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Reviewed By: Kim20021990 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 13:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this chapter the day it was posted but I didn't have time to review so her it is. So bt the looks of it, I think Kagome is either pregnant or very sick but I'm thinkin' shes pregnant. Update soon,please.
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Reviewed By: tatsue-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 12:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I hope Kagome isn't with something serious, just pregnant. Can't wait to read the last chapter. Update soon!!
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: 1 Miroku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 13:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! Just read the last chapter but the funny thing was is that a read a review first and somebody said Kagome was pregnant and when I got to the part where she is sick i really thought she was. Well anyways everything I expected. Nothing less. Before I was sad that it was going to end but I think now that......well I am basically blown away at how good the whole story is and how well its all coming together. Your the best. You and Meche rock. Can't wait to see how things turn out. P.S. I think that Meche writing about who the story is not just about sex is 100% correct. If you plan on writing a book please let me Know! Your the best BYE!
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Reviewed By: moomoo On: July 29, 2004 19:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD awesome as always. I'll be sad to see it end v.v
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Bella =] On: July 29, 2004 17:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, girl!! I just want to say that your fanfic is really good. I don't think it was fair for you to be kicked out of FFNet. Your story didn't overdo any rating in my opinion. Actually, I think this happened because of envious authors that don't have the talent you do. I am 14 and don't think it's too much for me to read. Don't worry, because I'm sure that, even if you lost your account in FFNet, you didn't lose ANY readers. Congratulations for your great fanfic and don't let this get to you. You're SO much higher than that! ^ ^ Kisses, Bella
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Reviewed By: tuathafaerie(not logged in) On: July 29, 2004 04:24 PDT
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Wow, I haven't read this story in a while, due partly to the fact that I've been using a computer without internet for most of the time...:( But when I did come back, what a read! Very good! Your writing style never fails to impress me! I really liked the Sess/kagura moments (they're my favorite IY couple), and even though I knew it was coming, I still had a slight heart attack when Kagome found out. (Oh, the angst!) Please get your next chapter out as soon as possible! I'll make sure to keep checking! :)
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Reviewed By: pretty_in_punk On: July 28, 2004 18:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my friend told me about this fic and said it was one of the best she has ever read!! and i agree...the whole idea is just so original and ah! i just love it...my friend was like wouldnt it be so cool if inuyasha maybe placed an ad in a paper to get her back somehow...i was like that would be so cool and romantic but i'm sure whatever you do to finish this story up is gonna be way better than anything we could ever come up with!! keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: lilcraziazngurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 18:43 PDT
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hey....omg...when i found i out u were kicked off I WAS FURIOUS!! i was like wut in the bloody hell happened! all my reviews were gone, u werent on my fav authors or fav stories!! i was soo upset! but thank GOODNESS ur still on mediaminer! thanx kami-sama! awesome chappie....but extremely heartbreakin!! i wish kagome would just make up w/ everione. i know shes hurtin and everithin, but inuyasha doesnt want the money now...he wants kagome. and jiji-chan was just tryin to get the best for kagome. and miroku....he was just helpin...ahh...kagome..just forgive...plz!! welll, its gettin awesome and i CANT WAIT to read more!! so u know wut to do now! update update update!
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Reviewed By: Daedreamer On: July 28, 2004 18:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job! for a while there I thought you would stop writing! phew! so happy you continued! so... kagome's pregnant, no? anywhoo, this story rocks!
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Title: Darckinu
Reviewed By: darckinu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 14:08 PDT
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Hey love your story you got my atention since the first chap never wrotte a review but i think it's time for me to loet you knwo that you're doing great, well that's what a think!!! poor Kag and porr Inu hope you update soon, I like the way you writte you're a great author bye bye
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Reviewed By: dragonflyhuntress On: July 28, 2004 11:25 PDT
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I almost cried!!!! It was so sad!!!! Please tell me they're going to solve this??? Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! P.S. i HATE FF.NET
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Title: wow another fic just as good as all the others!!!
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (not loged in yet) On: July 27, 2004 23:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a finnal chapter nooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!! this can't be this fic is tooooooo good to end!!!!! ^_^ kee up the good work update when u can!!! X_x i hope InuYasha and Kagome make it all up!!
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Reviewed By: MutelyMe22 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 23:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooohhhh...good sotry can't wait to read when you update!
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Title: oh the drama...
Reviewed By: silvermoon maru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 21:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter, actually the whole story. This is so exciting and suspensefull, I bet she's pregnant. is she? I can't believe there is just 1 more chapter left... I'm really going to miss this story when you finish it. I'm so mad at ff.net for erased it... this story is really good, the feelings, the anguish, the love, the betrayal, the passion... wow... it's just amazing. Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: antisocial mint ( ) On: July 27, 2004 20:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what ~did~ he do to her?? is she gonna have a kid? or is it just bonding stuff? wiggy but a great chapter, the story just keeps getting deeper and deeper!
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