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| "Commitments Made In Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 424 ] | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 › » ] | Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 15:39 PST
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well... no. We wouldn't want that to happen... I don't want your story to end too soon. But you always leave off at the good parts!
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 13:34 PST
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Yes, he would have a hard time explaining to the hospital, what would he say? "I'm an evil, demonic hanyou from the Feudal Era and I found a time portal on holy ground which transported me here, and I was hit by a car.... got any vacancies?" Yes, he wouldn't say that, but that's all my mind can think of at the moment. You must retain your good health! Cough drops help, for me at least... I can actually stand the taste now. Okay! I was rooting Youko on with the whole, 'messily slaughter the detective if he asks any more questions then have red do clean-up'. Yes, I was. I must admit, Yusuke can be rude, crude, but he can fight. And Youko will lose all chance of killing him once he meets Kagome. I'm still wondering how in the world you keep up these updates... ah well... that's it for now! Remember, I wasn't able to find that 2x4... but Nyquil works too knock you out also. Now I have to go work on chapter two! *was knocked out before finishing chapter* Update soon!
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 22:08 PST
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Ya~y! Sorry I haven't reviewed but I'm now! Anyway, you have a big surprise for us reviewers on the final battle, ne? Good, I love good surprise. So, when will Lord Fluffy enter the picture of your story? If Naraku is going to get Kagome and the jewel... will he take over the human world? Or worse.... demon world! Ahhhhhhhh!!! *runs around in a very small room* we're all doomed! Unless... *bangs into wall* Owwie... Ugh.... *shaks head* Unless Fluffy-sama and the other three kings of Makia do something about it. Now that would be interesting to read about. The three kings of demon world wouldn't be to happy about that, no sir-ie! Good chapter, please update! *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~* (If you want some info about the three kings, just ask in the review response! I'll be glad to help out!)
| Title: Awesome AGAIN
Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not logged in i guess) On: February 18, 2005 21:58 PST
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^_^ yay more chapters, I hate the fact that I didn't get to review for all of them each but I do really like the story and I am hooked, I am so happy you updated again though ^_^ hope you get to update soon *hands you chocolate* you deserve the chocolate for updating the story and to keep you awake and hyper? ^^ hehe anyways I hope Kagome takes the news of what exactly Youko is, pretty well and hopefully Kuwabara and Yusuke won't mess anything up ^^ new friendships though so yay!
| Reviewed By: Person... On: February 18, 2005 21:36 PST
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Hey! I abolutly loved this chapter! Although I was a little sad at the lack of Youko/Kagome interaction, I thouhgt the InuYasha/Kagome part was sweet, and definitally needed for Kagome to be able to move on! I can't wait to see the next chapter! I have to wonder though... son't you ever sleep? I appriciate the updates and all... but they come out frequently throughout teh day and night... I don't think I would be able to do that! Ja ne! ^.^
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 21:06 PST
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Wow, Arbor and I are both sick! Don't you feel special? We're both so addicted or something that we read this! At least, I'm addicted. She's stalking you and your awesomeness. Heh, this is the last random review for tonight! I swear!
