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 Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 26, 2004 11:51 PST
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Hmm, poor Kagome! It seems like she is suffering and yet also feels like she doesn't have the right to do it since she chose what she chose, right? That makes it all that much more poignant! I'm astounded at the emotional depth you write at (I know, bad phrasing). It just stuns me every time you pump out another chapter! Great work!!! Till next time! =Diane=
 Reviewed By: Squalleon [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 26, 2004 11:46 PST
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Great chapter! Keep it up! I wonder, though, what the true thought behind the psychiatrist is because it would seem that Kagome's main problem isn't that she needs to see a shrink but that she truly just needs to vent her spleen. I do hope that you don't have them create a child to fill the void in Kagome's heart. That really isn't a reason to have one, and InuYasha just seems to be opening up to her. The last thing he really needs right now is a baby.
 Reviewed By: LeeLu  On: December 26, 2004 11:23 PST
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I don't get it. I thought I had to be signed into leave a review. *shakes head* Uh oh. Not looking good for Kagome. And poor InuYasha can't do anything to make it better...or can he? Hehehe. So I have one question about the last chapter. That girl Yuriko...was she being turned into one of those zombie mutated creatures from the first chapter that follow Hisadaicho around? Or is she going to be her new toy? Or a reincarnation of someone? I know, that was more than one question, but ideas just started popping into my head. LOL
 Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 25, 2004 16:26 PST
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This is a great story. I am sorry that Kagome feels empty. I am sure that Sango could sympathies with her. I hope that angst will not last much longer. Those two really need to get everything off their shoulders. Hope you have a good vacation. Later.
 Reviewed By: snowluva420 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 25, 2004 13:58 PST
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! How sad! I feel so terribly sorry for Kagome! She really needs Inuyasha now, I hope he can understand that! I bet he does because he is staying with her an awful lot! Again, such a great chapter! Happy Christmas! And have a great rest of your vacation!
 Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 24, 2004 23:01 PST
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Kagome is so upset, I was about to cry myself. I always enjoy Miroku's pep talks with InuYasha; they always showcase how wise and insightful the lecher is. Finally, Sango and Kagome are starting to communicate. ----Great chapter! ----- "Hear-ye, Hear-ye!! Make way for a most Wonderful Author!!!" **peons throw rose petals in your path, and the masses bow low in honor of your greatness** ---- Merry Christmas! Safe Journey! Thank you for the gift of your creativity!
 Reviewed By: kougasprincess [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 24, 2004 22:58 PST
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*sniffles* My hormones must be a little out of it right now. I had tears in my eyes while I read this. I probably woulda bawled if I was alone in the living room... LoL. Great chapter, such sweetness!
 Reviewed By: parvatilotus [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 24, 2004 21:48 PST
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!!! ok this is odd, this is the first time ive been able to review ANYTHING for over a week now.. ok anyways... i cant believe inuyasha didnt know she meant have a baby with him! (thats what she meant right?) i feel so bad for Kagome! if Kags did have a baby i wonder if they would raise the new one and Mari as siblings (they do have the same 'mother' even if they dont have the same mommy) considering how close sango and kags are i wouldnt be surprised if it ended up being a ~family group~ more than the traditional father, mother, 2.3 children. ok im no making sense. anyway thanks for updating on Xmas.. so close to midnight too!! i thought i was the only odd one up this late.. unless im not seeing some sort of delay between uploading the chapter and when it can be read.. ok stopping the babble... now. ~Kat
 Title: I love this!!
Reviewed By: Sutashii [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 24, 2004 21:12 PST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Being home alone on christmas eve kinda sucked but reading this made my night so much better! I've just sat here for the last couple hours minus the hour I went to church lol (though I was tempted to skip! but I dont ever go any ways so I thought I probabley should... lol) any ways, I have spent a very enjoyable night reading this! Its great! very realistic, I wish there were a few more Inu Kag cuddle moments But those are sure to come! I want to tell you that your doing a great job! and I look forward to reading more of this amazing fic! I have loved every moment of this! The way kagome is reacting to the baby is just the way I think she would be. So insecure about everything. I hope they forget to 'shake' the vile a few more times. Well any ways Merry Christmas or Happy Honaka (sp?) lol Thanks again for the great night! Can't wait for the next chapter! Night!
 Reviewed By: Squalleon [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 24, 2004 19:53 PST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! Kagome's feelings are so well represented. It stands to reason that she would 'forget' her upset while she was away. Out of sight, out of mind. Thankfully InuYasha seems to understand this. Terrific, once more!
 Reviewed By: Inuyashas kagome [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 24, 2004 19:35 PST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Poor Kagome, her heart is breaking. Its a good job InuYasha is there for her. ^-^ But it is why Kagome is Kagome. She has such a pure heart, even when it means giving up such a big part of herself. I just want to hug her! Hmmmm Yuriko being reborn.... Kagura? Awesome chappie btw! Merry Christmas!
 Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 24, 2004 15:47 PST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
What a powerful chapter. I admit, I wish that Kagome and InuYasha would have 'pups' of their own. I admit, I think that Kagome hasn't thought THIS out completely. I think that she wants a baby to relieve her upset over Marisaiko without realizing that it wouldn't really be the answer. Writing was poignant and painful, powerful and dramatic. Highly impressed with your mad, mad skillz, woman! Keep it up! Just fan-FRIGGING-tastic! Who is this Yuriko and what is happening to her? I have a fair guess. It seems to me that Hisadaicho is spending way too much giddy free time making a nuisance of herself, as always. I hope that this can be alleviated soon. You go girl! thanks for such quality fast updates! Vacation? BAH! You don't need no stinkin' vacation… or do you? Great, great job! Though we don't deserve the frequency of your dedicated updates, I'm certainly glad you've posted, anyway! Merry, merry Christmas Eve! =Diane=
 Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 24, 2004 15:36 PST
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oh you poor girl... actually, I'm having a hard time feeling too bad for Yuriko... I wanna know what hisa is up to!!! So so evil, how can you not adore her? Apparently Kagome is not getting better--InuYasha is being wonderful, except for that last baka statment at the end there. I don't think Kagome is just going to forget about having a baby of her own. I don't think she should... ::hides from every other reviewer thus far:: I think Kagome needs to heal her mind and heart before she commits herself to having another child. IMO, InuYasha is that healing source and I believe you are portraying that beautifully. Merry Christmas Eve and hope it's a pleasant one. Amen to LeeLu-- the weather in NY has been deplorable. I couldn't see it was raining so hard the other day, so enjoy that FL sunshine! We miss you and look forward to your return!
 Reviewed By: snowluva420 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 24, 2004 14:17 PST
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OH! Poor Kagome! I feel so bad for her! Intersting though...Will she have a baby of her own? Hmmmmmm...Inuyasha obviously isn't as fond of the idea. I doubt he'd be able to last a day with a baby. But he did calm down Marisaiko...So how did you get that idea? Of him running to calm her down? I know that when I had my daughter, I used to take her for a car ride to calm her down. Worked like a charm! Is that where you got the idea?
 Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 24, 2004 09:21 PST
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oh wow.. can't wait to see what's going to happen next..
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