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Reviewed By: lazzykane [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 10:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've read your other works and loved them so please keep them up and please let me know when you update i'm so glad that yokio is finding some one to love although it's not fair you can make me laugh and cry at the san me time but believe me i'm enjoying it....
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Title: waiting.....
Reviewed By: Chio On: November 18, 2004 21:35 PST
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Hi, I hope you´ll post a new chapter of "The Coyote child". This is a very sweet story. Thanks for sharing so fantastic fanfic with us.
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Reviewed By: HN-I-Love-Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 20:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this pic, and started reading the Lucky Ones on ff.net. I would like to say I am very much displeased with the person who complained about your st ory and had it deleted form the site. In every chapter u had warnings plus it was rated R, so obviously this person cant write themsleves and likes to make great writers miserable. I have read this story since it has started and have been hooked on it since the very first chapter. I cried when it was sad and when it ended and was overjoyed with the sequel. I wonder if Yukio will get together with Emma? Or will Kagome and Inuyasha have a new son? What happened to the hanyous father? So many questyions I have, and I cant wait till your story reveals the answers! Awsome writng! A loyal fan and reviewer! Haley Nicholls HN-I-Love-Inuyasha h.nicholls@shaw.ca HN
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Reviewed By: kougasprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 17:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*smiles brightly* A lovely story to complement The Lucky Ones! I am thrilled that a woman has come along who can spark in Yukio fellings he hasn't felt in so long. I am amazed at the way you write these characters, because I can see Yukio in my mind, and he seems so real. You have a wonderful talent, and I would love to read any original fiction you have. Bravo!
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Title: love it!!!
Reviewed By: ichie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 19:48 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was great!! i really love this story and this chapter ^-^ update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 17:36 PST
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I was wondering what percentage of the population is "gifted" and sees through the concealment spells? What happens when someone starts running around raving about the funny looking folk? I assume some are institutionalized but I guess What I am asking is if there is some sort of "gifted" bureau.
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Reviewed By: girlf from ipanema On: November 11, 2004 09:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for answering my wish to see a story following Yukio's healing. I find him a most interesting character and I really like the native connection. This is a really interesting romance/mystery plot and it has me completely engrossed. I hope we eventually get to follow Miroku's misadventures too. I really like these two characters. Emma's seems to be a very interesting character too. Don't let us wait too long, pretty please.
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Reviewed By: Unholydragoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 04:57 PST
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Heya. Just lettin ye know that I am still reading yer stuff, even though ye got slighted by FF.net. Ye are one of he only writers I was following there. Mostly, that is due to yer excellent writing style, engaging character portrayals, and superb use of plot ad setting. Bee following ye since the Buffy fandom days. ~_^
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Title: Just wondering
Reviewed By: monsterkittie...not logged in On: November 09, 2004 18:39 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm just curious...while I am fully enjoying the wonders of your writing in this fic, um...can I ask what happened to Miroku and Ayumi? I just got the idea that they made a really cute couple. Like I said, just wondering.
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Reviewed By: klutz82 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 14:43 PST
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i love this story so far. even though i just finished the first one, reading this one feels like going back to a family reunion. i love how you made me feel very connected to these characters. i like how it's mainly Yukio and i'm glad that Emma is there. he needs someone to help him with the pain. i feel so bad for him... oh! i LOVE the shirts! they make me laugh so hard milk flies out of my nose. (wait! i don't remember having milk???? what the?!?!?! teehee) i can't wait for more! i can't wait to see what happens when they get there and the relationship between Emma and Yukio grow. LOVE IT!!!
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 11:40 PST
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I just love this story. Keep doing what you're doing - no matter what others say. I love the t-shirts, the dry humor (very much my style). I really like Emma, her dream - their dream. The special something that her grandfather told her of - we know not to disagree with the elders after all. Can't wait for the next update, but I will of course.
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Reviewed By: black_talisman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 11:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, I've read other fanfics of you, and I liked them a lot, so I am really glad that you choose to continue writing! You're very good, and I love your stories! continue, and upload fast please!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: November 07, 2004 07:14 PST
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Greart chapter! This relationship is progressing rather nicely. It's wonderful the Yukio has a chance to be happy again.
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Title: uh..... title
Reviewed By: a curious tango On: November 06, 2004 23:22 PST
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Oh man, lol well first I'd like to say good chapter, you are able to make things flow so wonderfully. The second thing (this is not a flam just to let you know) I would like to say is, I hate those shirts. You know the ones in your story that always say something on them like in this chapter:'Don't Annoy the Anger Management Class Dropout' shirt. AHH lol for some reason I find these shirts utterly annoying. And one of my friends, he wears these shirts all the time. Its so annoying. He gets them all from Kholes. By the way how did you get the idea for the t-shirts? Like did you just decide that you wanted to have there t-shirts say something? Just curious. I can't wait till your next chapter. I have an inky feeling about how this storie is going to turn out. If there is an epiloge at the end. And if there is I have a feeling that its gonna be happy, but then it'll get sad. But it was happy. Ok I don't know what i'm rambling on about anymore. heh. Oh, one more thing. You should listen to some led zeppelin, and queen. wonderful bands.
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 20:39 PST
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Nice, they are getting closer. Oh yeah, oh yeah!!! hahahaha!!! sorry
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