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Reviewed By: Esther Tan On: August 22, 2004 22:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I prefer the alternate chapter best. That's the Kagome we know who will face Inuyasha face on & shout "BAKA" at him. The Kagome who knows she loves & understands Inuyasha no matter what. Like the epilogue too. WOW !! 4 boys!! too bad they all have black hair instead of white (should of one of them that is the splitting image of our loveable hanyou, fangs, ears & "keh" . But whatever I love yr story. Can't wait when U start on a new one.
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Reviewed By: hanyou_gurl004 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 21:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story! I'm really sad to know that it's over now! It was a real slice reading over the summer, it took my mind off of summer reading assignments for college...i don't wanna go...I personally enjoyed the alternate ending more so than the original; however, there were a few parts in the original that I enjoyed also. I can't wait for your next story to come out! You truly have a talent and I hope it takes you far! Corinthia
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Reviewed By: sunshine07 On: August 22, 2004 19:37 PDT
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that was a GREAT story!!!! i like both endings!!!! the first because its sweet and Kagome has 4 children with a girl on the way. and the second because it explains how Kagome was wronge to doubt Inuyasha too. ppl need to show how Kagome can be wronge too sometimes and its not all Inuyasha's falt!!! i'm sad this stories over and i loved it!!! plz make another story soon!!
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Reviewed By: ktakn_yeni [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 18:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you made me search for this ending for nearly a month! ^^but it was worth it. i keep this story since its begginngs and i'm very sad that it has ended. i must say CONGRATS!! it was an awesome fic. very original and very good. i liked more the second ending. and i just loved the epilogue it has been one of the best i've ever read. i hope you create new fics as awesome as this one. so i can be behind that fic reading it. congrats again. you've made a wonderful job. i cant wait to see another work from you ^^ see ya ktakn
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 17:19 PDT
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I know I preferred the alternate ending. Too many writers fail to mention that Kagome has made some mistakes, and then pin all the blame on Inuyasha. I thought it was very good that you made Kagome realize that she did share some of the blame for the argument. Great story. I loved it.
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Title: like the second best
Reviewed By: Laina On: August 22, 2004 16:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved your whole story. It was the reason I started reading fanfics. I'm glad I could see it all the way to the end. I liked the second ending the best it just felt more right. Thank you for being such a great writer and I hope you keep doing more stories for all of us!!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: August 22, 2004 16:03 PDT
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bravo!! wonderful story =D
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Reviewed By: Catmann On: August 22, 2004 15:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I prefer the Epilogue chapter to the Alternate Ending because like the fic is titled, it all started with an ad placement. It kind of connected everything. Great job on this. I started reading this on ff.net until they decided to be a-holes and delete it. Both chapters were great but I think the epilogue was a bit better.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: August 22, 2004 15:26 PDT
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Excellent chapter! A marvelous epilogue to and excallent story. Good luck with both the votes and work. Look forwards to reading it when you have the time. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Squishy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 15:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow you're story is just wonderful and i'm so sad to see it done. I loved both the alternate ending and the epilogue and the rest of the story! still sad that it was taken off of FF.net it had so many reviews there... I can't wait for the next story! I'll be patient =) --Irene
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Reviewed By: Queen LuvBunny On: August 20, 2004 21:55 PDT
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aww!! you just HAVE to update soon!! i cant take it anymore!!! i HAVE to know wats going to happen next!!! im gonna die if you dont!! you dont want me to die do you? plz plz plz plz!! update! bye!
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Title: YOU ARE CORDIALLY INVITED...
Reviewed By: Dragons_Dream_of_Desolation On: August 20, 2004 17:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are cordially invited to the GRAND REOPENING of the best fanfiction site on the net! The site 'I Dare You' at Xanga will provide a challenge to all fanfiction writers and aspiring authors. I Dare You provides one 'dare' per month. That is to say, one situation that you must write about. Freedom is of course given and changes may be made according to each person's abilities. Since you were invited you are a special guest, please use this User Name if you reply. Being invited means that the judges thought you were good enough to get a high score and provide top notch entertainment. This is a great honor. The site is http://www.xanga.com/home.aspx?user=Dragons_Dream_of_Desolation
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Reviewed By: lilcraziazngurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 22:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the GREATEST stori ever!! I dunno how i can handle u finishin this stori up!! i mean its like THE GREATEST!! ITS THE GREATEST OF ALL GREATS!!! its just totally awesome!! im sooo HAPPY that fluffy and kagura, inu and kag, and miroku and sango made up!! YAY FOR YAL!! u know wut...this stori makes me want a bf!! i wonder why i dont have a bf.... *CraziAznGurl walks into a white room and beings to mumble to herself* lol! i cant wait to read more, but im gonna be SOOOO UPSET when its done!! oh well...ull have to start another totally awesome stori (which we all know u will!) keep on updatin! ^_^
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Reviewed By: AM On: August 15, 2004 11:56 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Only read up to chapter 26, I'll read the next one after this.) gasp Kagome's pregnant? Can't be. But then again, Kag being pregnant isn't an uncommon factor in stories. And I don't think I--or anyone else for that matter--can say this enough, but Kag and Inu can be so fricken stubborn. Can't wait to see what Inuyasha does to get Kagome to stay, if she does stay. NEWayz, very well written. Keep it up.
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Title: Yowza!
Reviewed By: Meggie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 01:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad I managed to find this story again. I had a terrible time searching for it on MediaMiner, and I couldn't find out if you had it posted anywhere else. I love the story in general and they way you used the characters. They fit so well into this world you've created for them. I'm look forward to the epilogue and alt. chapter. Heh, I kinda rated this fic like the Olympics. I couldn't find anything to take off points for! Great job! I loved it. =D
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