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Reviewed By: cha cha On: June 22, 2004 22:12 PDT
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damn...
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 21:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I WANTED A LEMON AND THAT WAS NOT GOOD ENOUGH
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 21:05 PDT
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This story is GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!! plz don't let her just fInuyasha like that....plz let him wait and they just talk!!!!!!!! Plz update REALLY REALLY SOON!!!!!! I wanna know what happens : )
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme. On: June 20, 2004 02:11 PDT
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Finally got around to reading the three most recent chapters. Very nice job, hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 19, 2004 16:11 PDT
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Ah! So you've been reading that one too, I have to agree it is another excellent story. Excellent chapter. Kagura finally finding ou the truth, Sango and Miroku getting caught and Kagome going to Inuyasha to love herself in the pleasures of the flesh...can't wait to see how all the cliffhangers play out. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: ME On: June 19, 2004 14:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!!!!! Awesome cliffhanger!!!! Now you've got me totally anxious, waiting for the next chapter--cuz I KNOW it's going to be SO good!! ^_~ yes, I freely admit it--I'm a hentai at heart and I just love it!!!! yes!! yes!! please update soon!!! God! your story is SO addicting and SO good!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 13:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! I love your story!! Please update really soon. Cliff hangers are evil! Keep up the great writing.
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Reviewed By: antisocial mint (nli) On: June 19, 2004 12:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! wow. hojo is gay...i kinda suspected that. her li-chan is too meddlesome but alls good ur a great author i love all the twists and how everthing is coming together!
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Reviewed By: Roane On: June 19, 2004 10:42 PDT
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Yay! Lots of posts! You had me fooled about Hojo with the guy in drag, though. :( I didn't spot it earlier. I'm glad Kagura and Sesshoumaru's relationship has changed from the "he said" "she said" stage, though what will Kagura say when she recovers? That will be something to hear! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Kylinn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 08:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've only recently learned of your fic, and spent the entire time yesterday reading it. You have an excellent way of creating situations and dialogue to really show the reader the true interactions between the characters. You've got a masterful grip of humor and how to incorporate it within both humorous and serious situations. The plotline is very engaging - with enough twists to keep the story's subplots interesting (making Souta Rin's boyfriend added a great and unexpected element to the story! Not to mention the entire Sesshoumaru/Kagura/Kanna triangle). And it's very original, even for an AU :) I think I only noticed about 4 or 5 spelling errors in the entire thing - which is just awesome - and I didn't notice any grammer problems at all. Readers can certainly tell how much you enjoy writing this story by how well-written it is - thank you for sharing it with us!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 18, 2004 05:04 PDT
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Excellent chapter! Love the way you are developing both relationships together. Inuyasha and Kagome and Sesshomaru and Kagura. The only question now is what the heck was that potion and what side effects will it have... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: InuyashaGirl2610 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 23:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! I only started reading it a few hours ago and I just couldn't stop until I read it all. Great job, update again soon!
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Reviewed By: inu_fan (not signed in) On: June 17, 2004 22:31 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* I just LOVE this story. Thanks for the double update!
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Title: UpDaTe!!!
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness (not logged in) On: June 17, 2004 18:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chappie. *dun dun dun* Inu-chan and Kagome got caught in the act, eh? *shakes head* Amateurs...Heehee. The story is progressing really nicely. Ooh, can you put more Inu/Kag fluff in the story. I like fluff...lotsa.^__^ Update soon! ~Psycho Demoness~(^..^)-meow
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 17, 2004 14:25 PDT
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Excellent chapter! Not quite sure what Kagome's granfather was on about...seems lie there is more going on thean we have been told... Seems that all the couples are starting to get closer, eben Kagura and Sesshomaru seem to have less of an edge between them... Till next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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