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| "Commitments Made In Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 424 ] | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 › » ] | Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 00:07 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! I love Kuronue!!!!
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 23:45 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
[happy hum] Kuronue... I've never seen the movie/show or whatever that had him in it, I've only read some of the manga, which he was not present in. I'm curious to see how you portray him. Most people either shoot for hiei-esque thief hating humans, or a gooshy romantic. From what I've read, it sounds like your portrayal will be far more three-dimensional, but considering the quality of your writing that is to be expected. Botan... are you going to make her head-over-heels for Kurama? A lot of people do; it's sort of annoying. [weird thought] I have to say the only person I've never seen her paired with is Hiei... what a scary thought! I rather enjoyed Hiei- your depiction of him has him a lot more, well, functional; he's not as bi- polar as I was afraid he'd come out to be. I very much look forward to reading the next chapter or two, probably when I should be doing something else! [grin]
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 22:15 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh... that's a rather embarrassing family moment, ne?! One thing I don't get... if the mating mark is mystical and can sense things like infidelity... wouldn't it be able to tell the difference between non-consensual and consensual situations? It doesn't make all that much sense to me that it would punish a person who did not willing trespass on the bond. [shrug] It's something I see, and I don't quite get it. Regardless, it was a wonderful chapter!
| Title: ^_^ hehe
Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not logged in i guess) On: February 23, 2005 20:00 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol thankies,loved the chap ^^. I loved the part where Youko had to heal Kagome. Now maybe her family will learn to leave when asked. lol yeah Naraku is in deep shit o.o; maybe not that kind but still you know what I mean. Jealousy is a very dangerous thing...sorry I have been watching too much Rocko's Modern Life lately. anyways i wait to read to again find out what happens. there is plenty more soda and chocolate ^^ and sweet snow(ice cream) if ya want some. I overstocked but thats ok! it's all good
| Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 19:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I almost couldn't finish the last part of the chapter because of how emberassing it was. I felt like Kagome which means your a very good writer to be able to draw your readers in so much.
| Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 18:41 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok cool, thanks for telling me! Great chapter!! I can't WAIT untill you do the lemon!!! What... I LOVE lemons^_~!! Call me a pervert if you like, I don't mined!! 'cause I em hehehe^_^!!!
| Title: O__o Oh god...
Reviewed By: Seishin'jousha On: February 23, 2005 17:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
As I was reading this chapter, especially the whole dream scene with Naraku, Hiei, Youko, and Kagome, I couldn't stop thinking about all the "resourceful" things you could do with plant life, vines in particular, and no, I don't mean fighting. Hehe! Some of the sentences were weird; such as "He with Youko something-something" I believe it is actually: "He, with Youko,blah blah with a yak or two..." Even with the uncommonated interruptors in the chapters, I was impressed with the way you described Youko and Shuuichi's conflicting feelings. By the way, when are you going start describing the other characters, such as: Yuusuke, Koenma, Hiei? And where is Boton, Yukina, KAYKO?! You have a myriad of characters from YYH to play with...hehe, "play with" hehe...And I bet you used Kurama going to the past as a ploy to re-introduce Kuronue into the works, you sly dog you *glares playful* *shrugs* I don't blame ya for wanting to write with Kuronue...with his skin tight pants...oo~ooh *eechi smile* Ryu-san, have you ever had the itching to do the most wildest pairings? I did...whoo boy, it resulted in Sesshoumaru, Youko, and Hiei as pets and I'm-sure-you-know-who as the owner.Hiei was a cat, *snicker* I would post it, but I'm only signed up on Fanfiction.net and, as you all know, Hard R fictions "aren't allowed" because some stupid nine-year-old, who shouldn't have been reading them, decided to report. I want to meet this person in a dark alley, preferably with a sharp knife...
