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Reviewed By: raindropsRteardrops (too lazy to log in) On: September 08, 2005 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow another WONDERFUL chapter! soo i didn't update the past couple chapters, but for some reason MM didn't send me the notifications... wierd, ne? but anyway i got the notice for chp 34 and i read the others and ... and... and i cried!!! my family was giving me funny looks at the dinner table as i explained in an incoherent voice to oneechan pieces of your story (not the gruesome details just the fact he had been kidnapped and died and ect.) but but but!!! HE DIED!! but then kept reading and he was AAAAAALLL better!... well kinda... lying in a hospital "looking like road kill with IV tubes" but but but at least he is alive... i hate you and love you at the same time... but i love your writing stlye its just... AWESOME!!! i am usually not one for hiei/kurama pairings but you definately are... i dont know excatly what the hell i'm trying to say, but basically i am calling you one of the best writers i have ever read for. (that includes books i have read too).... this was a really long review but please forgive me, i cant wait for the next two chapters!!!
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 06, 2005 21:13 CDT
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i loved these chapters. they were so great. please add more to this story soon. ** you are not evil eny more you did not kill kurama.**
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Reviewed By: Sikandra On: September 06, 2005 19:13 CDT
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Once again, PERFECT! 10s all across the board! Soooooo saaaaaaaad! *chibi tears* Finish soon, yesh? So I can be happy? And give you much plushiness, hugs, and cookies?
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Reviewed By: Sikandra On: September 06, 2005 19:07 CDT
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OH...MY...GOD! That was INCREDIBLE! Terrific! And many other glowing descriptions! *hugs you and hands you Hiei and Kurama plushies galore* Now, OFF TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 17:57 CDT
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wow. that was possibly the longest chapter you've ever written. and that's saying something because all of your chapters are extremely long. nice job, though. i liked what happened in the story, but i wasn't too overjoyed by how you wrote it. it seemed more like you were just telling the story than actually participating in it like all the other chapters seemed. it was like you were detached in this chapter, as if it lacked feeling and emotion. it was still a nice chapter, though. and i can't wait until you update again. i can't believe it's almost the end!!! so sad!
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 16:15 CDT
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Continue soon! I liked the chapter...not the torture Kurama leave him to flicker on the fence of life and death, but i liked the action and emotion in the scenes. So yay, great chapter(s) and continue soon!
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Reviewed By: ShadowJaganshi On: September 06, 2005 15:54 CDT
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Ah, the joys of writing at 5 AM. I've done that. My stories get really mental and weird at 5 AM... huh. Well anyways, another great chapter... I'm so happy everything worked out okay! *sniffles melodramatically* Hugs for everyone! Yeah, me and my constructive criticism. Two of my teachers this year have mentioned teaching us to be more 'critical' and such, so maybe my reviews will be more useful by the end of the school year... But you'll be done with this story long before that. Aww... I don't want it to end... I LOVE this story! And I want to see how it goes from "this" to "fluffy"... And... yeah. So, this chapter was hardly as emotional as the last couple, and I didn't have to take breaks to keep from crying, which is good. Now. I love your story and you for writing it... Update when you can, no rush. I'll be happy no matter when you update... Ya. Ja mata, now... ~SJ
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Reviewed By: Candy? On: September 06, 2005 15:48 CDT
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*glomps you and squeezes you until you run out of oxygen and die* EEP! Sorry! *revives you and glomps you again* I MISSED YOU!!! Okay, so either my computer is EVIL and isn't sending me alerts or you really haven't updated since July. Which is it? Because I haven't read any of your updates for two months and if it's my computer's fault I'll kill the stupid, worthless piece of junk. But I got to read four new chapters in a row today so I'm happy. Anyway, I love everything you've written but I really feel I must object to the fox torture. When I read the last three chapters I cried....and cried....and cried some more. And you know what I did then? I CRIED!!! *points at you* I accuse you of killing Kurama. *takes out a sheet of paper* You are required to appear in court and give an explanation for your actions. Because in case you didn't notice, YOU KILLED KURAMA!!! But I know you'll bring him back so all is well. LOL. Sorry, I'm really hyper today. I dunno why, because I hardly slept last night and I have a pile of work a mile high, but your updates--even the sad, depressing, fox torturing ones--make me happy. But I should probably go work now, so I'll wrap it up. I love everything you've written so far, and I can't wait to read the end of the story. Update really soon, okay? I'll be waiting on pins and needles to find out what happens to the foxiest fox there ever was! LOL. Bye! ^_^
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Title: Good job.
Reviewed By: mizthang222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 01:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You almost made me cry.I had tears in my eyes even.Saying this to you is the highest compliment I can give you.Not a lot of things do that to me.Write when you need to.That took a lot out of me just reading.Great job.
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 03:11 CDT
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(sobbing) oh my gosh. i hate you, but i love you! you are so amazing. that torture was so much. i don't know how you even managed to write it down. and so eloquently, too. now, while it did hurt me to read, i have to give you your due: the mood and tone were wonderful. you made me feel as if i was there, watching poor Kurama suffer. and, oh my gosh, when Hiei saw him. that was so sad! he actually cried in front of everyone. that alone was proof of his distress. but why is it always because of Koenma that someone gets hurt? he may have done it for the greater good, but he had no idea what Kurama was forced to endure. you are such an amazing author. you really are. words can't describe how much i enjoyed these last three chapters, especially. let alone the whole story! your writing is descriptive and beautiful in its own right. you did a wonderful job. please hurry and update! this story must be completed.
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Reviewed By: stix On: August 22, 2005 21:40 CDT
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i loved this chapter. it was so great. please add more to this story soon. right now i hate you. i love kurama and you pritty much killed him. **EVIL!!!!!!**
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Reviewed By: stix On: August 22, 2005 20:46 CDT
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i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 01:19 CDT
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that was a wonderful chapter. i really loved that one, despite the fact that Kurama was captured. in fact, his capture made it even better. the way you described the fight was perfect. great job after the long wait. update again soon!
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Title: very good
Reviewed By: ShadysGothicBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 00:10 CDT
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hey i really like ur storys!
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Reviewed By: phoenixfirekitsune On: July 21, 2005 20:25 CDT
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This is a great story. I've read your other stories and this is one of my favorites. I actually read the sequal to this story "Bugs" first. I read in one of your author's notes that this story will have 36 chapters so I hope that you post the others soon. Please don't just leave the story as is. It's too good to be left incomplete. I love the plot of this story and it's sequal. You are a great writer. Please keep up the good work and update soon.
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