| "LOVE POISON" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] |
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Reviewed By: skaterpg guy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 22:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh. I don't know if i've ever reviewed this story before... or how long its been since i've read it either... but i've been really bussy lately... so yeah. It really good. Refreshingly original, but not to crazy.
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 22:58 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another fabulous chapter. It really made my day when I opened my email and saw that you had written another chapter for us. Kinda like a secret pal gift. Anyway, on with the review. LP has continued to be a great piece of fiction. Inu is dead on in the chapter. There was one phrase that you used to describe him, "ageless golden eyes on the face of a young, sullen boy." I had to stop there for a moment. That phrase is pretty much the best description of Inu that I've read for a while. It incorperates all the pain and torment that he has gone through, and put himself through, but still takes into account that he is young and unsure of himself and will one day grow out of it. Excellent! I enjoyed the "we want to, but we better not" relationship that is going on between Kagome and Inu. Poor frustrated kids. You do well in adding that tinge of lust into the love that they are thrown into. It is almost funny that everyone knows about inu-youkai except poor Inu. Speaking of throwing into, what a harsh trick you are playing on Kagome at the end of the chapter. How sad that the perfect deception was fooled by the fact that Inu can't just come out and tell her that he loves her. You have written Naraku well in this chapter, especially the heartless bastard side of Naraku. Thank you for writing for us. Caitriona
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Reviewed By: DarkDemonHuntress [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 22:03 EDT
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IF U DON'T START UPDATING THAN I'M NOT READING YOUR WORK ANY MORE!!!! U NEED TO KEEP GOING THIS IS NOT COOL IF U LEAVE IT HERE!
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Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 00:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo-hoo! :D Awsome chapter! And honestly, I was so confused at the end at first...because my mind kept warring between deciding whether or not it was actually Inuyasha, os some other person, who was kissing Kagome...But, anyway, lovely chapter! I just want you to know that I for one appreciate you updating this story as much as you can, and you will never hear anything bad from me or one-liner reviews that only contain the word: 'review'. So, anyway, just take your time with the next chapter and don't stress out if it takes a little while to get out. I completely understand, besides works of beautiful fiction such as this take time to work out! :D Oh, and congrats on the winning of the two awards! I'm so happy that you finally got the recognition you deserve! :D Well, um...take care, and like I said, just update when you get the chance! Don't stress out over it by rushing. :D Until then, take care! Bye! ^_^
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Title: O-M-G!!!!!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue-not signed in On: September 05, 2005 17:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God What a cliffie!!!! that was awsome!! i was so happy to see another chapter and when i read it i was even happier. i cant wait to see what inu does when he finds out what is happening with kagome right now. or is naraku keeping kag company while kikyo does something to inu? anyway that chapter was really really awsome i love your story your imagination is off the hook. so please keep up the good work and post something again soon.
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 17:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful new chap! the tension inu has going on between his human and youkai selves is so good. i love it. you really have inu's personality nailed. i am excited to see what naraku has in store for kag. and, i also can't wait to see what happens with sango and miro...even though they're on the back burner of the story. i hope tomorrow is a better day for you. whenever you decide to update is fine with me. i'm just happy that you plan to finish the fic. it is one of my favorites! congrats on your award. keep it up.
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Title: Great Fic!
Reviewed By: Kitsune hanyou On: September 03, 2005 14:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is one of the most origonal fics i have read so far. I didnt see very many mistakes at all, and it flows so well. Please update soon. I'm dying to know what happens.
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Reviewed By: DarkDemonHuntress [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 00:35 EDT
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OMG!!!!!!! I'M DIEING HERE! PLZZZZZ UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: m On: September 01, 2005 22:29 EDT
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This is a very interesting story you have written. It's a lot different from the other stories I have read around here. I am very interested in hearing what happens next. Please write the next chapter. I am waiting with bated breath.
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Reviewed By: sailor saturn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 19:33 EDT
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Pweese update!!! i love ths syory!!!
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Title: OMFG
Reviewed By: DarkDemonHuntress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 21:23 EDT
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dude... UPDATE!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 20:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it. It's well written, original and had a few good laughs. You have my vote for best romance.
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Reviewed By: ani_girl7789 On: August 02, 2005 20:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!!!! i could guess what kagura has to do with the spell, but i dont wanna be right cuz i might spoil it, nee??? neways, great job, (whoever is writing the story... is it still scherazade?? im almost absolutely clueless cuz im not reading the A/N's...) i really like it, and im kinda lemon-lime hungry right now........ ill just wash it down with sprite.... lol!!! (get it??) update plz!!! i would enjoy it more, and ill review it again!!!!!!! >^-^
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 14:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just hoping that this little @$$ kissing review helps you to post a new chap. soon. this fic is the best and i see absolutely nothing that you could do to make it better. it stands as one of my favorite top 5 fics. i do a little dance when i think of a brand new chappie. no. really. ummm, yeah. thats all. ;p
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Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 15:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...this is great! Eh...I have to admit that I read your story before, but I never actually got up-to-date...and somehow it got put on a back burner somewhere...I'm so ashamed of myself! This story is just awsome! ^_^ I'm glad I realized it somehow got put on the backburner! If it wasn't for the IYFanguild, I would have never realized it! Anyway, I love your use of discription, and I love even more that you know just the right amount to put while still leaving a little to the imagination! :D This story is awsome, and I swear from now on I'll be a faithful reviewer! Scouts honor! Anyway, keep up the great work and just update again when you can! And I wish you good luck for the IYFanguild Awards, because let me tell ya, this story is more than worthy of being recognized! ^_^ Well, I'll be waiting patiently for a new update, so just update again when you can! :D
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