| "LOVE POISON" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Reviewed By: snoo snoo On: July 29, 2005 07:19 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
its good just long winded
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Reviewed By: loulou *not signed in* On: July 28, 2005 00:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love you story to pieces. :)
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: July 27, 2005 21:28 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You go! This is really an exciting story! I can not wait for the "talk," between Kagome and InuYasha, when he decides to confess, or, (bites nails!) someone confesses for him. I like the way you handled Sesshoumaru's thinking on the matters at hand. He was very believable; maybe too believable (especially regarding Rin.) I figure that he will kick someone's butt at some point, to stay close to character. Kagura is the only character that I am not sure what I think of. I think I am still trying to like her (or maybe I'm not sure that she deserves Sesshoumaru.) The undead priestess makes a good ally to Naraku. You are doing a fine job! Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: kags On: July 27, 2005 17:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon!
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Reviewed By: inu - fan On: July 27, 2005 17:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update! love the story!
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Reviewed By: inu - fan On: July 27, 2005 17:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update! love the story!
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Reviewed By: A writer just like you On: July 14, 2005 18:50 EDT
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Just wanted to let you know that you are a talented writer, but I've noticed that you keep repeating stuff over and over again, I am enjoying this fic, but when something keeps repeating over and over again, its get a little tideous; just a suggestion, it isn't neccissary to repeat things over and over again, who cares if the chapter is only a few pages long as long as it's interesting right? Please don't stop writing, it just constructive criticism. This not supposed to be a bad review, just suggesting something. Ok please continue with the story!
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 23:33 EDT
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hmmm....wonderful as always...congrats to you! so sesshoumaru is developing more than just lustful feelings for kagura..interesting...many thoughts on that. poor inuyasha, he still hasnt managed to get past that baka gene. well i bow down to your fanfiction greatness and cross my fingers that you will update soon...curse you and your addicting story. lol... ja ne~ Darkflameangel
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Reviewed By: Kicnlus_Inuforeva (too lazy to log in) On: July 13, 2005 23:28 EDT
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This is AWESOME!!!!! I really love your story. People have said that I do some good angst work - but this is amazing. It really is. I hope you become a writer so I can buy all of your incredible books! I hope you update more, and if you want to read something sadly inferior that is rarely updated (so hard for me to update often...) look me up! Kicnlus_inuforeva is my username (of course) my sort of angsty one is Spiritual Machines. Well - thats just if your ever bored and feel like something different I guess. Whatever. Well, again, amazing work and I hope you update! Bye for now!
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Reviewed By: neh On: July 13, 2005 23:18 EDT
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yay.
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Title: GREAT RE-WRITE
Reviewed By: momcitrus not signed in On: July 13, 2005 22:40 EDT
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Since I get email notifications when you add a chapter, etc., I just re-read your chapter 10 re-write. WHAT A GREAT JOB! It adds so much clarity to your overall story, not to mention suspense to the plot. Made a good story even better. YAY!!!!!!
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Title: Love Poison
Reviewed By: ^_~ On: July 13, 2005 21:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kudos! I read all chapters in one day...great story...please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: July 13, 2005 20:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You are doing a fine job. The story is VERY entertaining! Count on me to be checking in regularly. I really liked the touching moments between Rin and Sesshoumaru. I always enjoy InuYasha when he and Kagome are angsting. Keep up the great work. Sounds cliche' but gets my points across. Thank you, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: bk On: July 12, 2005 21:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excellent story. I can't wait for the next chapter. You are a fantastic writer worthy of an IY Fan Fiction Guild Award. Good Luck. Please keep writing I know there are many of us waiting for your updates. Thanks for the great story.
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 20:06 EDT
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lol. *edges away* I'm reviewing! I swear! *holds hands up in ront of her* Inuyasha's musing were quite amusing to me. I never thought Inuyasha would be one to talk to himself...but, you have changed my mind with this fic! ^_^ What DOES Kagura have to do with Kikyo's new body? Eh? I can't wait to find out! The suspense is killing me! X_X Update soon! And you can't yell at me because I reviewed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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