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| "LOVE POISON" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] | | Pages (14): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 › » ] | Title: Previously reveiwed as Miroku_girl
Reviewed By: inuyashatotallyobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 19:08 EST
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Yeah, i got another acount because i couldn't figure out how to work the first one. but it's me Miroku_girl. that was so beutiful. it brought tears to my eyes like one of those sappy soap opras, only not sappy and has a better plot. i'm serious i was so touched i cryed *sniff* and still am. poor Inuyasha would never hurt Kagome but doesn't see this and it he's so afriad he will, that he's in pain himself. this is amazing, please continue!!! 10/10 Ja ne!!
| Reviewed By: Inu Yokai On: March 19, 2005 10:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn, ur one hell of a writer! i absolutely LUV ur fic!! I cant wait until u post again!!! its awesome!! THis is one of the best fics i've read on mediaminer, and i mean that! omg, it totally rox!! u HAVE to update and like, soon!! peace out!
| Reviewed By: Ditke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 16:28 EST
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Yeah! I loved it, too! It's cute, and very interesting... I have no idea what will happen next, so please update! Please!
| Title: Oh My God!
Reviewed By: CresentMoon21 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 19:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've already reviewed for this chapter, i believe but you want more reviews, so i figured i could spare some time. I love this story and praticularily this chapter. Quite good. Now, since they have gotten so far together, i think Kag should sometime soon tell Inu how she sees him as one person, not two or three like he thinks. Wow.... this chapter, very.... heated. i love it and i'm surprised they weren't interupted. lol. i love your story and please update soon!
| Reviewed By: Diablos_ii On: March 12, 2005 17:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Du du du du du, I'm lovin' it! Such an awsome story! Im so glad you wrote this, it makes my day. The only problem is that you haven't updated yet!!! It makes me so sad! But Im not going to go all annoying on you, like some people. This story Is definaltley getting added to my favorites. also I wanted to ask If I could link it to my websight, I put all of my favorite stories there. Email me back at, beach_side_gal@hotmial.com with an awnser, okay? Keep it up!
| Reviewed By: sarak On: March 06, 2005 00:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for creating such great work- it is often hard to find such lovely writing within an anime fandom, or within any fandom for that matter. Thank you, I hope you get more reviews so that you continue your works.
| Title: Show me that this is not a dream...
Reviewed By: Trusuprise [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 11:44 EST
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Very nice. Chillingly beautiful quotes, great physical and action descriptions. I love Shippou's line of, "Miroku... you were such a good friend, I'm sure gonna miss you." The word Koishi still throws me off a little, I can't really see Inuyasha using this word, but aside from that, Inuyasha is very much in character, especially when he is being demanding. So, in this chapter, Inuyasha almost calls Kagome his mate, and he tells her he loves her while she sleeps. We get closer and closer to a confession on his part! He's yet to learn, despite Kagome's insistance, that there are not three Inuyasha's, but rather only one. (Sounds familiar! :))You've created a great mix of Inuyasha being both guilty and selfish as he debates telling Kagome about what happened with Kikyou, while Kagome is trying to get him to agree to her request. You summed his feelings up well with: "he couldn't ignore that his love and desire for Kagome was stronger than his guilt." I will still, however, continue to pout until he finally confesses though! We also see Kagome get an ego boost power up. In other words, Sexual Prowess +1! The ending of the chapter was sweet, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. How will Inuyasha and Kagome feel about what happened when they will wake up?
| Title: YEAH!
Reviewed By: Mangomoo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 22:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC! I would have updated the last time but I didn't know that you updated. This story is just so exciting! I dunno how 2 explain it just makes you wanna read more. Now just so you know, I. Cant. Stand. Kikyou. I.. lol I'm not going to start about her but I just want to see when Kagome finds out about what happened with InuYasha cause I want to see her reaction. I can't wait to see that chapter cause I wanna see some action but just to let you know, I'm your side with that playdo. Anyways update soon! YOUR BIGGEST FAN!
| Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: February 19, 2005 23:15 EST
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I love this story! Where are you taking this, what is Kikyou getting herself into, how is Inuyasha gonna break it to Kagome, what kind of trouble is lerking around the corner for them. Please update soon, I can't wait to find out
| Title: that rocked!
Reviewed By: Miroku_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 22:27 EST
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awsome! so sorry i didn't review last chapter, i haven't been on in a while. anyway, that was sooo good. hope you update soon.
| Reviewed By: spumante [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 21:33 EST
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good story so far keep up the good work
| Reviewed By: euphoricbliss [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 20:21 EST
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i love inuyasha's human form~ its so cute and i'm really glad that kagome understands the emotions that inuyasha's going through. i think you do a really good job of portraying their emotions. please update soon~ i would hate to be left hanging for a long time
| Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: February 19, 2005 15:28 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very touching and emotional. Your writing has alot of depth and feeling. I really am enjoying this story. Keep up the good writing. Thank You, Cynbad146.
| Title: This is me...
Reviewed By: CresentMoon21 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 18:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god! I can't believe you left it like that! Argh! Please update soon! And don't worry, I feel for you! i only have 10 reviews and i have 7 chapters! Oh, the inconsiderate people that never review! Anyway, I LOVE your story! you have the greatest story line! If only the evil bitch Kikyo wasn't there... but i suppose if she hadn't done what she did inu never would have admitted his fellings... you have the greatest imagination! so much liike ookami-chan and amyfushigiyugi! i think i'll re-read your story now! Please update soon! -CresentMoon39
| Reviewed By: wh00t On: February 17, 2005 23:01 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay
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