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Reviewed By: JessieCat On: July 13, 2004 17:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry to say that I am only looking you up on this site for the Lemon-Limes. Usually I stay on FF.net, but I 'm a big hentai so I looked you up again. Love the story.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 13, 2004 15:58 PDT
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Excellent chapter! Oh dear...Inuyasha should not have said that. Somehow I don't think Kagome is going to be happy with either of them despite the fact she loves Inuyasha. Wonder what she'll do... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: update!! ^_^
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 12:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay yay yay this story is to good to be almost over!!!! -_-;; keep up the good work !! update soon please?
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: July 13, 2004 11:04 PDT
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nice update. =)
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 01:53 PDT
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Awesome chapter. Hope you update soon. It's a bummer that the story is ending in no time at all :(
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Reviewed By: NetealiaFoxwood1 On: July 12, 2004 21:44 PDT
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Wow... does kagome shut them out now that she knows what is going on? and is the peace finaly been put into its right places with sess and kagura? well any way always love and admire how well you do at your writing, keep up the good work and update soon. ~foxy~
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 21:43 PDT
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Damn. The kuso has now hit the fan. Well Inu better crawl on his knees and beg forgiveness, and reiterate that he really loves her. Cause this is going to get messy fast. Love the story. Though I am going to miss it, it has had its good run. Time to close it down. I can't wait til I see what new story you got planned. Keep up the excellente work.
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Reviewed By: Nekofluffylover(2 lazy to log in) On: July 12, 2004 21:26 PDT
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holy crap that was soooooooo good. plz update soon, pretty please. lol
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Reviewed By: antisocial mint ( ) On: July 12, 2004 21:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grrreat...so she finally finds out? good. she should know. nice chap please do an epilogue!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: July 12, 2004 21:14 PDT
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aw ill miss it i really love this story!
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Reviewed By: sunshine07 On: July 12, 2004 19:53 PDT
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i love this story!!!!! plz don't let kagome be mad at inuyasha and leave him.......she can be with her grandpa but not inuyasha!!!!!!! plz update soon!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Writer
Reviewed By: Bree Kozak On: July 12, 2004 01:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Fuck, this was the best fan fic I've ever read! I've never read more amazing lemons...I was throbbing myself! I still have one more chapter to read, but hell... this is the most addictive and well written fan fic I've ever read!
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Reviewed By: JessieCat On: July 11, 2004 14:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I reviewed your story on FanFiction.net. You said that the full lemon was here and i'm a hentai so I found it and read it. Your right though. if you had posted that lemon on ff.net,they would have deleted your story. i don't see why they are so strict, but to each his own as Shesshomaru put it.=) Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: pheonia On: July 10, 2004 08:22 PDT
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Happy birthday!! (mines on the same day !!) I'm 18 ^^
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Title: inu's butterfly
Reviewed By: deedee On: July 08, 2004 23:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that I was the only hentai out there. I really enjoyed the story. It only took me a day to finish what you have so far.I like the way you put it in to a makeshift soap opera. keep up dating. for now I will not Flame you for your writing just don't disappoint me.I reconmend that you read when he was mine on AFF.net by Maggz. you can email me at inuyashas_butterfly@ yahoo.com or dede_121@hotmail.com. for now see ya p.s HAPPY BIRTHDAY
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