and I hope the next chapter is out soon!! I also like the AN's. well best of luck to you and I look forward to new chapters...soon!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 24, 2004 16:34 PDT
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Excellent chapter! Didn't know you were on FanFiction.net also, may have to start reading this there... With regards to the 'adult' scenes, I'm 24...is that old enough? Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 09:59 PDT
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Heh, good chapter. Shippou missing his Saturday morning anime, heh. Don't have anything else to really say, but good luck and I hope you continue writing as fast as you are doing.
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Title: is it just me?
Reviewed By: Just-Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 15:06 PDT
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hey...is it just me or the whole mediaminer system...? I could only see 32 reviews...:S that's scary! UH OH- MY COMP MUST BE DEAD! great story! i like it a lot- but please turn Inu into a much civilized person not some kind of sex holic.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 22, 2004 17:28 PDT
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Well it was beautiful as ever. Personally I enjoy your writing style, I know my opinion doesn't could for much but I have read a few hundred fan fictions in the past few years so I would hope to knwo something about them. Your preise for this is a...I'm not sure if noble would be the right word. I am glad to see a story focused on romance rather than animal passion as I have read more than a few lemons and have seen raw and unbridled sex at its worst. I look forwards to seeing more of this work as it has been a joy to read so far and has been one of those few that shows insight and a deeper understanding of the motive that drive the characters. Appologies for the length of this, I tend to ramble from time to time. I hope you will accept my sincerest wishes of luck with this and I look forwards to having the chance to follow this through to the end. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: wj On: April 22, 2004 15:19 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The word is "mine", not "mines". 'Sorry, that just irritates me. Otherwise, you have a good story. Please continue!
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Title: kawaii
Reviewed By: beanner On: April 22, 2004 01:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is so cute ... i love it and can't wait for the next chappy...great job... update soon... ja ne ^_^ beanner
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Reviewed By: Cat61 On: April 21, 2004 22:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
..Wow. I've read a lot of Inuyasha fanfics..and i do mean alot, but this is definitely one of the better ones so far.:) You have a wonderful way of drawing out the beginnings of their relationship...and that scene was, while not quite burning, definitely steaming!:) Keep it up, I like this fic so far, and hope to see an update fairly soon. Good luck with your thesis, I know how rough that can be.:)
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Reviewed By: oracle44 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 20:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 18:59 PDT
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Good chapter ^^ I don't have much to say because I have to go get a bunch of work done now... update soon :)
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Reviewed By: smg1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 17:35 PDT
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Chapter 9 didn't upload properly...but i love the story so far
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Reviewed By: amonRaThegreat On: April 21, 2004 17:06 PDT
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try to upload again.....
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 10:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is too cool. I really love it and I can't wait for the next chapter. This chapter was really great, so please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 17, 2004 20:01 PDT
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That was excellent once again! Hope you feel better soon. Don't work yourself too hard! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 12:57 PDT
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Great chapter! ^^ Hope you update soon :)
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