| "Coming Clean" Reviews/Comments [ 232 ] |
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2009 03:34 CST
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this is a great story and i'm glad that i found it.
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Reviewed By: Nis_K [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 23:00 CDT
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Well, I realize that this fic has been finished for quite some time... But I shall leave my little note stating that I have read it, and loved every second of it. Perhaps let you know that there are still people reading and enjoying this piece of amazng work! Though, my memory of it has almost faded... Well, that just means it's almost time for me to read the whole thing again! Something I look forward to, I assure you...
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Reviewed By: Darkness Child [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 21:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! This story was so good. I really love you stories, the emotion you put into them is amazing. Good job.
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 30, 2005 22:33 CDT
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i loved these chapters. they were so great. please add more to this story soon. make sequal.
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Reviewed By: Sariyona [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, read your story Bugs and found this one...it was awesome! Great descriptions and creativity...enjoyed it very much!
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Reviewed By: phoenixfirekitsune On: September 24, 2005 14:03 CDT
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That was a really good ending to for the end of the story. I usually read stories where the bite mark is permanent and actually shows a mark. I can't wait to see you other stories. I've already read "Bugs" and that's how I found this story. Can't wait for more stories from you.
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Reviewed By: Shinoga [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmmm nice ficcie me like....I mean great job thought I must say this is me waiting for the next part and no I'm not looking in my Japanese dictionary to find that word ignore the page turing noises. Not bad for fluff your angst is better but I can see improvement in your lighter writing. I'm sure a few more fluffy stories and you'll be unstoppable. Drat not in the book. Well guess I'll just have to wait. Nice to see a writer taking a new spin on an old plot bunny. I must say I'm interesting in seeing how you portray "mating". So a sidestory would be nice. Now then back to writing for you. *gets on knees again* Please please.
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Reviewed By: raindropsRteardrops (too lazy to log in) On: September 20, 2005 19:58 CDT
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waaaahhhh.. its over!!! not fair i wanted it to keep going and going.... anyway. as i have said so often before: one of the best stories i have EVER read and i am so sad its over. i'm gonna go check out your other stories now, or at least later, the angst in 'coming clean' almost put me in the hospital for depression. anyway, you have a real talent for writing, espcially in feelings and describing how everyone is thinking. you should really continue and i look forward to reading more of your works. ^.^
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Title: Candy
Reviewed By: Hana_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Soooooo gooooood.... Good good story. I wish I had your talent, but all my stories are horrible.... Probably my best one is one that I haven't even started to post yet. Yeah, I'm pathetic. But I still love this story to death! Now go write the next one. Go on. Shoo, shoo, shoo.
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Reviewed By: ShadowJaganshi On: September 19, 2005 15:27 CDT
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Aww, so cute... And I just oddly find it cute/amusing how Hiei says the Jagan "likes" Kurama... I know it has a mind of its own, sort of, but I still think it's kinda funny. Now then... Of course I'll read whatever you post next... I love this plot... You'll get many more nonsensical reviews from me. Aren't you excited? XD Well, I'm off to inflict my hyper insanity on innocent bystanders. Ja mata! ~SJ~
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my gosh! oh my gosh!! oh my gosh!!! that was THE sweetest ending to a story i have EVER read!!! do you hear me? EVER!!!!! the ring! oh my gosh, the rings! i absolutely LOVED how you had Hiei present those. that was possibly the sweetest thing ever. i have no idea how you made it sound so real and believable, but you did and it turned out so beyond great! that whole section of the story was great. i also liked your determination of the demon mating ritual. i've never read one where they slit their wrists to combine blood, but it worked out very well in here. and your descriptions of it were amazing! you managed to portray so much with the words. they just flowed so well, painting a picture in my mind of all that was happening, physically and mentally, to them. i loved it! i doubt i've read any other KxH pairing story (by another author) as good as yours. you did so great on it. really. now i can't wait for Akambo, as well as the Just Mated thing. please hurry and post them! also, this might be a sort of irrelevant question, but i've always wondered what IMHO stood for. do you mind telling me? you could e-mail it to me at angelbaby22590@yahoo.com. thanks so much! i can't wait for the next installments!!!!!
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Reviewed By: phoenixfirekitsune On: September 18, 2005 17:24 CDT
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I haven't been able to get on this site for a while, so that's why I haven't reviewed since last time I read your story. This was an awsome chapter. I love this story. I can't wait for the next one. Please update soon and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Sikandra On: September 17, 2005 11:45 CDT
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AWWW! SO SWEET! Pokepokepoke! Finish soon, ya?
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Reviewed By: raindrops (too lazy to log in) On: September 16, 2005 21:18 CDT
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yea!! healing! yea! i have no words now.. but.. YEA!!! i hope that's good... o yea, keep updating, ^.^
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 19:05 CDT
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yay! happy chapter! I thought it was great! continue soon! I hope to see the other stories soon too!
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