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| "Commitments Made In Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 424 ] | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 › » ] | Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 21:58 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapters!!! And I love your story!!!!!
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 21:09 PST
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And the word limit cut off my gloating of being able too say everything I needed to in one 1500 word try... One day, I shall kill thee word limit. One day... one day... *shakes head and pen tucked behind ear flys out, hits the computer screen, richochets, Rabid dodges, then goes to write fighting scene with half-naked bishounen fighting each other*
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 21:06 PST
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*is laughing* Heh, you mispelled 'wind scar' once and made it 'wind scare'. LOL. I'm broke too, soo betting wouldn't work for me. I need to stop spending all my money on manga... and convince the people who owe debts too me too pay up(so I can buy more manga). Optimistic about how long this is going to be, ne? Ah well, At the rate this is going, they still have to destroy Naraku and then you want to give them kids... I estimate at the very least 20+ chapters. Or maybe more... ^.^ You're right about Kagome, we don't want the Super Miko or the damsel in distress, so how are you going to do it? How am I going to do it? Hm, we'll see! Then Hiei... poor, poor Hiei. You know, I feel kinda glad now that Buyo's been strange- what did Hiei do to Buyo? Or was it Naraku???!? T_T *is assuming the worst even though she knows that Buyo is avoiding the demons or being tormented by Shippou* Poor, poor Buyo... how could you? T_T He never did anything to us... the poor comedy relief... Okay! On to a different subject, I'm not sure I'd get earplugs, I'd probably steal my friends headphones and some of her loud music that makes my head spin... that would block out the shrieks of fangirls... You kow, I can't wait to read what I wrote either. So I'll get to writing it! I've given you at least 5 reviews today alone... long ones at that. So I need to get back to writing it... Did I mention I loved that fight scene between Kuronue, Sesshoumaru, and Kurama? 'till next time! Hah! Word Limit I be | Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 20:51 PST
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You're so bad! o_o I was finally staring on my fic when the little message telling me I had a new e-mail, and that it was your update popped up! Well, of course I had to drop everything and run over to read it. OH! Speaking fo reading, the fic Rabid linked you to was hilarious. XD I was totally laughing the whole time, and then, oh my god the hips! XD I thought I was going to die, I was chuckling so hard. Anyway, you're right, I should have known you better. Now I can only wait in eager anticipation. Will Youko be poperly appreciative of her show of power? Will he shake her for putting her self in danger? *dances this was and that* I do not know~ *waves arms* My, ehm, dance is hypnotic, and makes you write. RIGHT NOW. Awmigawd, it does. You are working on the next chapter. NOW. *kicks feet excitedly* Why no, I actually have not had any sugar today whatsoever. Seriously, I haven't. XD I did yell at someone, which its very hartd to get me angry, so afterward I'm always like.. insane hyper to make up for the bad feelings. Whoo. Sorry. XD I ramble a lot when I'm like this. *flaps hands* But you are wonderful, dahlin. EVEN IF YOU DO INTERRUPT MY WRITING@ Bad. Baaaaad, bad. Baa-baaah blackhseep, have you any wool? Yessir, yessum, I never got the point of this rhyme. o_o;
| Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 17:17 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*snuffles* I wanted Kagome to go back with him, and kick some random Youkai butt with her miko powers. Because I don't think Youko has ever seen them, has he? oo *nudges* You still have a chance to do that. XD Of course you don't really, but.. meh. When I finished the last chapter, by the way, my only thought was "God. I love hiei." XD
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 17:02 PST
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As I was saying before the word limit so rudely cut me off, I need to work on it, but it's getting there. I guess it doesn't help that I keep spacing whilst thinking of the shirtless demons... who we love and adore. The fightings easy... it's describing them that's difficult... actually, I kinda consider it confusing. But hopefully I'll be able to get a friend to look over it and help me edit it. A non-Youko or Yusuke obsessed friend. Back to your story, Kagome and Kuronue, I foresee them being great friends. Very good friends. Very, very good friends. Very, very, very good friends. Ve-*is whacked over head* Heh, okay, just good friends. Nothing bad, I just felt like doing that. Everytime they turn around... your right about that, first, it was Inuyasha, then it was Youko, then Hiei, then Kuronue, and Shippou. Ah joy, who's next? Naraku? Heh, okay that wasn't funny. Hiei really only is protecting Kagome... so what about the rest of her family? The vunerable(yes, yes I spelled it wrong) ones? Kagome is vunerable... that brings up a question, in the begining you stated somthing to the effect that she was unable to harness her powers, and that no one had been able to help her. Is Youko going to be able to or will she remain defenseless except for the occasional purifying arrow. So that brings up a question(and another way too extend your fic), is Youko going to instruct Kagome in some self-defense? I'll cut off here, damn word limit, Update soon! 'Till next time!
