| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] |
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 07:47 PST
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yes finally.. loved the chapter can't wait to see what they get into next. and i'm so happy mm.org is working again.. yay..
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Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 07:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... OOC???? I just have to say ... there is no way Kagome's reaction was OOOC... She is a young woman who ALWAYS ALWAYS reacts with her heart, and that's what she did! This wasn't as simple as having an arrow pointed at you. In that instance, InuYasha did know, because he WAS able to think with his head. Had he found her about to kiss another guy, then yeah, I think he'd have reacted with his heart, instead, just as Kagome did. She does have a tendency to run, and only AFTER she's run back home does she ever realize that MAYBE there was something more to it than meets the eye. Talk about weird. I think you handled it exceptionally well! Thanks for another fantastic update!!! I *MUST* ask though ... the entire situation with Kagura ... I know you love happy InuYasha/Kagome endings... but what about Sesshoumaru???? I hope, I pray, you make it good... Thanks again! Till next time! =Diane=
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Reviewed By: bloodykitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 05:34 PST
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Gah, finnally got around to reviewing for you some more...... sorry... been kinda busy...... ehehehe......... expect more reviews from me!!!!
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Reviewed By: kougasprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 01:18 PST
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I can see it now... Kagome: Inuyasha, I need to go to the bathroom. Inuyasha: You're not leaving my sight, wench. Miroku: Ahh, the blot thickens! *giggles* Another great chapter. I hate Hisadaicho more and more! I can't wait until they get to kick her ass... I wonder if Inuyasha is going to end up stuck deciding which is the real Kagome at the worst possible moment. Hmmm... *goes to contemplate AKA sleep* Sayonara! ~Sarah
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Reviewed By: Squalleon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2005 21:55 PST
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There is nothing to say but brilliant, Sueric, simply brilliant! The way you project emotions is an awe-inspiring thing! Great, great job! I'm in awe of you! On a side note, were you entered into the BAFF? I hope you do well. You certainly deserve every single kudo you can garner. Again, fantastic! Leon
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Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2005 21:50 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let's hope THIS review goes through! Wow, the Hisadaicho/Kagome/InuYasha moment was just intense and heartbreaking! I sat here clutching my heart as I read the chapters. Poignant and beautifully done, and that promise! Was that InuYasha's way of asking her to be his mate? Wow . . . can't wait to see where you take us next! I must admit that I, like everyone else, really can't wait to see what's going on with Hisadaicho's Koishii! Great job!!!!!! =Diane=
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2005 21:28 PST
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That Hisadaicho - a piece of work alright. So what does she want really? I thought she wanted the jewel, what's with all the emotional torture of InuYasha and Kagome? Why not just get the damned jewel and be done with it?? Then I suppose you wouldn't have a story - or maybe... maybe the jewel needs to be tainted to be of use to her koi? Distrust could taint the jewel... I'm wrong of course. I'm always following the wrong clue.
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 15:18 PST
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sorry i haven't been around.. wonderful chapters.. can't wait till the next one..yay
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Title: HOT DAMN!! MMorg is up again! Whoohoo!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 13:14 PST
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Arghh, 3 chapters! Talk about frustrated...anywho --Kagura is back, GREAT! It was so sad the way Naraku killed her (I believe that Tenseiga wouldn't work because, the way the maisma was dissolving her body from the inside out, there wouldn't have been enough 'body' to revive; IMO) The big question I have is, not is she the real Kagura but; "how" can she be? Was there enough 'essence' of Kagura on her feather for 'rebirth' (much like Kikyou's ashes for her re-animation) or was there some other element that Hisadaicho used to force the metamorphosis? I'm really curious about the process. ---Poor Kagura...enslaved again. I wonder does she remember Hisadaicho at all and is lying to Sesshoumaru or does she know, but is as reluctant as ever to serve? I loved it when she boldly told Hisa, "I serve no-one." Or in modern terms, "Go blow it out your..." LOL Kagura is no slouch, nor is she weak. She just has a healthy respect for her own skin. I noticed several times where she didn't hesitate to help Kohaku, cautioning him albeit subtlely about "not getting caught" and outright following her own adjenda. I just wish she could have had a bigger part in Naraku's destruction for her own sake. Chasing Sesshoumaru around gave her a hint of what life might have been like had she been truly free: to have a future. Like a terminal patient suddenly being told,"you're cured, you're gonna live...what would you like to do?" ---hmm, I think I'm rambling...LOL! I love how your stories make me think!
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Reviewed By: kougasprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 03:45 PST
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*sniffles... just a little bit* Poor Kagura... will she ever truly be free? Ahh well, at least I can rest assured knowing you are a big fan of happy endings! Now excuse me while I go prepare myself for the angst that I know is coming! Sayonara!
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Reviewed By: snowluva420 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 01:39 PST
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Wow...The monkey did it? wow...that was unexpected...
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 20:09 PST
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Great chapter. I see now how they can express their emotions. But still those three little words do work wonders somethimes. Hope your son has a good birthday party. Later.
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 19:15 PST
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And I'm not just talking about the fact that MM has decided to work AND have me logged in. Are we gonna see the seer again? I liked her. And happy birthday to your son!
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Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 18:43 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh, niiiiiiiiiiice! Kagura really is back then? Wow! I want to be happy for Sesshomaru and at the same time, I'm scared to death you have something wicked planned! ::cringes in fear:: Poor Sesshomaru! Please tell me that you're going to be nice to him in the end, oh mighty master of the macabre! Anyway, fantabulous chappie and looking forward to the next! =Diane=
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Reviewed By: Squalleon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 18:39 PST
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So she is the real Kagura! At least her soul is! Fascinating! Very interesting plot! I can't wait to see what else you have in store. I have a feeling that whatever it is, it isn't going to be very nice for Sesshomaru, right? Or will it be? It intrigues me as I ponder just what Hisadaicho's ultimate plan is. She's quite complex and mysterious, a bit like your review answers tend to be. In any case, thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, and I can't wait to read the next! Happy birthday, Son of Sueric! Your mother has shared her wonderful works with us, and that is a precious thing! Happy New Year! ~Squalleon
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