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Title: Awesome story!
Reviewed By: Chelle82 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2020 16:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though I am late reading this story, I am still glad that I
have! It is definitely a good story to read and I even got some
inspiring words from it too. Even though the cab driver was the one
who shared the wisdom.
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Reviewed By: parisadaja [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2010 13:51 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is so good!i luved it!
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Reviewed By: trackstr88 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2010 18:56 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.. really liked this story alot! haven't read fanfics in quite awhile but this story reminds me of why i fell in love with them a few years back! love the story hope you continue to write..
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Reviewed By: Homicide619 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2009 01:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I stopped reading fanfics awhile back because i couldnt find any good ones after rockstar, here on mm.org and she never finished it. Then i found through the rose colored lens and then this story the ad. Wow, you are such a great writer, i can honestly say that this is one of my favorite stories, and it sucks that i found out about you 4 years too late. Heres hoping you read this review and everything is going great for you...
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Title: From ChaosHat
Reviewed By: Auraki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 22:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congratulations, you've been rec'd! Your story has been chosen for the Weekly Recommendations and poll at The Readers Have Chosen (link below). Visit RHC's forum and join the growing community of authors and readers dedicated to good fanfiction! Thank you for sharing your work with us. ChaosHat & the community at The Readers Have Chosen site (without spaces): thereadershavechosen . eternflame . com / weeklyrecs . html # SDK
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Title: Quite the Story
Reviewed By: YouGotItFromSteve [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 12:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not quite the best fanfic ever, but its pretty close. I love this story, it's way too funny for me to read this and keep a straight face... sometimes I think my friends look at me funny now.
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Reviewed By: scintilla juris [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 23:35 PST
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i love it...love your story..the drama, the comedy..all of it actually.. i don't know about the others hating the lemon parts..but i mean..it's part of the story...and i absolutely adored it..hahaha.. i've actually read it the summer of last year..sorry it took me a while to write a review..i recommended it to my friends and they loved it.. this story has already been one of my favorites....
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Reviewed By: Ice_Sick_El [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 10:07 PST
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I loved it~! personal opinion I like the alternate ending more... but both were good!
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Reviewed By: Princess Bulma [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 23:26 PDT
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hey hun love the story but there is one thing i think you should know Polycystic Ovary Syndrome the abrivation is POS. trust me my dr thinks i have that.
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Title: LOVED IT!!!
Reviewed By: Sango 45 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 21:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED THIS STORY!! I felt like I was there, sharing their feelings. Very descriptive. Few spelling/grammatical errors. Original plot too. All in all it was a great read. ^^; ps. Chapter 27 was better than the alternate ending. You made a good choice picking that version instead of the alternate ending. Kudos ~sango45
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 15:38 PST
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Chapter Nine: Unfortunately... I understand neither shoe shopping nor car shopping. Or shoes and cars in general... Anyway, your story is brilliant and awesome and brilliant and gorgeous and beautiticious and brilliant and... brilliant. I love it!
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Reviewed By: luvofanhanyouandmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 13:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this!! i think its one of my tops for mm.org!! your a great writer so please try to keep writting ill be looking for any new ones you put out and this one will definatly be favourited hehe lol bad speller....any way ja ne!!
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Reviewed By: Cherrysinger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 13:21 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I didn't read the lemony parts, which was a lot, but this story I have to say was really good..the ending, though, lacked that certain pizaz (sp? can't spell) that I absolutely need in a story. It gave a lukewarm feeling, but not that explosive 'WOW!' feeling...not necessarily a bad thing, but I look for that feeling in a story. I mean, after all they went through together they're all of a sudden together, you need their happiness and love explode through to the stars. And I think you understood this and attempted to do so, but I think there's a difference between going through the motion of doing it then actually reaching out to the readers and grabbing them with the emotion, letting them share everything. Oh, you did that just fine the rest of the story, so I was quite surprised the ending lacked that, because you're fairly good at it. I guess you didn't know what to do with yourself now that you finally got there? Lol. Don't worry, happens to the best of the best. And what's your penname in ff.net? I'm originally from there and I haven't seen this story around, and I'm curious. That place is a much larger community than mediaminer anyway, so it makes sense you'd get more reviews...but this is an awesome story.
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 19:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
unbeleivable story!! I looved it and it had such a cute ending!! Yay!! Write more stories mooooore!! Yay!
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Reviewed By: Inukag_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 11:49 PDT
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ok...AWESOME STORY!!! I looooved the plot it was GREAT!!! I just started reading ur stuff. I read through rose colored lenses a while ago and I just read this one...something tells me im gonna read em all :D:D Love, IK Obsession
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