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Title: Interesting.
Reviewed By: Spirit Bagel of Death [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 11:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bonsoir. It is me, the one you wrote the e-mail to about my review on bugs. You said to read this, and I've gotten up to chappie nine already. I don't know, dude. I mean, I definately like Hiei and Kurama and think they are totally in character, but the plot seems just a bit draggy to me. I mean, there's only so much ' lets nurse kura back to health' angst I can take, but then again that's just me. Perhaps you'd like to speed things up a bit, hm? Watch, YOu totally do that from now on, and I'll feel like a real fool. Also, I was just wondering, do you believe in the Yusuke/Kura pairing? Even if you don't like writing it, you've gotta see Yusuke's attraction to Kura. It's like, EVERYWHERE> That and, speaking from teenage girl intuative hormones here, I don't think he's sexually into Keiko, no matter what the show says. Suzaku's bird even says in Shounen Jump that their relationship is platonic. I dunno. I hate strait lemons so maybe that's my prob. Whatever. Keep writing!!!
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Reviewed By: Shinoga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waaaa;_; You've done it again. Writing such a good sad chapter. Can't wait to see the next one.
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Reviewed By: Candy? On: May 26, 2005 16:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, now I review not to ASK you to update, but to BEG you to update. Today's the first day of summer break and I'm going stir-crazy being cooped up in this house all day with nothing to do, and I've been really depressed for a couple of days and yesterday I cried my eyes out until I didn't have anything left to cry WITH. I cried for what felt like hours yesterday after I said goodbye to my teachers and my friends and my friend Robert who's moving away, and I need to read something cheery so please make something GOOD happen in the next chapter. Please? Please please please?
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Reviewed By: raindrops On: May 24, 2005 15:54 CDT
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NONONONONONONNNOOOOOOO!!! you can't stop there!!!! awww.. poor hiei-san!! poor kurama-san! nononononoonooooo i want to give them all hugs!!! *whimpers* you must update very soooooon!!! T.T
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Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 15:45 CDT
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Tear-Jerker.....Thats all I have to say.
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi(not logged in) On: May 22, 2005 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great!update soon^^
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 18:40 CDT
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i suppose i'm one of the few who don't mind if it continues as is. as long as you update quickly, it should be okay. great chapter btw. i love how you had Kurama react to what he & Hiei both knew he wanted. it was great. update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sikandra On: May 22, 2005 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY!!! WHAT MAKES YOU THINK YOU CAN JUST END THE CHAPTER LIKE THAT? oh...right...maybe it's because you're the writer. damn. well. ok then. so you: writer. me: reader. you have: power. me have: zip. lol. fine. i will just beg. UPDATE, PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: yaoikitten(not signed in) On: May 22, 2005 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chapter 29 was very good please continue to write it and dont worry about rushing it im sure your readers understand and i love how you set this chapter up so we got both ways of thinking i was waitinf for kurama to relize how hiei would take his actions when he didnt till he got the message i was pleasentaly surprised ^_^
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Reviewed By: Shadow Jaganshi (lazy SJ...) On: May 22, 2005 16:09 CDT
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I'm sick, and too lazy to log in, but I read the chapter anyways (^_^) and I feel so bad! *sigh* Seems like all the fanfics I'm reading lately are making me all emotional... Which isn't good, considering the variables... Oh well. Update when it suits you... I'll wait all patient-like for it...
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Reviewed By: Candy? On: May 22, 2005 12:52 CDT
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*face falls* And everything was going so well.... I still love the story though. Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Kuramalvr6 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww it's so awsome! i loved it! Now i'm going to go read the 2nd chapter! i promise to waist your time and review for every chapter i read! ok?
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Reviewed By: KitsuneSilver [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's so painfully depressing! You're supposed to stay in one place when you're lost, Kurama! What are you doing? x.x Can't wait for the new update, I'm sure it'll be just as excellent as this one.
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Reviewed By: Yutaka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for another great chapter. I'm glad you are going to continue to write it as you have and not try ti condense it. I really love long stories and this story is one of my favorite! Please keep up the good work and I can't wait for your next update!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm delighted you decided not to condense your story, but let it take its own pace. Great chapter, poor Hiei and Kurama -- just as both begin to heal, more stress. I hope their misunderstanding is quickly resolved.
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