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| "Commitments Made In Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 424 ] | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 › » ] | Reviewed By: kawaiigirlanime [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 14:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love your story I started reading it last week and I just got to say it is great. I can't waight till you update again. Love the story :D Update soon!!
| Title: hmm...can you help me
Reviewed By: phoenixs_paiste [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 10:49 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yep I have to say this story keeps getting better and better. I think your going at a very good pace not too slow and not too fast. I like the way your developing the characters, their relationships,the plot, etc. I like the way you've written her mother. Excepting and willing to try but not a push over or too passive. I have a question.....I feel kinda stupid asking this in a review but I'm getting frustrated and despreate....There's a story I really like on FF.net. I have how ever lost the titile an the author's name. I'm trying to find it again. It's a cross over between YYH/IY. In the story most of the past is a flash back. Kagome's home, pregnaunt and mated to Youko. Final battle she was sent home by the jewel in the end. She's going to college. Where she meets Keiko. Sesshomaru is a professor. Then Keiko takes her home after fainting. They are attacked by a worm. The YYH Team shows up. Kagome kills the worm but faints. The take her back to Rekai and Youko finds out he's gonna be a daddy! That's the short of it. I really what to find it again coulda swore the name wa something like Meant to Live but I can't find it. If some one knows what I'm talking about please help me! e-mail me at phoenixs_paiste@yahoo.com. THANK YOU SO MUCh for letting me do that on your review. *bows* *bows* *kissed feet* I LOVE your stories! HEHE *sigh* wish I was half the author you are then I might actually do a story. Lots of Ideas no talent. Can't wait for the next chapter
| Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 10:38 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, wow! Best Kur/Kag fic I've read. Keep it up. Please update soon. I'll be back!!!
| Title: avidreader
Reviewed By: Samantha121212 On: February 22, 2005 07:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You sure do know how to keep a person in suspence! PLEASE don't let Kurama and Yusuke get to violent with each other. I mean, Yusuke did tell Koenma because he was worried and can you truely believe that Youko would just up and tell Koenma that he got himself a mate? I don't see him doing that especially when it's such a powerful miko like Kagome. When you think about it, Yusuke was probably right to tell Koenma. AND the dangers that followed Kagome had nothing to do with Yusuke telling Koenma so Youko can't be mad at him for putting his MATE into danger. PLEASE have Kurama keep a tight grip on Youko so Yusuke can tell him his reasoning. I mean, Yusuke didn't betray Youko OR Kurama. He was trying to be helpful. PLUS, now that the others are all dead, Kagome will need Youko, Kurama, Yusuke, and Kuwabara to protect her since Naraku is here in the present. When will Genkai show up? I think it'd be cool if you had Kurama take Kagome's family to Genkai's shrine for more protection. I mean, she does have those wards that actually work! Unlike Kagome's grandfather's that don't work at all. Yours, Samantha
| Reviewed By: Fogkit On: February 22, 2005 02:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I still can't believe how fast your updating. Also I can't wait to see what Kagura going to do after not seeing Naraku and being able to plan for 500 years. Maybe she'll turn him into the police :) but I bet she'd want someting more revenge-like
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 01:31 PST
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Yeah, I have to agree with you. Sorry, I can be a disgusting freak sometimes, especially in lemons O.o, lol. *snicker* Yusuke's going to have a beating of his life from Youko and same with Naraku. Heh, I pity Yusuke but never Naraku... *sigh* a total hot guy but has major mental problems... how sad, so fine yet a total nutcase. Anyway, will Kag's mom ever give Kag a break, especially her brother?... I think he might be over protective of her 'cause I am to my older sis and it's kinda weird..O.o in a way. Please update!XD *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
| Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not logged in i guess) On: February 21, 2005 23:50 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh sounds cool! I like reading that stuff >.> anyways, Yes I can see this all happening. Poor Kag's mom, doesn't know what's gonna happen. neither do I but still! Yusuke's gonna be in trouble!! Kagome, poor Kagome, will find out about Naraku. So sad about what the jewel has done, but she wouldn't have met Kurama if not for it...or would she have? o.o? anyways! I shall wait and read the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 22:37 PST
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No, no, I wasn't glad I mad... I reached -32. There's a point where you give up and continue typing. Basically, all I put down was 'I'm glad I made you happy! Update soon!' See? Unexciting, boring stuff. One day I'm going to see how far into the negatives I can get... but that will only be when I'm bored or uninspired. Which isn't now... I ramble about the weirdest things...