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 21:02 PST
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Hah! I exactly used every single character! And I said everything I wanted too say! Go me! ^.^ *sneezes and is thrown out of chair* @_@
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 21:01 PST
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Go you and your wrath! I feel better now! *has sat typing for the last hour or so listening to anime soundtracks* That is, I don't feel like knocking myself out with a blunt piece of wood... no one would help me find some anyways... In retrospect it's a good thing. That dream scene made me cry! Really cry, not just say I did. It was sad, yet sorta encouraging... T_T Poor Inuyasha! Ah yes, I updated my story, the first chapter. I know have to work on the next one... I'm beginning to wonder how in the world you update so much... Ah well, I guess I'm going to have to wait as my parents are planning on knocking me out with Niquil in four or so minutes. Knocking myself out with a blunt object isn't okay, but pills are? This world makes no sense. So this actually leaves a few options that Youko doesn't know, for the whereabouts of Naraku, he either made his malicious way to the future and rampaged while Kurama was searching him down in the past... O.O Is Shuichi going to go to the past instead of Youko? No... Shuichi wouldn't really stand a chance against Naraku... his spirit energy reserves just aren't enough to bing out the big guns Youko uses... So anyways, or he is hit by a car. *was reading you reviews earlier* Or a train, that would be amusing, but impractical to the plot. And there wouldn't be enough dramatic tension... unless you did it just right... OKay! 'nough babbling on my part, Update soon! And re-read the first chapter, I did mention major edits? Liked this chapter!! | Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 20:59 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm sorry. I would lick you apologetically, but then you'd get germs. @_@; I've been in bed, sicker than a dog for the last 30 hours. But even running a fever of 101.7, I stalk you. :O! You simply cannot get rid of me. Anyway, I found out that Hiei is actually a lot more talkative than a lot of fics imply. Or he is in the manga anyway. ..sorry, ramdomless splurts out of fevered minds. I dont remember what chapters I have and have not reviewed, so I'll just be general as possible in my response: YAY. There, I think that sums it up. ;) The fact that Youko likes her so much more than Kurama does, right now, tickles me absolutely pink.
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 20:51 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know... it's the only, comment dit-on, tender? picture of him I've found. for Kagome... There are those scenes when she's in modern Japan wearing those dresses... like when she's on the unwanted Hojo date? or when she's sleeping? That I thought might go well with it all. Hmm. I'm curious to see how the whole bondage (non-kinky!) Naraku's trying to pull off will work in conjunction to Youko Kurama. which leads me to the question, do we know how old Kurama is? It gets really confusing when there are two at the same time in the same time... paradoxical, gives me headaches!
| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 20:41 PST
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Stupid evil Naraku! why does he have to be so mean!? Just go and kill him off already!
| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 20:29 PST
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heehee! Yeah! I love this story! But I feel sooo bad for Kagome! how sad!
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 18:28 PST
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Okay! Now, the actual review, I found those two chapters oddly absorbing. As in I hasn't expected to really want to read anything while sneezing, coughing, and having excess moisrure forced from my eyes. I wasn't crying, just feeling generally miserable. Youko was portrayed excellently as usual, everyone is to be given their moments of doubt. The scene in the kitchen made me laugh, I was thinking 'It's Dr. Jeckl... or whatever that one maniacs name was...' Through that. I have to say, I can't really symphasize with either of them as they are going to have to work this out. Kagome is understandably like that - I'm glad you didn't have her totally understanding and such. Or maybe you did and I'm just really out of it... idiotic pills make me tired and lethargic.... I especially like how Kagome and Hiei were like, "Hey long time no see! What was it now??? Ah yes, 500 years for me, a week or so for you!" Not really, but that's the over-all impression I got. Update when you feel like it... I will update my fic soon too... if Fate doesn't decide too send me more diseases... Good health too you!
| Reviewed By: phoenixs_paiste [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 17:39 PST
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MMMM...snuggle the fluff moment. even if it was kinda a sad fluff moment it was Still cute and sweet!! Hmmm.... as stupid as I feel I have a question about some thing from two or three chapters ago. The part of the well the demon wizard (or what ever he was -.-) when he changed the spell on the well he said that it only allowed people (or err...demons too) that from his rivals blood line to pass throught. Who was the rival that cast the spell???? When did he do it and Does that mean that Inu Yasha and Kagome were related???? I would love to hear what your answer to that little part is. I have to apploude you for that explination of the well though. I think that is a very good and plasadle way that it allows her to pass throught to the past. Never would have thought of that on my own. HMMM... nother reason to bow down to your abilities as an author.... Loved the chapter can't wait till the next.
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 17:22 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me, #100? [woosh] That's never happened before! So I put the pix up here, should you wish to see it; it's the first Youko pix. http://www.geocities.com/shabopo/images.rough.htm.htm If you've a good copy of photoshop, google around for good images and transpose them. [shrug] or at least that's what I'd do. It's wonderful how fast you're posting this... though sometimes I've'n't had the time to review yet! not complaining though! Your writing style is somewhat reminiscient of my best friend's; it makes it all the easier to get into the flow of the story.
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