| "Commitments Made In Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 424 ] |
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Reviewed By: grapejellybean [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 07:27 PST
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Now the story is getting good. Not that it wasn't good to begin with. You have been typing away like crazy apparently, because it took me a couple of days to get caught up on reading the story. It's wonderful as always and now comes the fun plot twistes. What will happen next? I can't wait! All I can say is just don't let Youko beat Yusuke up too much. He does deserve something for going behind Kurama's back though. Ok enough with my rambling I need to get back to work. Your story is lovely as always and keep up the hard work!
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Title: I'm bored...
Reviewed By: Autumn Norris On: February 23, 2005 00:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was bored so I decided to review you on AFF and this!!!! Yay!!! Go me!!! Anyways... hmm... I don't really have anything to say... I said it all on my AFF review... Oh well!!! I'm extremely hyper and I have no clue why!!! I didn't have much sugar today... Who cares!!!! Hey I just noticed! Inuyasha is on the T.V. right now... I already saw this episode earlier today... oh well!!!! It's a good episode!!! OK... well I better be off, I have a few demons to kill (Naraku), and a few demons to date (Sessy, Yoko, etc...)... but that's all in my dreams!!! *Bursts into uncontrollable sobs...* I WANT SESSY TO BE REAL!!! AH!!!! *Sniff sniff*... now that I got THAT out of my system... Please update!!! Oh I was just wondering... could you maybe read my fanfics on FF.net??? My penname is Yoko-Sesshoumaru, and the stories are "Easier to Run" and "New Friends, Old Enemies". Frankly I think they are terrible, but some peeps like them so I have to update them *sigh* never again will I threaten someone to update...
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 20:53 PST
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Naraku/Kagura? Nah... I basically detest that paring... She's a fav character. I imagine that fic would be more comedic and short than anything else. I was thinking about it... but I wouldn't be able to stop laughing or soemthing like that. I'm just not sure... 'specially as I basically picture him as a sadistic bastard... Laughing leads to coughing anyways. Heh, I walk alot, but that only pertains to the 10% of my life off the computer. Hm, I am still betting on Youko. When are you going to let him out next? ^.^ I can't wait. Though the thing with Inuyasha dream sequence, isn't that cheating? You gave away the answer so easily... To them at least. I would have made them struggle around for a few more chapters at the very least... though it worked the way it did. I should mention though, the only time I don't laugh where Naraku is concerned is when I'm alone or he's hurting Kagura... Then I'm either paying attention or throwing objects at the screen. Yusuke has a right to be nervous, and Youko has a right to beat the snot out of him. Youko's query is feasible though, how much can Yusuke bleed before getting to the verge of death? We can't kill him again... he wouldn't come back this time. And that concludes my rambling for this review! 'Till next time!
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Reviewed By: Shabopo [logged out] On: February 22, 2005 20:33 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hn. Plant-guy [Youko] vs. schizophrenic demon guy [Naraku]. An interesting mix. Hiei as a protector... have you ever seen the little icon that flashes different clips of Hiei while saying "Don't Mess with Hiei"? Anyway, that's what came to mind. Surely Naraku would take the time to check for youkai presence around Kagome?
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 20:21 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chappy!!!! I wounder if Sesshoumaru will help Kagome??
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 17:00 PST
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You're right... Kurama is the type who has had hundreds of years to perfect his cooking skills... makes me envious almost. Not really though. A PwP for Naraku's essentials? That's scary. It really makes you wonder just what's in there... At least it makes me curious. You're right about the car... but I can still see someone dragging a suitcase 'cross town. Or using a taxi... but it worked with the story. Though I can see Kurama, with how determined he is, walking across the city with his clothes. If nothing else, at Youko's insistence. Kurama isn't like me, I happen to be quite lazy. If that happened to me I'd either 1) Actually do it, 'cause I feel like it... or 2) think, 'tomorrow will be a better day...' But I can see Kurama walking across the city to get to the shrine with his suitcase. That's all the rambling I'm gonna do for now! Fun chapter! ^.^
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Reviewed By: killerkitty1106 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 16:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this chapter rocks!!!I wonder how Sota is going to take this? Will kurama become his new idol?
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 16:33 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Souta!! I wounder what Kagone's family will do when they see Hiei?!?
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Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 16:28 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
[grin] I like your spin on my suggestion. I look forward to the Kurama-Yusuke confrontation. I mean, seriously. Even Hiei trying to intercede would not cool down the enraged kitsune... the whole territorial instinct thing's an issue; as well, Kurama probably feels really betrayed by Yusuke's lack of trust in him and his actions. It takes a great deal to smooth something like that over.
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 15:35 PST
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OH, being a die hard Sess fan I have to ask ... WHAT HAPPENED TO SESSHOMARU? HUH? WHERE DID HE GO? Did he take Tetsusaiga? ... ...... Incase you hadn't noticed ... I seem to have a thing for all sociopathic charas ... don't know why. I like Hiei from Yuyu ... Sess from IY ... Ben Crawford from Weiss(don't ask, I don't know) ... Tsume form Wolf's Rain ... Tatsumi from Yami no Matsuei ... you get my drift.
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Title: Commitments
Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 15:19 PST
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See I told you I'd be back. Goody for Yuusuke, Hiei gets to brave the anger to Kurama. Anywho, Thanks for responding, it's so nice to know that an author actually responds to her reviews. I can't think of anything to add to the story, other than "is Yuusuke gonna have a run in with his dad? ... BTW I haven't seen anything beyond Koenma trying to seal Sensui in a barrier ... so I haven't seen Yuusuke's demon form. Seen pics of it though, looks cool. Anyhwo ... Keep it up! I vill be baack! Arnold accent, in case you didn't get it.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 15:15 PST
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Heehee! Funness! Please update soon! I want to know what happends next in the ficy! And I'm really not THAT bloodthirsty. I just want to see all the bad people dead.
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 14:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so Happy! I'm so Happy! I'm so Happy! I'm so Happy! I'm so Happy! I'm so Happy! I'm so Happy! Update again soon! Update again soon! Update again soon! Update again soon! Update again soon!
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Reviewed By: phoenixs_paiste [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 14:44 PST
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Thank you your so awesome! IT's cool to know one of my favorite authors enjoys some of the same stories as me. To bad it may have been left unfinished. That one was a well written story too! Anyway I think that you handled the situtation between Souta and Kurama very well. You dealt with emotions that I wouldn't have even thought of thought. Poor Kurama her family really isn't gonna let them be together very easily. Are they! I hope they come around eventually. Hey are you gonna have a scene between Grampa and Kurama cause I can very well see Him flipping out over all this! That could actually be funny with his tendency toward offdas and such! Anyway I too look forward to the next chapter especially if it has Kagura and Naraku's reunion in it. Something I've been wondering for a while what does your author name mean???
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not logged in i guess) On: February 22, 2005 14:19 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, we shall never know. Oh well, you're right, they are together. damn that Naraku though! he must have a fetish for ruining peoples lives ^_^ Poor Kurama, having to take the glares and everything, but that's what is to be expected I guess. I'm not an Inuyasha fan, I like the others more ^^, I like Naraku too but...*sighs* ANYWAYS!! o.o; i shall wait to find out what happens in the next chapter. Hiei has to tell Kurama about what's going on and the whole Yusuke going to Koenma thing. Things aren't going to be pretty!
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