| "Commitments Made In Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 424 ] |
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: killerkitty1106 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 16:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude this is so cool i cant wait for the update! i wonder what naraku is going to think of the future?
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 16:06 PST
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X-X I know I'm going to have to re-read those chapters again... damn cold... Ugh, no long review today, I'm going to go drug myslef to sleep or something. Medically... or hit myself over the head with a 2 x 4 board... that would also work... I can only say I think you will need to update soon, but take a break if your feeling stressed. After all, wait... then you'd get a bunch of pissy people after you... 'scuse my language, I don't bother censoring when not feeling well.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 10:53 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You just had to stop there didn't you!!!!!!!!!!!! *screams head off* It's like stopping in the middle of a lemon!!!!!!! I'm going to kill you!!! *stops to think* Madey I won't, 'cause then who would finish the story^_^! Great chap! But please update again Soon!!^_^
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Reviewed By: phoenixs_paiste [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 09:45 PST
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You evil evil tempterst!! Don't stop there!! MORE!!-.- Anyway another great chapter. If I wasn't addicted before now I am throughly now. I can't wait till the next chapter. I like the way you've handeled the characters!! HEHE I can't wait till the next chapter with the explination.
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Reviewed By: Fogkit On: February 18, 2005 07:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*bows down to the awsome updating powers* Very cool story I can't believe how fast your updating and with such long of chapters I told my friend to read this and how fast your updating and she didn't believe me.:) You should bring Fluffy to the future. I'll bet Naraku would almost or would get hit by a car. :P
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Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 01:37 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
issocute! I have this one pic of youko with a tender expression on his face, and it totally matched how I pictured him acting towards her. I've been looking for the link, but... me being me, I've lost it at the moment. Reagrdless, reading more was wonderful!
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Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 22:40 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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+content little smile+ I love, love Youko being so soft and caring to Kagome. and this makes three chapters displaying something of that nature. Its just so sweet! Although I find myself taken over by helpless giggles if Yusuke saw Youko playing the part of a mother hen. xD I believe when we chatted on AIM, you posed the question to me, if there was anything I wanted to see in particular in this story. I'd been distracted from answering you then, so I'll do it now. Nope. Absolutely not, I have no desire to guide your hand, because I believe you are doing a more than fine job on your own. Thank you for being so very approachable and un-scary, and allowing me to carry out my stalkerish tendancies against you and your immense talents.
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Reviewed By: moonlightdemonKita On: February 17, 2005 22:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hurry with the next chapter or I shall sick my giant 3-headed dog on you! I really like this story
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Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 21:00 PST
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I totally agree with you, Kouga has to ditch the fur and armer look and trade for maybe leather or even a sexy cowboy look...*drool*... I wonder what Fluffy-sama would look like with a tux.... hehe I can just see him now. Anyway, did I mention how much I hate Naraku? He's really getting on my last nerve and pushing me on edge. *right eye twitches* Yep, he will most certainly will die by someone but it can't be me 'cause I'm not in your fic (even though I wish I could... ) If I did, I would secretly go undercover as his servent and then attack the bastard (sorry, got the strange habit from Yus-kun....) Anyway, good chapter, even though I hate Naraku's guts and everything about him, update please!:-D *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
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Title: SessKaglovur
Reviewed By: SessKaglovur [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 20:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good! i hope u update soon! i just hope this was NC17 instead of PG! but thats ok
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Title: SessKaglovur
Reviewed By: SessKaglovur [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 20:23 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good! i hope u write more soon!
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Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 19:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fascinating... always surprised by the contents. I wonder, is Sesshoumaru going to have a role in this story? keh- almost 100 reviews? I'm impressed. I get about 1 review per every 500 visits! ...eagerly awaiting what comes next!....
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 19:27 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, alittle scary but great!!(it's scary 'cause Naraku's plan is almost done and Kurama left the house AAAAAHHHHHHH!!!)
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 18:52 PST
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Hm, that solves the problem on how Youko will be able to get back... But it also presents the dilemna that Naraku has access. You mentioned Kentaro(I think) only loves challenges, and would probably not bother witht things that bored him. Why'd he help out Naraku if he was bored? Unless I skimmed over an agreement... Hm, more and more puzzles. I want to see Kagome's reaction, okay, read Kagome's reaction to the news about the split! It will definatly be interesting... I think. Ah well, update soon!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 18:17 PST
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I love this story! Please update soon! I'm soooo happy that Kagome's not going to die! But I would like it if she were to wake up soon.
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