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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 23:13 CST
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this chapter is so sad. it's really weird seeing that side of Hiei, a side most of us probably wouldn't even think he possessed. it kind of hurts to read about him being that way but at least Kurama can help him heal. hopefully he won't stay that way for long. and hopefully once he heals, he & Kurama can get their revenge on Intaro. very nice fic! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow great chapter!hope you update soon!can't wait to see what happens next
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Reviewed By: KitsuneSilver [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww. Poor Hiei, all disabled and needing to be tended to like that. I dunno, this chapter is a little weird, but the "It's a demon thing" line was definitely cute. Overall, I liked it. Plus it's an update, which is always a good thing.
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Reviewed By: Hana_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 21:46 CST
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YOU ARE MEAN!!! MEAN MEAN MEAN MEAM MEAN!!!! Poor Hiei....but you UPDATED!!!! *dances* YAY YAY YAY!!! Now do it again!!!
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Reviewed By: Candy? On: February 03, 2005 16:58 CST
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How long has it been since you've updated again? I forgot.... It seems like forever but I know it can't have been that long.... Urgh....I need to be more patient....
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Reviewed By: sisko66002 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 14:56 CST
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Love it, but please make Hiei recover fully soon. The mere thought of him not being fully recovered in the end strikes terror in my heart.
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Reviewed By: Candy? On: January 27, 2005 19:00 CST
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I read this chapter over and over again and it's TORTURE....update soon....pleeeeeeeaaaaaaaase....I'm prepared for begging and if authorized may go as high as groveling....
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Reviewed By: KitsuneSilver [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 20:21 CST
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Intaro is such a bastard! (Sorry, but I had to say it, for my own benefit.) I sincerely hope Hiei recovers some of his pride and Kurama gets at least a few moment's rest from all the turmoil and whatnot Hiei has been going through.Does that make a whole lot of sense? Er. Sort of. ^.^ Can't wait for more. Great job, despite some typos and grammar errors.
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Reviewed By: Aiden [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 23:26 CST
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That is so sweet how Kurama takes care of Hiei. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 18:39 CST
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Continue soon, i think this chapter was one of my favorites
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 23:49 CST
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nice chapter, though it did seem to be a sort of filler. the residual effects of all of those wards were amazing. it's a good thing youko's aren't shy, b/c then Hiei would have some problems. now i'm wondering if Kurama will go after Intaro himself. foxes are pretty possessive so i could see that happening. i wonder....... well, anyway, can't wait for the next chapter. update soon!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 19:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Important lessons in trust and love are beautifully demonstrated -- thank you! Once again, all characters were wonderfully in character and the chapter full of lovely touches (Yusuke's concern for Kurama, Kurama's den, Genkai's softer voice, Yukina's love and determination). I hope the writing bug strikes soon, so we can have more.
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Reviewed By: Sikandra On: January 22, 2005 16:19 CST
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Oh, poor hiei!!! make him get better soon, okay?!?!?! anywayz, great chapter, and update this and Bugs soon!
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Reviewed By: Candy? On: January 22, 2005 10:59 CST
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*gasp* You so mean to Hiei!!! But at least you didn't kill him, or you would have one very angry reader!!! Now, please update....and make Hiei get better soon!!! PLEEEEEAAAAAAASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 10:13 CST
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Aw! You do have a soft heart! I thought that maybe you just like to cause poor little Hiei and Kurama pain, but you proved me wrong. I like this chapter the most. More than any of the others!
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