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Reviewed By: great job On: July 04, 2004 17:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your style of writing is fantastic. I've known English majors that are far less talented.
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Reviewed By: Demoness_Smut [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 16:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally found you on mm.org...I must review you I HAVE TO! You deserve it. Seriously this story is overwhelming.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 04, 2004 15:39 PDT
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That was one of the most well writen lemons I have read in a long time. While it certainly covered their exploits in detail it never lost the sense of the plot it was driven by and avoided the trap of simply becoming a scene of mindless sex. Excellent chapter, I look forwards to reading more. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 11:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woohu! i loved it. awesome job writing the lemon, i cant wait to see what happens next. update soon please!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 10:15 PDT
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wonderful lemon and excellent chapter!!
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Reviewed By: NetealiaFoxwood [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 23:26 PDT
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i love your story. i dare say it is one of the best i have ever read and i have read quite a few. i can't wait to read the remainder of your story so please update soon. ~foxy~
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 23:46 PDT
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u r truly a gifted riter & i look 4ward 2 future chapters. thanx in advance! ~*~Cat~*~
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 02, 2004 17:48 PDT
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Beautiful chapter. Love the way this continues to play out. Now the question that remains is will Inuyasha and Kagome stay together and will Sesshomaru and Kagura ever manage to sort themeselves out. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: omfg
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 12:41 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so good and the way u make all the chap.s long was good too!!! :-D keep up the good work oh and by the way where r they going on honymoon?? good job update soon i want to kno! ^_^
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 14:03 PDT
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yeay theyre married!!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 13:44 PDT
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aw inu is sooo cute proposing to her like that. sess n kagura r just idiots lol too damn stubborn. souta n rin together...now thats cute. ur awesome and this is such an original creative fic!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 02:27 PDT
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Caught up with the past three chapters. They were fantastic! It saddens me to know that you're ending it soon, since I have started reading it since there were only a couple chapters up. I hope you enjoy ending this story :)
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 22:55 PDT
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that chappy was GREAT!!!!!!!!!! i loved it!!!! plz update really really soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: SakuraBaby [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 22:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you for creating this story. Oh thank you oh great one! Please update soon
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Title: chap 6
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 18:29 PDT
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I LOVE THIS STORY!!
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