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 16:51 PST
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I'm glad I can make you happy about the three reviews thing... it's the least I can do, maybe... er, Yes, the mass hysteria would be an issue with those two. Botan's oar, a steel baseball bat, and perhaps ear plugs. I bet you can guess what the ear plugs are for... :D I see now, I'm sorta surprised I missed it before, that Youko wasn't going to be the dominant personality. *nods* Though now you get to have fun and make problems with Kuronue not entirely trusting Shuichi... have you ever read 'By Any Other Name' by Deviant Nature? Or is it Deviation... er, yes, I was just thinking about how you both have a rather scary/intense Youko. That answers my question about the fists... now I just have to stop him from killing Yusuke. Actually... I already covered it... he's going to torture Yusuke to an inch of his life... *nervous laughter* Speaking of which, there's this one fic I'm sure you'd enjoy, just on Fanfiction.net... 'Pretty Youko' the url is http:// www. fanfiction. net/ s/ 1340252/ 1/ just remove the spaces, I'm sure you'll enjoy. ^.^ If I bet on how long this is going to be... first I want to know what we're betting... Yes, yes, I think all my review-ness was taken out earlier today by those three reviews for one chapter. Kuronue, I must say, is absolutely wonderful. No 2-dimensional bat demon for us! We have this wonderful, characterized, and oh-so wonderful(in so many ways...) bat demon that surely has captured the hearts of many an anoynoumous reader. Yes, yes, I need | Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not logged in i guess) On: February 25, 2005 16:18 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I hope everything goes ok in the Feudal Era and Kaede believes them. welx for the snacks! I can't wait for the little or big confrontation between Youko and Yusuke. I love this story and obviosuly I am hooked. I shall sit here again and wait for the next chapter...only leaving to sleep, eat and take bathroom breaks and showers o.o
| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 15:45 PST
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chocolate syrup eh? Mmm... sounds good. When are the two 'cuming' over to my house for some fun? Or we can make it a four-some and you can come over too! OHW! Hiei tooo! He can join the fun too! And any other really hot anime guy!
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 15:01 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say? Apparently it's more commonly known as the "Maitake Mushroom," and is native to Japan. [yawn] it puts me to sleep thinking of that infernal essay. I liked... Kuronue was perfect! Mischevious, funny, plotting... and I do like how you have not forgotten the almighty Sesshoumaru, the homicidal sociopathic bishounen extraordinarie! Though I have to say I'd put my money on him in a fight, as opposed to Youko and Kuronue. If nothing else- as long as Sess. has Tensaiga, he can't die. So... If Kuronue is going with Youko, than Hiei is staying to protect, right? I could very easily see Naraku slipping in while her main protectors are gone. ...I then had this utterly bizarre mental image of Naraku meeting a shopping mall... he's in the future, right? I really think that it'd be difficult for him to adjust to such a loud atmosphere full of noisy people, especially teenage girls. Perhaps sleep is needed. Ah well, I loved the chapter- and I very much loved your portrayal of the characters. ...It's funny, according to my clock you post at 2AM PST almost everyday... so I'm thinking you are either as much a night owl as me, or you live in a very different time zone. Regardless, it's nice to check email after studying is done and see an update notice!
| Reviewed By: Tsukiko-san [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 14:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to update soon!!!! I love all ur stories!! U need to update soon for my sanity.....................scratch that i lost that a long time ago -.-;; UPDATE!
| Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 13:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooooooooooooh. Imagine all the fun you could have if you knew all of hif fetishes. Wait. No bad bad thoghts Fury-chan. What happened to your innocent mind.*snorts* Innocent my @$$. Hey, I have a closet shrine to Youko and Kurama. I like to go in ther to relax. It is very calm. With candles and incense. I still need wards for my bishie closet though. Do you know how to make them? They need to keep mutiple people inside. Including ones who aren't human and have awsome abilities and powers. So what happened to your muses? Did they run away? Well I think even without muses you are an awsome author you should write books. I would buy some. ^^ I can see it know fanfiction fans all over the world will buy your books. You'll be a millonaire! Then with all the money you accumullate you can founder research on other dimensions. You'll be abble to get Youko, Kurama, and Kuronue. You could have your own bishie harem! Maybe. IF they don't escape. That would be bad because then we would have to fend off all the vicous fangirls. Wait that could be a good thing. Because then they'll thank us for saving them. Then they would eternally be in our debt. I we could glomp them forever. YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *BLINK**BLINK* Is it just me or does chocolate sound icky right now.For some reason I want some pinapple.0___0It's weird because normally I love chocolate.So weird.
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 13:20 PST
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*low whistle* Wow, 30 chapters already, damn, I don't think I could do that. Yeah, I didn't think Kuronue can be added to the pairing with Kagome and Kurama/Youko, it wouldn't go with the story and with Youko's possesive adittude. *horror look* That would be bad and terrible for Kuronue's health. Maybe he should get insurance... just in case, hehe. Shippo would make a great son to Kagome's mom, all he needs is paper work on him existing in Kag's world and he can go to school!... Hm, will Shippo be able to cover his tail and ears from unwanted attention? Please update soon! *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 12:18 PST
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They're a package deal, ha? Sounds like fun! So when do I get my package? I want to have some fun too, you know! OHW! Are they covered in candy and everything sweat?! yum!^^
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 08:37 PST
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Okay, and another review fell to the word limit. But yes, I'm working on it, and I have to say, portraying Youko while miffed is difficult... without outright killing Yusuke. Have you ever noticed how flimsy male shirts are? It's kinda scary, but somewhat joyful at the same time.... I now have an image of Youko in black(biker clothes) stuck in my head... ^.^ Ah, I can mention Kuronue's outfit again as I'm almost done. Yes, his outfit is nice, isn't it? I have to admit, I think the shirts the best part myself. And his hat, his hat is awesome too. Other than the comments I already gave, I really have nothing to say until the next chapter appears. Though I am beginning to think that this story is going to progress beyond thirty chapters... You've probably already stated that, so update whenever so I can mentally envision Kuronue(I already am, and forever will) the way you have him... I'm afraid I will now regard anything else OOC. 'Till next time!
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