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| "Metamorphosis." Reviews/Comments [ 1272 ] | | Pages (85): [ « ‹ 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 › » ] | Reviewed By: Squalleon nsi On: December 27, 2004 20:26 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Old Seer. Intriguing! She seems to be able to pin down Kagome's heartache very well. I don't have the sense that she is an ominous presence though Miroku's reaction to her was surprising. He seemed very wary of her, very distrustful. Based on his reaction, I have to wonder what twist you're planning here. Your writing style seems freer in this fic than in the past ones, and it is a wonderful thing to see. Perhaps you're feeling better able to express your style here than in past fics? Nicely done, wonderful chapter. Can't wait for the next! ~Squalleon
| Reviewed By: leelu821 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 19:55 PST
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Hmm, this old woman is a suspicious little character. Or maybe she's not. But I just kept thinking that she was one of Hisadaicho's creations like those lil' zombie dudes that do her evil deeds. Now I'm curious to see the next chapter even more! LOL
| Reviewed By: kougasprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 16:59 PST
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*falls down laughing* Miroku is shameless, isn't he? Naughty, naughty boy! I liked Old Seer, she seemed to have some very good advice for Kagome. She's not secretly evil, is she? Anyway, another great chapter, and I hope Kagome and Inuyasha will get the clue! They are awfully stubborn, aren't they?
| Title: I'm new to the story
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 15:10 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man How I do love finding a story after lots of chapters have already been posted. Especially when its a fantastic story that the one I just finished ready. I should let the other know that after reading the comments on the last chapter loaded, about her thinking she wasn't that good at writing, I'm in complete disagreement. This story is wonderfully written, and it couldn't have been written by someone that didn't have wonderful Talent. Please don't sell you self short. I'm looking forward to more, and I am baited for that scean when thouse to finally give into there desires...aaaaaaaaahhh I'm so echi *hides under the desk*
| Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 14:47 PST
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Ah...fine advise for our lovely confused pseudo-lovers (cos they're not quite together yet...only time will tell with you my dear, though I think it's telling soon. Ock, I'm pretentious today). I'm glad that you're not diving into a second pregnancy for Kagome. So the evil aura...I wonder if this has to do with Hisadaicho or Kagome's reletive insatability over the baby? (I know you can't answer...I'm just speculating.)
| Title: Love it!!!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 14:14 PST
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I'm surprised that InuYasha didn't explode when Sango confessed that Miroku told her about his dreams...hehe, "Look out Monk; he's comin' for ya!" ---Ah, an impartial seer with unlooked for wisdom for Kagome; nice move! Sometimes it's easier to talk to a total stranger than to a friend. ---You continue to surprise me! (God, I am so envious...) Great Chapter!
| Title: ... ... wait, ANOTHER Beast?
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 12:28 PST
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lol, you think this is going to be Bertha Jr. eh? I shall have to come up with more beast jokes then... ^_^ Ahhh, such angst and pain you've given us for Christmas! Three thought provoking chapters -- yep, I definately owe you reviews ::cringe:: -- that make you wonder if Kagome will ever get back to her happy, balanced self. I'm sure she will with InuYasha by her side, lol, but it's heart-wrenching to read. Perhaps I can put in a small request for some fluff? Please?? I'm curious as to what part the Old Seer is going to play... she really intrigues me. She seems to have an answer for everyone! Now, what does she know about Hisa? She must know something... And what's up with Hisa anyways? We last saw her coating an innocent girl in something cold and slimy... what was it?? What's she up to?? LoL, come on Sue! Tell us!! Just teasing you, I know all will be revealed in good time ^_~
| Reviewed By: snowluva420 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 11:27 PST
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This seer doesn't seem right...I would have thought Kagome would have known most everyone in the village seeing as how long she has stayed there....Hmmm...Intersting...and she knew Kikyou? Kagome should talk to Kaede about this. Kaede would know about her.
| Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 10:58 PST
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I just reviewed for the last chapter but hey! Let's do it again! This old seer is interesting ... veeeeeeeeeery interesting... Keep up the good work! =Diane=
| Reviewed By: Squalleon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 07:17 PST
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Ah, what to say? The Inuyasha-Kagome dynamic is a wonderful thing, in your hands! Just terrific! Can't wait to see what your next update brings us when this story keeps getting a little more convoluted every single chapter. Great twists, and I wonder what Hisadaicho is up to? She's been … sneaky … far too long for comfort!
| Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 07:14 PST
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Poor Kagome! I hope she realizes that a baby won't make things magically better! I hope she realizes before she scares InuYasha away! I have a feeling that the whole shrink deal is just sort of a mentioned thing to make people understand just how upset she's been, but I have a feeling you have something else altogether up your sleeve for this! I could be wrong, but … it just seems to me that Kagome's reaching for anything to fill this void in her heart, so maybe she should concentrate on InuYasha instead? Hmmm… As always, fantastic chapter! =Diane=
| Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 20:40 PST
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Okay, so they don't say 'I love you' in your fics. Then how do they finally realize that they do. I mean yes, Kagome know that she loves him, but how is she to know that he loves her? And the effects of their dreams and kisses don't really say it. I mean you can do those things with people that you only like, not love. Can't wait for the chapter that get them to realize their love. Hope it's soon. Later.
| Title: Wow! 540 reviews, you must have a special email acct just for notices...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 17:54 PST
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Kagome may think that having another baby will fix things but it won't. She needs to come to terms with the situation before she takes that step or she could obssess about the new baby in an unhealthy way. Having children is not a cure for anything; it's a perk of a good relationship. (I know, I know: I just pissed off everyone who wants to see she and InuYasha procreate together...well tough cookies! :P ) Emotional problems don't go away, and if you pretend that they're not there and everything is "just fine, thank you" they will rear their ugly heads at the worst possible time, and be bigger and nastier than if you had dealt with them properly in the first place. A psychiatrist might be the answer or not, especially when it is realized that Kagome cannot relay all the information or will have to outright lie because of the situation. Maybe she could talk to Kaede. Heck, maybe all Kagome needs is to go somewhere and scream her head off. Get it out. A nice, big empty canyon. Hmm...well, that's My Opinion anyway. ----Great Chapter!! And WELCOME HOME!!
| Title: lookie lookie im 540
Reviewed By: piscesanela007 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 16:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
once again another brillant chapter ... again from your vacation ... i loved when Miroku slapped InuYasha with the staff lmao... poor Kagome, I wonder how she will deal with her feelings of wanting a child, and how will InuYasha deal with it as well? hmmm hopefully he can help her in the right way to get through this dark time. I knew angsty stuff was coming lol. Thanks again for the update! =)
| Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 14:47 PST
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Wow, sad, sad chapters. I knew it would come up eventually...Kagome wanting another child. At this junction...I don't think it would be right. She needs to work through the issue, not replace it. Anyway. Good god what's that Hisadaicho bitch up to now??? *growls* I swear if she fucks with Sessy anymore...I'm gonna be cranky something awful. I can't *wait* until someone kill her.... Damn, I didn't think it was possible to hate a character worse than Norimitsu!
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