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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: smittin kittin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 14:37 PDT
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How much do I love this story! Does Kag know nothing of dog demons? When she told Inu she was his did she not understand how possesive he would get? I love the chemetry between both couples! Can't wait to see if S/K can get over the past & work the kinks out of their relationship! I hope Ses. doesn't do any perminant damage to Kags brother! As always looking forward to the next chap. Thanks for posting such a fab fic! Hugs & Kisses!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 31, 2004 16:20 PDT
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Excellent chapter! Interesting how that simple action seems to have drawn Sesshomaru and Kagura together...almost. I hope Kagome and Inuyasha don't go too far...although one could say that kagome has it all in hand...oh and no, I'm not explaining that one ^_^ Till next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme (too lazy to log in) On: May 30, 2004 15:06 PDT
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Awesome chapter. Hope you update again soon ^^
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Reviewed By: Roane On: May 28, 2004 05:03 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story! The main story line is original, but the subplots are my favorite. They keep the action going along even if the main couple hits a road block. Hope for more!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 19:41 PDT
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Hi! I like your story but what happened to your writing style in this last chapter? There was no punctuation and it was hard to follow. Please go back to the way you were writing before. Thanks and update soon.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 27, 2004 17:13 PDT
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Excellent chapter. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: kawaii fun
Reviewed By: BritneyKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 15:57 PDT
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Hey i really liked this.Very cute photos.whats up with the no punctuation?(sp?)please update soon
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 04:21 PDT
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Wow. Great chapter. So Hojo was stepping out on Kagome. I personally thought he was gay. Maybe he is a sadist? What was with the way he hurt Kagome? Bastard... If she swore him off not to touch it is time to dump him... How else did she expect to get married and have kids? Anyways great chapter. I pray that Souta will live while dating Rin. Though it would be weird if they hooked and Kagome and Inuyasha got married. I mean his bother-in-law is dating his niece. Ouch Jerry Springer time. lol Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: E. Marie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 17:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm very glad you posted, and it is nice to know that you are going to resume updating in regular intervals. (Once a week sounds nice, so you won't be spoiling us :-). As for the number of chapters in this story...I can understand how writing fifty chapters on the same fanfiction would get to be insanely tedious, but this is a great story, and I hate to see the overall plot suffer because of leaps in time. Just do what you feel is best, this is all your creative vision, afterall, and I'm sure we, the readers/reviewers, won't feel slighted if you nudge Inuyasha and Kagome to the altar a little quicker. Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 22, 2004 17:41 PDT
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First of all allow me to say congratulations on completing your thesis and graduating. I can tell you now...it all goes downhill from here... But seriously I do miss college but work isn't that bad when you get used to it. Excellent chapter, really enjoyed it. Don't worry about the updates, not fair to expect you to be able to with so much going on. I only look forwards to reading them when you get chance to write. In fact I'm half tempted to head over to FF.Net and continue reading this there but I started reading it on this one so here it will stay. Plus I have you on favorite authors here so this is where I get the alerts from... Sorry, rambling again. I do that alot don't I? Till next time good luck & best wishes, hope the inevitable job hunt goes well. Hououza
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Reviewed By: Malific [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 05:24 PDT
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Great to see you back, and nice to know you'll be updating regularly again. But more importantly!! Don't try to cut a story short just because you want it to be under X amount of chapters. If you have chapeters to write, write them, no reader minds a story that doesn't end, so long as it stays interesting.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 01:56 PDT
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Awesome chapter. I don't mind the lack in updates. They usually don't seem to bother me as long as they don't sit there... collecting dust XD
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Reviewed By: E. Marie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 14:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since this is my first review, my comments may seem a little random, but bear with me. I started reading at chapter one, and before I knew it, the thought of stopping to review from chapters one through eleven was out the window, I just had to know what happened. Thus, you get one mass review for everything, haha. Anyway, I had a sinking suspicion I would like this story, just from reading the extended synopsis. I love the whole movie preview style you give to your summaries, using that fail-proof formula of booming narrator voice and catchy dialogue to hook the audience, er, reader. I'm a fan of "onion" stories, the kind that have storylines running in different layers, (kind of a corny thought, but it works), and you've made me a happy reader indeed, with so many different objectives floating around. Keep up the good work, and update soon!
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Reviewed By: crAzibuNNi On: May 11, 2004 18:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! *falls of chair leg twitches* tht was soo amazing!! i wonder what inu will do now that he is all demon? please update soon before i rip all my hair out for waiting to long *gid smile* ^___^ Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: thoughts On: May 10, 2004 12:22 PDT
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What a wonderful light hearted story. I'm really enjoying reading it. I like Inuyasha's frustrations, Kagome's innocence and Souta's cheek. :)
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