| "Coming Clean" Reviews/Comments [ 232 ] |
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Reviewed By: KitsuneSilver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 22:32 CDT
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Aiiiii, I feel stupid! I actually reviewed that exact story and called Smartstar "mhmartini," and he asked me if I was crazy. I should have known it wasn't you, I didn't recognize any of his other works...
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 22:29 CDT
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That's sick!, you're such a good writer and then someone steals your fic!. I'm going to e-mail someone about this (not a flame). im rather upset that this happened. I'd say continue soon, but actually I'd rather it didn't get stolen, so keep up the fight and update when this is finished
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Reviewed By: Youko Starr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 21:46 CDT
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I figured it was going to be some connection like that with Karasu. I was leaning towards it being more like jealousy that he wasnt the one to kill him, but I'm glad I was close to it! Gosh there's a lot for me to read, I didn't realize there were so many updates since I stopped. Great stuff to far.
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Reviewed By: Youko Starr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 20:53 CDT
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Oh.. you are entirely right about her attending the dark tournament in the manga. she was more involved in it then the anime. She was just one of those things that got lost in the shift from paperback to cartoon I guess and not interesting enough for them to draw more than a few times. I have the manga, was a bit surprised to see her there.
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Title: update update update!!!!!
Reviewed By: sueb262 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In the last 2 days, I've just speed-read through all the chapters so far. NEED UPDATES NEED UPDATES NEED UPDATES!!! I'm worried that, since the last chapter was posted well over 7 weeks ago (!!!!) you have given up or run dry or something equally disastrous. This is an enthralling story, and I would hate having it just stop where it is!
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Reviewed By: Ruri_Star [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 13:14 CST
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up date soon!
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Reviewed By: Candy? On: March 24, 2005 19:02 CST
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Okay now I KNOW I'm driving you insane because this is like the zillionth time I've reviewed you but.... I'M GOING CRAZY WITH WORRY OVER WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN TO HIEI SO PLEEEAAAAASE UPDATE SOON!!!! *cries* I wanna find out if my Hi-chan gets better or not!!!
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Reviewed By: Candy? On: February 26, 2005 01:53 CST
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I can't decide how I feel about this story....obviously, I love it, but I hate having to wait for updates!!! I'm not a very patient person....URGH!!! Waiting is not my strong point....
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Title: Coming Clean
Reviewed By: Tsukiko Kirei [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonder fic so far. I just started reading it and I was hooked. I'm glad that both have problems with the enemy not just one of them. If that makes sense. Can't wait for the next update. Huggles
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Reviewed By: raindrops On: February 16, 2005 18:43 CST
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aie! poor hiei-san!! aw but kura-san is soo cute and sweet and awesome! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 13:59 CST
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Aww! I can't get enough of this story, I'm so anxious to see how it ends!! Hurry up and finish this and Bugs too!!
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Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 13:24 CST
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Woah dark really dark.Awsome!I love dark things!Like Hiei, But I'm still pissed (excuse my french) at you for hurting Hiei!Poor Hiei
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't like, what's not to like? As a caregiver for a severely disabled adult, I think you hit the panic notes of Hiei (yes, even Hiei given what he has been through, and the fact that Intaro has struck at Hiei's weakest point -- his determination to be strong and self-sufficient), the loving determination of Kurama, and the comments of Shiori, all perfectly. Yet again, another wonderful chapter with forced learning for our favorite pair. Intaro's astute cruelty to Hiei, and through him to Kurama, makes me worry about what will happen should he manage to capture Kurama again. I hope you can return soon.
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Reviewed By: Sikandra On: February 14, 2005 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay, so they won't show the newest chap, so i have to review this one again...anyway, great chapter, as usual, but i hope poor hiei gets better soon...*shakes you hard* WHEN WILL HE GET BETTER, MARTINI?!?!? LOL
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 10:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue soon. Maybe Hiei's Jagan will heal faster, and he can use that sense to 'see' Kurama
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