| "Commitments Made In Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 424 ] |
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Title: Mistake!!!
Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 18:29 PST
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Oops, sorry for got to tell yeah that it's really http://www. absoluteanime .com/ yu_yu_hakusho/ without the htm thing, anyway... Great chapter, I wonder if Kagome's mom is going to faint or either going to have a earful of fits... that would be interesting!
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Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 18:11 PST
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Hehe, I thought you would. Anyway I found a website that you would like to go to for that information. It's: http://www. absoluteanime .com/ yu_yu_hakusho/ .htm. The names of the three lords are: Yomi, Muruko, and Raizen. You can also can get good info on the other charaters in the anime and more into their pasts, I myself use it all the time. Update please!!!XD *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
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Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 17:35 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've simply given up on trying to figure out the spellings/pronunciations of characters! I mean, they are originally written in kanji, so there's no 100% correct translation to use anyway. I sort of just decide that the r's are r's, the l's are l's, and leave the rest up to those who speak the langauge! [hn] See there's this one clause that I really, really don't get. I mean, sure they're mated, but... for every reincarnation afterwards? That doesn't make much sense to me. Perhaps I don't know enough about the religious philosophy, but... if that were the case, then there's the whole Inu-Yasha, Kikyou situation - we don't know just how far that went- and it just seems, well, implausible to me. Aside from that detail, which sort of bugs me every time I see it on any story- I loved the update! I'm savoring the chance to read this because I'm about to start cramming for a midterm.
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Reviewed By: phoenixs_paiste [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 15:43 PST
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Yey Love the new chapter her mom is soooo...calm and excepting I don't know if I could be. Yusuke's turn to get his ass kicked around the room by Youko! *snickers* anyone else in line ;P Well be sides Naraku but he's getting more then an ass kicking. Koenma sooo cheats getting info that way! Is he gonna get an ass kicking too?? Tell me your not gonna make him an ahole and have him try to get ride of Kagome or seperate them or even take the jewel from her protection?! Anyway can't wait till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 14:50 PST
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Egh! I know! Don't you just hate that! I write too but I want to FINISH a story before I start to put it up or I'll get writers block and never finish the stories! wow! Run on! Don't you just love those? heehee update soon!
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Title: again Yay ^^
Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not logged in i guess) On: February 20, 2005 14:46 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ yay again for the fact that you updated, two chapters at that! I don't want to give you a stomach ache! o.o *takes back bowl of chocolate and pushes a thing of sodas to her instead* >.> there its a little better. Hey I'm on FF to,just under a different s/n sorta ^^; anyways I realy hope you update again soon. Her mother has found out O_O she's taking it well so far but what will she do next is the question. I am dying to find out, seriously o.o, I don't feel good so waiting might kill me! Yusuke is digging his own grave by getting Koenma involved when Kurama hasn't gotten the chance to talk to Koenma himself yet! *sigh* Yusuke needs to learn to listen more, but he has yet to do so. -_- anyways! ^^ hope I get to read another chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 14:45 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yuskue's a dead man!!!!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 12:10 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapters!!! Sorry I was out of town for a couple of days^_^!!!
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Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 09:01 PST
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Naraku is an evil bitch-whore, and I love it. o_o; Just had to let you know that little bit. XD and I know I've said it before, but I still love how you're having Kagome/Kurama/Youko interact. *licklove* And *I* think you're going at a perfectly fine speed. :P Rushing things never brings any good.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 07:51 PST
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Yes, a curse. But then again this chapter wasn't that bad. You left off at a good spot this time! Yeah! If this was a book I would of been going, 'one more chapter, one more chapter'. It's a page turner! I would never get any sleep! whooh! Thank god it's on the computer! I can't take it upstairs with me! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 00:26 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hn. Naraku has issues.[shrug] I guess he's just someone who's into bondage... lol. I do like how you didn't, uh, "idiot-ify" Kurabara/Kuwabara [I see it spelled both ways!] in this chapter. I mean, sure he's a little annoying, but I can't stand how so many authors rag on him as being mentally deficient. He does have his uses. He would sense something like Kagome when Yusuke's too busy being testosterone- poisoned to use his head. I liked. [happy dance]
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Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 22:15 PST
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Ya~y!!!!XD I'm soooo happy that I could help in a way! Usually I don't see people these days use the three kings of demon world in their stories and I think that is horrible. Maybe Hiei could spread the word in demon world and it somehow reached the kings, that would be interesting. They might be really upset about that. Anyway, I'm happy I could help you and is there a possibility that one of the characters can be reincarnated? 'Cause that happened to Kagome for Kikyo, I'm just curious 'cause I heard if your reincarnated, you have to finish a job that was left behind and continue that work. Please update!:-D *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 18:09 PST
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A fight scene between Youko and Yusuke? *drifts off into an alternate reality* Yes... they would both have to end up shirtless. Heh, I'm working on the second chapter, and suffering. The 2x4 keeps soudning more and more appealing as time wears by... I really liked how you portrayed Shuichi! It made me think of how I act like that at times, big words and all. Luckily those instances are few and far between... and I usually end up running circles in words around whatever unlucky person I come across. Enjoyable, really. I also liked how you had Kagome's mom react... it seems very realistic, as did with her kid-brother. How well Koenma and Spirit World in general react to the fact a miko they all know and adore is mated to a kitsune? A kitsune who had stolen from Spirit World, no less? Now that I think of it, maybe they should keep the shirts... but it should be raining so their clothing sticks to their bodies... Heh, that was about the fight scene. Which I suddenly want to write for the general yumminess of it... *sighs wistfully* Good health to you!
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not logged in i guess) On: February 19, 2005 16:01 PST
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Your welcome for the chocolate, there's plenty more *has a bowl full out* ^^; hehe. She took it better then I thought she would and that's a good thing. Poor Yusuke, he is very much in character and that's gonna get him in trouble with Kurama if he's not careful, just like you said. Yes, poor Hiei o.o, I feel sorry for him. Now we will see Kagome's reaction to seeing Kurama right? ^^ she thinks they are both gorgeous! yay! well they are! anyways, I await the next chapter! hope its up soon...
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Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 15:47 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I was so scared you were going to hold of on introducing Kurama, when you changed scenes. XD It took all a good deal of self control to keep from scrolling down to make sure you didn't. XD *snickers* Youko is jealous of himself, and I love how incredibly vain that is. =D
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