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| "Commitments Made In Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 424 ] | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 › » ] | Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 13:20 PST
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And Youko knows! Naraku's reaction made me laugh... Though of course, the only reason most of us aren't gagging is we've been surrounded by the fumes and smells all our lives. The strained silence... gods, that's always scary... I'd say someone is going to need to enroll in the Witness Protection Program, or the Japanese equivalent, move to another country, and pray Youko doesn't feel like hunting him down... *nods* When Naraku had Kanna go through the well, I had a mental image of him laughing insanely as he threw her in... disturbing yet hilarious at the same time. And Naraku's essentials, what could they be? Ugh... Naraku's making me laugh so far... makes me wonder about my sanity. Ah well, Kagome's mom is reminding me of a real mother now. Not some alien scary person who is utterly accepting and pushing things for grandchildren. Your right about that though, we can just assume they get grandchildren. Or you could do an epiloque. A sequel would be far too enrgy-consuming... *so says one of the laziest people of all time* Though I'm curious, the contact thing(wouldn't Kagome's mom freak if she thought he pulled out a make-up compact?) is tuned to people with 6th senses. So wouldn't Kagome be able to hear it? Or did she and was I just being unobservant? Anyways, I can't wait to see what's next!
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 13:20 PST
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And Youko knows! Naraku's reaction made me laugh... Though of course, the only reason most of us aren't gagging is we've been surrounded by the fumes and smells all our lives. The strained silence... gods, that's always scary... I'd say someone is going to need to enroll in the Witness Protection Program, or the Japanese equivalent, move to another country, and pray Youko doesn't feel like hunting him down... *nods* When Naraku had Kanna go through the well, I had a mental image of him laughing insanely as he threw her in... disturbing yet hilarious at the same time. And Naraku's essentials, what could they be? Ugh... Naraku's making me laugh so far... makes me wonder about my sanity. Ah well, Kagome's mom is reminding me of a real mother now. Not some alien scary person who is utterly accepting and pushing things for grandchildren. Your right about that though, we can just assume they get grandchildren. Or you could do an epiloque. A sequel would be far too enrgy-consuming... *so says one of the laziest people of all time* Though I'm curious, the contact thing(wouldn't Kagome's mom freak if she thought he pulled out a make-up conpact?) is tuned to people with 6th senses. So wouldn't Kagome be able to hear it? Or did she and was I just being unobservant? Anyways, I can't wait to see what's next!
| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 12:34 PST
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stupid demigod! Just go and kill him too! I can't beleave he let Naraku out!
| Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 12:10 PST
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Me like story. A LOT. It is awsome plz continue soon.
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl (not logged in) On: February 21, 2005 11:54 PST
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Hehe, yeah I can hear what Kagome's mom now... WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO MY BABY GIRL YOU DURAGED FOX!!!!... fun, fun. I feel bad for Yusuke, Kagura, Youko, and Kagome 'cause they all have problems that they can't get out of... must suck. Hehe for them *snicker*. Anyway, Naraku succeeded! The damn bastard... Grr!!! He makes me want to cut him into pieces and put him into a blender and make him into a milksake... eww... that sounds yucky... Anywho! Please update! *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
| Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 11:28 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, no!!!! Naraku!!!!! He came!!!!! *screams head off*
| Reviewed By: Person... On: February 21, 2005 10:44 PST
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Awesome chapter! I loved it. Poor Kagome though... I mean having to deal with her mother... poor girl... although I still have to worry for Yusuke more... Youko is deffinately worse then Kagome's mother... although the show would be quite interesting. Two how guys fighting... fun, fun... I can't wait to see what happens next between Kagome, Youko, and her mother!
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Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not logged in i guess) On: February 21, 2005 09:33 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Welx for the sodas ^_^ and look! I'm not dead! so yay! you got it out just in time, fwee~! anyways, your right about Yusuke, but if he changed then he just wouldn't be Yusuke o.o can't be Yusuke without his Yusukeness attitude. Ohh shame shame, what will happen when Kurama finds out that Yusuke went to Koenma?! hiei knows and hopefully he won't say anything more then what has already been said. The new shard hunting group, and I thought the first one was weird >.> you can have more sodas, there are still plenty there ^^ I restock my candy,chocolates,any kind of goodies and sodas and chips...etc...what fanfic sites are you on? I know alot of different ones and if I don't know them one of my other friends do ^^...hope ya update soon! can't wait to read the next chappy!
| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 07:40 PST
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I loved this new chapter! Update! But yeah I know what you mean. Stupid writers block!
| Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 05:15 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool chap!!!!! Why do mother's have to question every thing?!! Why couldn't she just leave them alone?!! Mother's, you can never understand them!!
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 01:04 PST
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Ya~y!!!XD Your welcome! I thought that link would work better then me explaining everything. Anyway, good way of Kag's mom flipping out and Youko's pathceints wears thin... hehe, really good. I can just see Youko or Shuichi try to sneek into Kagome's room... *snicker*!!! That would be funny! And someone happens to 'drop' in on them in a kissing situation... *another snicker* that would be really entertaining if Hiei was the one too! Anywho, glad I could help you! If you aew having trouble, just ask me! *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
| Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 23:31 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Awmigawd. XD I was totally picturing poor Youko as a tennis ball, with Kagome and her mother being the players. Poor, poor unfortunate soul. I've always pitied any man who had to try to placate two women at once. I will be greatly amused if some of the stuff Youko brough up got him in hot.. well, maybe not hot. Just lukewarm/tepid water. Because we love him and don't wish actual harm on him. But he'd be so cute convincing her it wasn't just his instincts making him take care of her. (Yes, I am a hopeless FLUFF brain, I can't help it.) and and and.. Yusuuuuuuuke is in trou-ble! *hums happily and somehow maliciously all at once*
| Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 23:23 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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..Bad Yusuke! BAD! >>; Anyway.. xD I can totally see Mrs. Higurashi just blinking and going "How" to that last bit. Poor traumatized woman, can't take much more! Of course, she is a very understanding woman. o_o She'd have to be, with the life Kagome leads. anyway, nice as always. *lovemuch*
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 21:01 PST
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And it seems the general consensus among your reviewers is that Yusuke is an idiot! And a dead man. *starts selling tickets to 'Youko vs. Yusuke'* Bets anyone? ^.^
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 20:57 PST
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Ah yes, fun fun. We need the mom to react humanly for once... she gets rather creepy if shes always 'Oh yes! Grandchildren!'. Ah, I don't know, but at the rate your going, Youko is going to beat the shit out of Yusuke. It's almost like Yusuke signed a death warrant by Youko's hand with that call. I wouldn't really be surprised though... Kuwabara for once was the fountain of wisdom. Just goes to show caution goes a long way. How's Koenma going to react to this? Though he doesn't seem to overly concerned at this point, more concerned about her health than anything else. He so far hasn't freaked out, so either he doesn't really care, or it hasn't impacted him yet what happened. I wonder how the Reikai gossip-base will take this? I liked this chapter over-all, it seems to have just hit my head at the right time. I am feeling better- maybe it was those mental images... ^.^ 'till next time! I can't wait for the next update!
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