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| "Coming Clean" Reviews/Comments [ 232 ] | | Pages (16): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 › » ] | Reviewed By: sueb On: May 21, 2005 22:38 CDT
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AAAGGGGHHHHH!!! "misunderstanding" is the understatement of the YEAR!!! Another wonderful chapter - keep it up! And, as far as I'm concerned, don't do any squishing or shortening or lengthening or ANYthing! This is too good a story to screw up just for inconsequentials!
| Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know I haven't really benn reading but I've been busy with my parents,school which is ending thank God,and baby cousin.I'm so so so so so sorry for not updating.-_-
| Reviewed By: Alstroemeria [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following this story since day 1, and I love it. I am so glad to see the recent updates, can't wait for more!
| Title: PS
Reviewed By: kettricken [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 23:39 CDT
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By the way, don't you dare rush this. =7 I've seen all the reviews lately asking you to hurry things up, but I don't share the opinion. Something this good just makes me want to savor every moment, which is probably why I have your fanfic site bookmarked and visit it when you haven't updated in awhile, and re-read all of Coming Clean and Bugs, because they are the sweetest stories I know and I love them to pieces. The more you give me, the more I love them, so just do this however you have been, stick to your own plan, and don't let anybody tell ya what to do (no offense other reviewers, you were all very nice in what you said!). Right, so, now I kick my ass back into my Roman history. =D Later!
| Reviewed By: Kettricken [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you this week, did you know? It's been a really stressful couple of months for me, it all seems to be coming together into this gigantic...I don't know how to put it. The stress-raptors have the scent of my blood. Anyway, life sucks, and then you come in with updates about four times as quickly as normal. So...you're my hero. =D *confetti pops all around* So, Down and Out--it was public after all, huh? I was a bit surprised that Mr. Nasty Pants didn't show his ugly face while Kurama was out and about, weakened, with no fellow detectives around. What's his plan, anyway? I understand what he's trying to do, but I'll be interested to see how exactly things come about. Like a ship. Drop the starboard anchor. I'm really tired. =P I apologize for the effects of lack of sleep, way too much caffeine and a history paper that, for some reason, refuses to write itself. (It's being difficult, it's at a bad age.) At this rate, it's not looking good. So have a good night (whenever you read this) because I won't! =D
| Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 22:42 CDT
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this was a very good chapter. i'm glad Kurama's condition is being taken care of now. all that's left is Hiei getting better & everything will return to relative normalness. glad you're taking the reviewers' suggestions too. update soon!
| Reviewed By: Tetsumi(not logged in) On: April 28, 2005 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update soon!
| Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurray, Kurama has finally gotten the help needed! I loved the description of treatment, having been there I recognize the protocals. Please don't squash too much, I love this story and will regret its ending.
| Reviewed By: Sikandra On: April 28, 2005 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just so you know: I don't mind loong stories. Actually, to be completely truthful, I actually LIKE long stories. Especially long GOOD stories. I hate finishing fics, whether they are my own or someone else's. So in my opinion, you can take as long as you like. But that's just my opinion. Anyway, have a good time with the rest of the story, and I hope you get your yellow belt so you can eat some candy! Until then Plushie Hiei can keep you company. *hands you Hiei plushie* TTFN!
| Reviewed By: raindrops On: April 28, 2005 16:21 CDT
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score! another chapter!! ..... i think i was gonna say something else about the story but oh well. your doing an awesome job! can't wait till teh next update!!
| Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 09:09 CDT
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Well you're not becoming preditable. Those are just plot immunity's that everyone has. I've got lot's of 'em in my stories. Cause right now, I have no idea what's going to happen in the rest of your story. Which is good, but bad. And I'm just rambling because I can. I don't care how long the story is, I just what to be able to read it over and over again. You better not chop up the story because a few people want it to be finished like now. I want good detailed chapters, like you have been doing. I am also very anxious to find out what will happen next!
| Title: Don't hurry TOO much! :)
Reviewed By: sueb On: April 27, 2005 23:41 CDT
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I've said it before, but: I just LOVE how these characters come across. Hiei always makes me laugh (he's such a little grouch!), and the contrasts in Kurama's personality are so intriguing. Let me encourage you to not sacrifice detail for the sake of speed - you have a gift with that, and it's a big part of what makes this story so successful!
| Reviewed By: Candy? On: April 27, 2005 21:03 CDT
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Yay!!! You is being nice again!!! ^_^ I don't have as much time to write a good long review, but thanks for updating so fast!!! I can tell you're having fun writing this, so forget what I said in my last review. Your writing is perfection just the way it is, in my opinion, and to suggest that you do things differently than you already do would be not only stupid, but crazy bordering on insanity. So keep on writing, I'll keep on reading, and when this fic is done I'll send several reviews saying something along the lines of either "Thank you thank you thank you" or "Die die die" depending on how the fic ends. LOL. I'm waiting for the next update!
| Reviewed By: Candy? On: April 27, 2005 16:11 CDT
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Oh, something I forgot to say in my review of approximately 12 minutes ago.... I have to congratulate you on your patience....I could NEVER be that mean to the characters for that long!!! I must commend you on your attention to detail and such, but please please please, could you speed it up just a bit? I'm not criticizing, exactly, and God knows a writer needs to do things his or her own way, but my patience has always been (and I fear it will always be) far from outstanding. So please, try to speed things up a bit, okay? If this way of writing works for you, and if you think the whole Speedy Gonzalas routine would cramp your style or whatever, then by all means, stick with the slow-and-steady-wins-the-race theme. I can wait if I have to. ^_^ Oh, and sorry if this review posts twice. My computer decided to be evil. Anyway, your writing is still amazing, even if I have to wait for it!!! *gives you more plushies* Thanks for listening!
| Reviewed By: Candy? On: April 27, 2005 16:00 CDT
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I read it again....see what you do to us poor fanfic readers? PLEASE tell me this thing is almost done....and "Bugs"....because once you get those two done, maybe you can start another of your wonderful, wonderful fics? *looks very chibi-ish and hopeful as she gives you Kura-chan and and Hi-chan plushies* Pwease? Pwease update fics fast? And write more? Pwease?
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