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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 27, 2004 16:14 PDT
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That seems to be happening a lot lately, I think that ff.net really need to work on their rating definitions. Excellent chapter. I think I have an idea about the final twist but I will say nothin g about it, have to wait till next time to find out if I'm right. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: kgirl333 On: July 27, 2004 13:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o i forgot to ask if you were going to sign back on ff.net but i don't think it'll really matter. (just checking) i can see that'd be using a bit of time... anyways i also forgot to mention in my review earlier that i'm guessing that kagome's pregnant? since her periods late, she's been meeting her breakfast, stressed out more then usual, and can't go to NY because of a 'health condition.' maybe inu was being too rough? lol i wonder what sessh and kagu are going to do to inu if kag tells them. dun dun dun! as long as they'll be back together, i'm going to be a very happy camper! i really can't wait for your next update!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 11:44 PDT
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Wow. Poor Kagome. She is pregnant isn't she? Why won't she just listen to Inu? I know she is hurt but she just keeps running away and won't give him the time of the day. Poor Inu. He was right to fear telling her the truth, she just won't listen. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze On: July 27, 2004 09:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fanfic; as a matter of fact, I've loved it ever since I read the first chapter! Could you please try reposting on ff.net? It's a pain never knowing when you update another chapter with Author Alerts and I've a limited time to spend online.
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Reviewed By: hanyou_gurl004 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 09:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter...Excellent story! I wonder though, is Kagome pregnant????? Keep up with the good work and please update soon... I have to know what happens....I can't beieve it is almost over! :(
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: July 27, 2004 09:07 PDT
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i was just thinkin bout this story the other nite and uvwe updated! i must have special powers lol i love this story to death. i'm so sad bout kagome!! shes pregnant isnt she? yep she has to be. oh n they must get together. i will jump into the story n kick her ass if she doesnt lol im so violent =P excuse my madness.
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Reviewed By: Esther Tan On: July 27, 2004 06:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wait !! Hold it right there!!! U can't split Inu & Kag up !! Where's the happy ending the love the happiness (wail wail not fair get them back together again PLEASE !!!!!!) Anyway thanks for the update. Scream bloody murder !!!Come on pretty please get Inu and Kag back together !!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 01:45 PDT
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Awesome chapter. I hope Kagome is going to be alright and will refuse the transfer :( Anyway, update soon and good luck! :D
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Reviewed By: deena151 On: July 26, 2004 23:52 PDT
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hey this is a really great chapter can't wait until you update again which i hope is soon keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: kgirl333 On: July 26, 2004 23:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o my that was a very sad chapter! i feel really bad for kag and inu since both sides are kind of... well anyways... it was an awsome chapter an it's no big deal that you took a little longer to update. you still have your good quality writing which i wouldn't mind to wait to read. besides.. it quicker then most of my favorite stories's updates, so i'm happy. you've written yet another awsome chapter with good details to show the expressions of how the characters feel and act. especialy making the readers have some type of emotion to the writing. well keep up the good work, i can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: Trillian42 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 23:42 PDT
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Honey, your fans didn't complain~ some jerk is on a witch-hunt over there. Busstop Fairytale is gone, too. Sorry you had to lose all your reviews, not to mention your account. I agree, they should e-mail you before they yank you. Anyway, I love this story, except for this last chapter, of course. I do hope you will fix this! There will be a happy ending, right?
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Reviewed By: Trillian42 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 23:41 PDT
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Honey, your fans didn't complain~ some jerk is on a witch-hunt over there. Busstop Fairytale is gone, too. Sorry you had to lose all your reviews, not to mention your account. I agree, they should e-mail you before they yank you. Anyway, I love this story, except for this last chapter, of course. I do hope you will fix this! There will be a happy ending, right?
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Reviewed By: ?_? On: July 26, 2004 22:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
rawrrrr that was sexy. I hope u can update soon!
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Reviewed By: Demoness_Smut [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 20:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god..come on Kagome...just think about this...Sit and think...Stop reacting and just think girl....I CAN'T BELIEVE FF.NET GOT TO YOU TO.!...They're going to get everyone soon!!!..I know it...they are going to get every single last rated R person on ff.net.
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Reviewed By: SakuraWolf26 On: July 26, 2004 20:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this was really great.I wonder..Maybe she is preg...She is showing some of the signs but if she is the way she is acting towards her body will be bad for the kid..Anyway I hope you update this soon..Maybe you could make a new account on ff.net under a new name and work your way up to getting your reviews back
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