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| "LOVE POISON" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] | | Pages (14): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 › » ] | Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: July 12, 2005 19:48 EDT
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Wow, I never get tired of reading this story. Thanks for the Sesshomaru interlude. I always love to see what he's been up to. Yet again you seem to have pegged the personalities perfectly with your own little twist to them. I hope that when you finish this fic, you'll write other ones. If I give you a list of my favorite anime, will you write stories for them? Just kidding, (unless you really would do it) Anywho, can't wait to see what kind of trouble Naraku and Kikyou have been cooking up. Until next time.
| Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 18:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea! i'm finished at last. i wonder how you will have kikyou's plan turn out. i know you said no more inu/kik and i believe you...but man, to think of what she wants to attempt is too much!! i luv it! =p i am eager to see where you take us. this fic is too good for words, but hopefully words of adoration are enough to get you to update soon. please do so when you have the time. i'll try to wait patiently. umm, maybe that's asking too much. ^_*
| Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 16:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have only read the first chapter and i am in love with this fic! i can already tell that it will be amazing. man, i just couldn't wait until i read the last chap. to tell you so. btw, your grammar is actually better than some of the american english writers out there! you're a very talented author and i am going to finish reading the rest of your kick@$$ fic right now. i'll review again when i am caught up. bye 'till then. *_^
| Reviewed By: lavie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 10:50 EDT
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yo! i absolutely love sango the cop & how miroku actually looked like the thief he is. & tho myouga doesn't actually call inuyasha "the master", i still like it. i also like how kaede calls miroku et al "young ones". i also like the classic kagome treating inuyasha like the dog he is moment! but i do tend 2 skip parts not dealing with the inuyasha-tachi. anyway, i look forward to ur next chapter! ja!
| Reviewed By: Tetsuya Yamatashi (formally Diablos_II) On: July 07, 2005 03:25 EDT
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*Gasp!* You were in the hospital!? And I was starting to get impatient! I feel like such a jerk-off now! I'm so sorry, YM! *gives YM a BIG hug* ahem...anyways...I really liked this chappy, It was very cute and well done. And I feel for you on the writer's block. I've had it for like, 2 months now...No fun... But as always, keep up the good work, I'm keepin' an eye on you!
| Reviewed By: tinkerbell- not signed in On: June 25, 2005 21:02 EDT
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I hope everything is alright and that you're feeling better. Thanks for the update - it was great as usual. When do we find out what Kikyou's been up too?
| Title: Great chp
Reviewed By: inuyashatotallyobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 15:26 EDT
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Great chp. I hope you're feeling better now? Don't worry about the updateing thing. The people that do update every day are no where neer as good at writing their fics as you are ^_^ trust me on that. As long as you mange to every once in a while its all good. Ja ne!!
| Reviewed By: Diablos_II On: June 19, 2005 19:57 EDT
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well, I'm back, I told you I would review this last chapter...I just never really got up to doing it...yes, Im just lazy I guess. Anywho's, here is the review you asked for, and the one I told you I would give. Even though this chapter didn't revolve around Kagome and Inuyasha, I am still very happy for it. It was really good. I love how you can take the origonal plot of the anime/manga and work it in to how you need it in the story. I might have already reviewed...so If I have, I guess your getting the same review twice. I seem to remember saying most of this. Anyways, keep up the good work, Musashi!
| Reviewed By: DarkDemonHuntress [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 11:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a very good fic.i hope u update soon! now don't get my wrong on this but i think kikyou was made out to be a little more "evil" than she really is. u still did a great job! seriuosly! but after watching a rerun ep. of kikyou and kagome in the preistess cave.... she just seemed nicer there. well keep up the fantastic work! 100% satisfactory :-D
| Title: "Wow!"
Reviewed By: Trusuprise [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 13:36 EDT
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Filler? Keh. No way. This chapter focuses on Kagura in the first half, and Kikyou in the second, both of which heavily muse on current events, hinting at Naraku's plot. Your characterization of Kagura is top notch. From describing her appearance and body language to her emotions and the reasons behind them. You simply bring the wind youkai to life. You really capture the essence of Kagura, regardless of the fact that she isn't the main character in your fic, your readers must trust that this exciting chapter will be beneficial and needed to your overall plot. It's obviously not filler simply considering the amount of time and effort you put into this awesome chapter. The piece with Kikyou is truly brilliant. I really enjoyed the additions you added since I read the draft! Remember, KS, originality is in everything you write, whether you believe it or not, baka!
| Reviewed By: momcitrus [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 23:49 EDT
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Still asking for reviews, even after 15 chapters, huh? Okie-Dokey, here ya go. This has been great fun to read, and assuming you are some sort of student, I certainly HOPE you'll have the time to update this summer. Looks like Kagura's FINALLY gonna get laid, eh? I say, so what if it breaks manga canon, since the whole point of fanfiction is FUN- you might as well re-write the story to suit your fancy. Abrupt topic change: Love and sex are basically the same story written over and over again, but it never gets old, does it? I'm no writer, and therefore it would be almost impossible for me to write a lemon/lime. How does one describe the inexpressable? But, hey, you did a great job, with the added bonus of an actual PLOT, haha. I truly think it all rings very true, and doesn't seem contrived or silly like so many fanfic lemons. It'll be so much fun to read the rest of this. Thanks!!!!
| Reviewed By: ucf_cheryl On: May 25, 2005 18:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy %&*%$ - That was absolutely the HOTTEST kiss scene I have ever read in my life. (Referring to chapter 4) Very, very true to life.
| Reviewed By: ucf_cheryl On: May 25, 2005 18:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You begged for reviews, so here ya go. (And by the way, I'm Mom the Manga Fan at ff dot net.) Following, I've pasted a paragraph from your chapter 3 so I can make some comments: "Such a magnificent, complex being...wicked yet adorable, a child but also a man, his need to protect as desperate as his secret need to be protected, his heart as immense as his temper was short. He was so passionate about everything...so wild and kind, despite his best efforts to hide this. How could he possibly see his own kindness as a weakness? He was a walking paradox...by the gods, she loved him." Okay, I absolutely LOVE these observations that you make- nobody comes close to your skill with this sort of poetry-prose stuff. HOWEVER, pages of this all at once bog your story down. I think you should leave the high-flown stuff as is, but try alternating it with action, plot advancement, etc. As far as WAFF and romance goes, ah, this is great good fun. Thanks for your time and trouble. (I'll be begging for updates by the time I get to the last chappie, I'm sure.)
| Title: My opinion...
Reviewed By: Ayumi Shinjuno [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 13:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! You really know how to write and I hope you'll update soon... Keep it going!
| Reviewed By: Kicnlus_inuforeva [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 00:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story!! I really hope you update soon - can there be lots of Inu+Kag to make up for the last chapter? Keep it up!! *hands FIVE cookies* see how much I like your story? You get a bonus! ^^ Update soon!!!
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