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 22:35 PST
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So happy! But I have one burning question- how the hell do the Higurashi's own a car?! *much thought has been put into this matter* Think of it, they live in a shrine, in the city, on top of that really steep hill... and it seems to me that they just wouldn't use a car... T_T *sigh* I think I just uncovered a pet peeve... one that I was oblivious too till I suddenly realized they were in a car. Okay! 'Nough about that! You're right, Naraku's essentials aren't something to be delved into right here... but it makes an interesting story idea. Naraku's still making me laugh... the bad guys always make me laugh, much to the annoyance of the other viewers. C'mon! They're amusing! 'specially the evil laughter. I feel sorry for Kurama- Shuichi, not Youko- because he's sleeping on the couch. Do they even have a couch? I dunno... Anyways! Kagome's mom is right though, if he survives through 'mom examination' he'll qualify for her daughter. Creepy... I never want to have to go through that... 'mom examination'... What if they made you cook? *blinks* You could have her try and make Kurama cook... or not, I don't really see her getting that rude... or maybe... Hm. The pollution thing, I live in a 'rurban' area, so it isn't as bad here... but whenever we venture into the city, I feel like I'm being suffocated or something... but I think that's just the mass amount of people. Ah... Kagome just didn't show any reaction... heh... yeah, so I wasn't thinking she had heard. I'm glad I mad | Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 22:16 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hn. [Isn't that the coolest word?] I'm a little uncertain about Youko being on the couch. Sure, Higurashi-san isn't happy about him being there, and the situation, but she's struck me as a proper, politer person, even if she doesn't like the guy. I can see how it would be hard to accept the reality of the situation- but if that was the case, finding Kagome's blood everywhere would be a huge shock into the actuality of what was going on. She'd be uber-protective, and whatnot, but I don't think she'd brush things off as possibly false. I mean, for a person who didn't flip at the sight of a bloody demon [no pun intended!] with ears, when she met Inu-Yasha, would be a little more grounded, in my opinion, at least.
| Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 22:05 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes it is a scary thought!!!! I really, really love your story!! Thank you for making it a story and not keeping it as an one-shot!!!!!!
| Title: ^^ cooly
Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not logged in i guess) On: February 21, 2005 19:01 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol thankies. Nfiction? haven't heard of that one, I know a couple of other I think besides the ones you listed. No things aren't looking good for Yusuke. Wait til Kurama finds out, Yusuke did infact go to Koenma and Kagome finds out Naraku has come to the future. It's not gonna be a bumpy ride (sorry i had way too much candy today) WEEE and now! Kagome's mommy is being way to nosy and demanding! I'd sneak Youko into my room ^^ now i wait to read!What will happen to yusuke? will Kagome find out about Naraku? Will her mother stop being so nosy? and will Kurama find out about Yusuke going to koenma?!Tune in next time for "Commitments Made In Blood" ! o.o see ya soon
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 18:32 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keh, I can never remember if I've reviewed or not... this is one of the only fics I try to do so regularly on. I like how Higurashi-san wasn't all accepting of everything all at once. I mean, if I showed up and found out that my [hypothetical] daughter, who had been half-dead, was now engaged or "mated" to someone, permanently, that she didn't know... I'd flip. After which, I'd have my brother castrate the guy. Slowly. Without anesthetics. So... it drives me crazy when everyone makes her accept bizarre mates, threesomes, etc. without batting an eye, because that seems so very implausible to me. It's a pleasure to see interaction between characters that you would actually see happen, should such a situation somehow take place! I'm under the impression she's still a bit in shock about all her friends/Inu-Yasha dying... holing it up in her mind, or some such. It would take a while to come to terms with such a thing. Especially if you've involuntarily killed the man you love. I look forward to reading more!
| Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 14:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so proud of you. You have been updateing so much that it makes me want to cry from happienes. It also makes me feel ashamed for not updating my own stories. Anyway, keep up the updates and I will most likely review again.
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 13:21 PST
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Dang... I was hoping that wouldn't happen... Sorry about the double-post... Heh, just think of it as double the appreciation for all this hard work your doing!
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