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Reviewed By: Fireminx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 13:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really amusing, great idea too. I like how Kagome and Inuyasha fight without actually getting to the point of not listening to each other. That provides more amusement than just random yelling and endless pages of reflection. Hope you are having as much fun writing it as I am reading it.
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Reviewed By: gigglegirl On: April 10, 2004 22:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I LOVE this story. CONTINUE WRITING PLEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 07, 2004 17:03 PDT
Comment/Review:
That was excellent! Really good second chapter! I can already tell I am going to enjoy this alot! Sorry about the presentation, hope the next try goes better for you! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess(not logged on) On: April 07, 2004 13:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! original! i like it! i will look for new chapters so update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Khaoticfolks [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 10:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is excellent so far. I'm loving where this plot is going. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Tsuki no Oni-chan On: April 06, 2004 16:38 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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so...when does Inu respond? ^_~ I love it, write more please!
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