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Reviewed By: raindropsRteardrops (too lazy to log in) On: September 20, 2005 19:58 CDT
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waaaahhhh.. its over!!! not fair i wanted it to keep going and going.... anyway. as i have said so often before: one of the best stories i have EVER read and i am so sad its over. i'm gonna go check out your other stories now, or at least later, the angst in 'coming clean' almost put me in the hospital for depression. anyway, you have a real talent for writing, espcially in feelings and describing how everyone is thinking. you should really continue and i look forward to reading more of your works. ^.^
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Title: Candy
Reviewed By: Hana_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Soooooo gooooood.... Good good story. I wish I had your talent, but all my stories are horrible.... Probably my best one is one that I haven't even started to post yet. Yeah, I'm pathetic. But I still love this story to death! Now go write the next one. Go on. Shoo, shoo, shoo.
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Reviewed By: ShadowJaganshi On: September 19, 2005 15:27 CDT
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Aww, so cute... And I just oddly find it cute/amusing how Hiei says the Jagan "likes" Kurama... I know it has a mind of its own, sort of, but I still think it's kinda funny. Now then... Of course I'll read whatever you post next... I love this plot... You'll get many more nonsensical reviews from me. Aren't you excited? XD Well, I'm off to inflict my hyper insanity on innocent bystanders. Ja mata! ~SJ~
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my gosh! oh my gosh!! oh my gosh!!! that was THE sweetest ending to a story i have EVER read!!! do you hear me? EVER!!!!! the ring! oh my gosh, the rings! i absolutely LOVED how you had Hiei present those. that was possibly the sweetest thing ever. i have no idea how you made it sound so real and believable, but you did and it turned out so beyond great! that whole section of the story was great. i also liked your determination of the demon mating ritual. i've never read one where they slit their wrists to combine blood, but it worked out very well in here. and your descriptions of it were amazing! you managed to portray so much with the words. they just flowed so well, painting a picture in my mind of all that was happening, physically and mentally, to them. i loved it! i doubt i've read any other KxH pairing story (by another author) as good as yours. you did so great on it. really. now i can't wait for Akambo, as well as the Just Mated thing. please hurry and post them! also, this might be a sort of irrelevant question, but i've always wondered what IMHO stood for. do you mind telling me? you could e-mail it to me at angelbaby22590@yahoo.com. thanks so much! i can't wait for the next installments!!!!!
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Reviewed By: phoenixfirekitsune On: September 18, 2005 17:24 CDT
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I haven't been able to get on this site for a while, so that's why I haven't reviewed since last time I read your story. This was an awsome chapter. I love this story. I can't wait for the next one. Please update soon and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Sikandra On: September 17, 2005 11:45 CDT
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AWWW! SO SWEET! Pokepokepoke! Finish soon, ya?
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Reviewed By: raindrops (too lazy to log in) On: September 16, 2005 21:18 CDT
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yea!! healing! yea! i have no words now.. but.. YEA!!! i hope that's good... o yea, keep updating, ^.^
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 19:05 CDT
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yay! happy chapter! I thought it was great! continue soon! I hope to see the other stories soon too!
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
such a WONDERFUL chapter this was!! i loved it!! and you wrote this one exceptionally well, it seemed. are you thinking about going into the medical profession? because all of these technical terms seem very well researched. and that adds to the believability of the story. excellent job! i can't believe the finale is coming!!! **tear** but it's okay. i'll get over it. update soon! (about the last chapter review, i understand. and trust me, if that was your only choice, i'm glad you did it the way you did. that was definately enough torture! lol)
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Reviewed By: ShadowJaganshi On: September 15, 2005 15:45 CDT
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Aww, so cute. Hiei's such a sweetheart. :) Well, let's see... I can't rant about spleens or death or anything in this chapter... I can comment that staying in a hospital for over a month would SUCK (...I have no experience... I haven't been in a hospital for more than several hours since I was born). But it would suck. And I can say I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter, and the next "adventures in this timeline", as you say... I can't be too bummed about the end of this story since there's more after that. Which is certainly very good. Well, looking forward to the update, wonderful job on this chapter, I love Hiei and Kurama's relationship in this story... it's so cute... and, now, hm. Ja mata, I guess! ~~SJ~~
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Reviewed By: sueb262-tmp On: September 15, 2005 02:44 CDT
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What a sweet chapter! I'm dreading the end of this story, but, I guess all good things must end, after all...
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Title: Love!
Reviewed By: mizthang222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 21:40 CDT
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I love you!You story is so great,and I hope you'll make more.I'm so sad this story is coming to an end,but I've been waiting for it too.^_^
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: The Gatekeeper On: September 14, 2005 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm so happy Kurama's all better! Aw, and Hiei was so sweet. The end there kind of made me want to clean my room 'til it was spotless, but I'm too stressed. Oh well, another day. Anyway, loving things and you've done well with this story. The only thing to really bug me was at one point, Hiei says "Sop it" when he should say "Stop it." Otherwise, all is cool!
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Reviewed By: Tsukiko Kirei [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't stand Koenma now!! I don't care if he feels guilty now. He should have in the begining!! Grr-ness!! I almost died when Hiei tried to kill himself. I love this fic so much. You are doing such a great job. Huggles Nikkler
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Reviewed By: Shinoga [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh stupid mail thing didn't tell me about new chapters. So glad I checked on this fic anyway. Great chapter(s) I really was not expecting Kurama to go like that. And the torture was well written, detailed enough to get a visual without over doing it. I like the way you wrote their reations to the death. Hiei is still Hiei even in his grief and Kurama didn't just bounce back after so much suffering. *checks email* Great NOW it tells me you updated. *face vaults* Anyway great as usual. Here is me pleading in advance for another story in the "Bugs" "Coming Clean" universe......*gets down on knees* Please Please Please Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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