| "Coming Clean" Reviews/Comments [ 232 ] |
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Reviewed By: KitsuneSilver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 14:48 CDT
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That's so peculiar. About the spellchecker, I mean. Anyway, this chapter was so sad I nearly stopped reading. But that didn't seem very reasonable, so then I went back and finished it, and now I'm sad, but in a good mood. If that makes any sense. Which I don't think it does. ^.^
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Title: Candy?
Reviewed By: Hana_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 13:18 CDT
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YOU UPDATED!!!! *does happy dance* So does that mean the problem with that jerk at animespiral has been resolved? Poor Kurama!!! And Hiei!!! Please tell me something GOOD happens soon....I can't stand any more bad news.... Anyhow, great chapter! Update soon, please!
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Reviewed By: raindrops On: April 23, 2005 13:15 CDT
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yea! another chapter!! well, 2 really! so happy! i wish i had the brain power to update my own stories that quickly. can't wait to see what happens next. but poor kurama, can't even imagine what hell he feels. T.T i wanna hug him. ah well. next adventure, the shopping! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 11:32 CDT
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Yay! Another wonderful chapter as always!! I just wonder if Kurama will be able to make it through all this, ya know, helping Hiei get better and such. I also wonder how long it'll take before Hiei's eye sight comes back.
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Reviewed By: Forbidden kitsune (not logged in) On: April 22, 2005 18:53 CDT
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Yeah horay! you up dated! i love it. though i do believe at the moment you are only letting us readers know how deeply both Hiei and kurama are hurt by the incident. I know that it's curical that we understand that, though i don't think this should be done by just talking. ... Hehe, constructive critisim always sounds so negitve to me. I always like to here good things about my writing. ... So.... Ilove it! it's a wonderful story with a very good plot. I love the way you keep the characters all IN character, though you are still showing a new side to them, espically Hiei, i think you are doing a very good job in showing how he would handle a situation like this. As i said I LOVE IT. please update soon, and if you want, you can e-mail me. I did find one or two little type-o grammer mistakes, though that's nothing to be ashamed of. You should see my writing before i edit it.. i misspell names and once i spelled Kurama, "Kyara" where the hell that came from i don't know. But again Please up date. it's very good and where you stopped is just enough of a cliff hanger to make me want to keep reading, though i'm not going to seriously be hurt if i don't read it within the next min.... but after two i'm gonna keel over and die! Please update. i should stop repeating myself. anyway, very good, and i would absolutely LOVE to see more. ja na Forbidden kitsune
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Reviewed By: Shadow Jaganshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 17:50 CDT
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I'm sorry to hear about that loser who stole this story, but I'm glad you got it all worked out. I understand why you got so mad (if anybody stole my work, I wouldn't be surprised it lightning struck them where they stood the second I found out...) Anyways, the point is, I love this story, and your other stories too. ^_^ I can't wait to see what happens to poor little Hiei...
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Reviewed By: yaoikitten [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 22:01 CDT
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i write my own stories and i know i would be rather pissed if someone took my work without asking... and this was a wonderful chapter.. kurama keeps getting sick... poor them.. its so sad.. but so delightful at the same time... im so messed up...
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Reviewed By: KitsuneSilver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's so perfectly depressing… I like it very much. I still feel bad for not alerting you when I first saw that other guy post "Coming Clean" at AnimeSpiral or wherever it was…and I know you'll probably tell me to shut up and go away, but lemme know if there's anything I can do to make it up to you. Write a story or draw a picture or shut up and go away or something. ^.~
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurray, you're back! You have been greatly missed. You're one of my favorite authors, and this is one of my favorite stories. I'm sorry you had to deal with a plagarizer. Yet another wonderful chapter, with such an ominous development. I hope you will be able to return quickly, and let us know what is happening to Kurama.
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 23:18 CDT
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i can't believe that! this is a wonderful story & i can see why someone would want to steal it. but to actually do it! that's not cool! hope you get this resolved so you can update.
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Reviewed By: yaoikitten [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 17:04 CDT
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-will wait- durn people for stealing storys well i hope they relize just how wrogn it is soon and you get to post the new part soon but i do aprove of not posting anymore parts if they cant writeit themselves you shouldnt post anymore parts for them to mooch off of ^_^
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Reviewed By: yaoikitten [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 15:51 CDT
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hello again ^_^ ive gotten to 21 now WOO FOR WORKING INTERNET! ...-pouts- poor hiei but its ok i know kurama wil save him cause there love is unbreakable ^_^ ..god i sound like a dork.. or and i shall give you credit on your lemon it was very good
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Reviewed By: yaoikitten [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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LA LI HO! ^_^ very good story... unfortunalyl ive only gotten to part 15 because my internet is throwing a fit... -sigh- but its good as far ^_^ very good continue with your writing you have a talent so use it ^_~
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Reviewed By: Sikandra On: April 17, 2005 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok NOW i'm just mad! i looked coming clean up on animespiral and I AM SO MAD! i understand why you are. i HATE people who steal fics...if you can't be original on your own, then ASK SOMEONE MORE CREATIVE FOR HELP AND GIVE THEM THEIR DUE CREDIT!!! idiots...anyway, i understand why you're angry and i understand why you aren't updating now. i hope this gets resolved soon, because this story rocks and i wanna read more. i anxiously await new chapters! (but i can wait. it's definitely worth the wait every time and it's best not to give this gal any more than she's already got.) i think i'm gonna go make a smartstar voodoo doll and rip it into small pieces of confetti now...that'll keep me busy for a while...
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Reviewed By: forbidden kitsune (not logged in) On: April 17, 2005 12:26 CDT
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I would like to make a small confession, though i fear what it will do to your story.. in order to read the wonderful fanfics that i would like to read, i must copy them and paste them into word so i can read them. let it be known i delete them as soon as i am done reading, and i do not make copies. it is only that i have limited access to a computer with the internet, but i still love to read fanficion. I apologize for doing this. If you have a problem with me doing this i will stop and find another way to read your fanfiction. ..... on that happy note... please write more. it is a wonderful fic, and you do need to keep writing. as a writer myself i understand your concern about people takeing your work. it's people like that who put a bad name to authors. i love your story, please update soon. ja forbidden kitsune
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