| "LOVE POISON" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Title: wow.....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 11:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow you story is really really really really really really really really (got enough in there?....um...NO!) really really really ..........GOOD!!!! ^__^ keep up the good work and updatye again soon please? i'll give you POCKY!!!!! lmao no one can resist POCKY muahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahaha
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: May 08, 2005 00:31 EDT
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Long time no see =) Thanks for the update, I love this story. I appreciate the different points of view in this chapter. It's always fun to get a different perspective on the same story. Keep it coming
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Title: its times like these I wish I had a boyfriend
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 05:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man oh man, the limes in this story are just to hot...I really need to...ooh well I'll not tell you what I need to do, but I'll tell you that your story is the cause of it...I have you on my fav's list so I'll be back to review again when the next chapter is out...Ja
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Title: Keep it coming
Reviewed By: IYFan On: April 04, 2005 03:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please keep this one going, you've got me hooked. Love it.
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Title: Really good work
Reviewed By: HimeG [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 00:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If only I could rate a 10+. I really love this story. I read the update as soon as it came out and then I reread it again yesterday just to make sure that I still have everything straight. I do have a question, how is it that youkai inu can speak in full sentences when talking to hanyou inu but not when he is actually dominant? I do understand that the youkai would understand primitive sentence structure better though. Thats all that I have. I hope that you update soon. I do have a habit of falling in love with stories that never get finished and I hope that this isn't one of them.
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Title: koishii
Reviewed By: ZAM On: March 28, 2005 01:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok... ::takes big breth:: i love your fanfic it is awsome ilove it its the best one i have ever read its just that in chapter uh... ok i4get what chapter im on...grrrrrrrrr i hate being stupis anywayz u used the word koishii and i dont know what it means wayyyyy ::makes sad face:: it would so rock if you could... tell me u r an awsome writter ok thats all i wanted 2 say im not done reading all you have written yet so im gonna get back to it... wow its late... i blame u 4 keeping me up late and making me tierd in the morning lol k bi ~ZAM~
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Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 01:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I noticed that you are in the process of updating your earlier chapters ... I hope that also means that you will be adding more soon!! I'm enjoying following this fic VERY much (and tracking it through several different sites!!) and am looking forward EAGERLY to your next chapter. I can hardly wait to see WHEN InuYasha is going to finally spill the beans to Kagome (if ever) and when the two of them are FINALLY gonna officially mate. The suspense is killing me (maybe not literally, but you know what I mean?)!! Thanks for making it FUN to follow this fic through all its twists and turns!
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 21:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Only two chapters and I'm already in love with this fic! Please update soon! I'm just a little confused. Sango babysits Mirokus' daughter and Kags babysits Inuyashas' kid??
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 14:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry I couldn't review before..but that's because I just found this story yesterday! I love this story. I don't know what else I could critique on but...I just wanted to thank you for writing this story. I really enjoyed reading it and I can't wait for your next update! I also can't wait for the lemon and the moment Inuyasha FINALLY tells Kagome what happened with Kikyo...He is going to tell her..right? I am a Kikyo hater..soo some of my comments will be disrespectful to Kikyo...sometimes..anyways. THANK YOU!!!::hugs:: ^_^
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Reviewed By: Trusuprise [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 09:47 EST
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From the discussion with Inu-tachi outside the village to the interaction between Kagome and Inuyasha, yet another wonderful chapter down. You have a great way of making me hear Kappei's fluctuating voice when Inuyasha is bouncing between youkai and hanyou forms. Of course I especially like how Inuyasha speaks to Kagome when he's in his youkai form. The primal need, the short sentences full of meaning really grab you and convey the youkai's primal nature. Even though youkai Inuyasha does not speak this way in the anime, I like it, and wish he did, I think the series could benefit from it! And Kagome, in her endless understanding knew to communicate in like fashion. "In his full demon state...words did not seem relevant. So she reverted to touch, voicing only what the inu-hanyou, now supressed by his youkai, would understand" So, now that Inuyasha and Kagome have spoken about mates and there being only one, it seems that Inuyasha's youkai and hanyou side are each fighting to be "the one" Argh! again, they have the wrong idea! When will they see? And when will Inuyasha freaking tell Kagome what happened? lol, you saw that one coming... Again, great chapter, and I'm looking forward to the next one!
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Ditke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 09:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This new chapter was amazing! You know how to describe InuYasha's feelings. And I found the idea that InuYasha is speaking to himself very good! Continue! I love this story!
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Reviewed By: morwen re, not logged in On: March 24, 2005 01:20 EST
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great story! it took me a couple of days to get finished reading it, and i normally quit if a story doesn't catch my interest. i know what you mean about not getting reveiws at mm, 'cause i never seem to get them unless it's from ff.net. i hope you update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Mangomoo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 21:09 EST
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YEAH! U UPDATED! This is once again my favourite fanfic currently and I'm so happy that you posted! I love this chapter atleast Kagome is getting some understanding of how InuYasha's other side is. The chapter to end all chapters is when he finally tells her what happened and just letting you know I am constantly checking for when you update an I can't even express how anxious I am to see when he tells her and her reaction. I really REALLY hope that chapter comes out soon (yes, I know you have a life beyond writting this fic! :P) but I really can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the writting!
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 not signed in On: March 22, 2005 21:40 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for the update! It was once again an awsome chapter and I loved every single word of it!! I hope we don't too long to wait for more.
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: March 22, 2005 21:13 EST
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Okay, I think one word can sum up this chapter, heck this whole story - WOW! You always keep me guessing what is gonna happen next. I have to say that I enjoyed that little demon-Inuyasha interlude. I think the best part of the whole mess is that little Shippo is the one with the best grasp of the situation. So, when is Inuyasha gonna admit ? It's almost like Jerry Springer, Sengoku Jidai style. Can't wait to hear from you again. =)
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