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 17:30 PST
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Yes, yes... I suddenly remember why random thoughts of Naraku and what he would carry around kept popping into my head all day... *forgot about this idea* Heh, about the dream sequence. I know there's more than you let on(you just told me...) but I still considered that cheating. Now I don't, as she was attacked in her dream... *forgot that if Inu could go in, others could to* I guess I was thinking that her powers somehoe helped shield her from influences she didn't want. This whole dream thing... it seems to be suddenly popular... Hm, I must say, I really liked this chapter! There's just something about Youko/Kagome fluff that makes me want to read and re-read it. Yep! Mild torture? I just gotta say, ever since we discussed Youko and Yusuke fighting(half-naked) I have been wanting to write it... Heh, the mild torture is fun, as long as it is in a mild way compared to the more exteme forms of torture. *nods* Though Youko is going to get distracted with Kagome's family and Naraku breathing down his neck. That's all for now! I can't wait to read the next chapter! ^.^
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 17:13 PST
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I thought you would be interested in my ideas. Okay, my first one is: Youko ties Yusuke to a chair with a very powerful chain for torturing demons in the old days and make him listen to childern annoying music like 'Bingo', 'Barbie girl', and 'any other songs that are very annoying(I can't think of any at the moment...) and then make him watch all the episodes of Barney and the annoying Tellitubies(sp?) until he cracks, hehe. Another is that he has to baby-sit Shippo(once he's alive again...) and Souta but they are very hyper and running all over the place in the city since Kagome wants them to 'explore' the city but in cogneto(sp?). Another is to fight Yusuke to a bloody pulp but he'll have to apologize to Kagome and make him her slave or something... hehe, now that I think about it that would be funny *snicker*. Anyway, poor Kagome being embarrased by her family and junk like that, I know I would in her place... *dreamy smile* with Youko licking my bo-boos away... hmm yummy!!!:-) I seriously have to take a very, very cold shower. The scene was very good but very embarrasing 'cause it's imitating yet you can't do anything about it and that sucks... oh well, it was still good. Please update! *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
| Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 16:47 PST
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Me likey story. ^^ Me likey very much.^^ But...Damn...Grrrr. Now I'm having thoughts about a kitsune that I shouldn't. Dam,n you for being so sexy Youko!!!!!
| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 16:12 PST
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I don't know where Arbor went. Did you try looking in the washer? No telling how long he'll last in there. ^^ Yeah! Another chapter! And I can't wait for Kagome to get him back! ohw! I can't wait!
| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 14:57 PST
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Heeheehee! I loved it! Souta kept falling off the couch! Heehee! Update soon!
| Title: yepyep
Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not logged in i guess) On: February 23, 2005 14:06 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah I'm the same way about the pairings. I used to read a lot of Kag/Inu pairings but then they started getting on my nerves -_- anyways, hope you get to update again soon. Naraku knows Kaogme is home because of the enrgy spike, not good. Kurama didn't really seem to happy about Inuyasha coming to Kagome in her dreams, maybe he thinks she still wants to be with Inuyasha and that is her way of doing it. Guys get jealous easily >.> Yusuke is so in for it, he better hope someone in Heaven likes him or he's a dead man. My dog is sprawled on the ground o.o; sorry that wasn't supposed to be typed, i was looking at the ground though, anyways!! ^^; *eats chocolate* want some? *has bowl full again, and a thing of sodas too* ^_^ now once again I shall wait and see what happens!
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 12:25 PST
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Ya~y! Another wonderful chappie! Hehe, y'know I imagened that Yusuke was being bonk on the head by a huge hammer by Kuwabara and he said "I told you so, moron! Don't piss off Youko!" and thought it was kinda like Mario...*sweatdrop* I have to stop being so adictive to video games or it's going to be the death of me. Seems like Souta has interest in Kurama, that's a good sign... or is it? Now for the grandfather... *sweatdrop* that's going to be a hard challenge. Yusuke is definitely a dead chicken, er, duck... yummy....*dreamy look* I wonder how Youko is going to start the torture... *evil smirk with a dark look* I've got some ideas but I'm not going to voice them, to not frighten you. *snicker* What about the toddler though? Isn't he going to suffer Youko's wrath too, since the relationship isn't any of his business. Anyway, great chapter so far, please update! *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
| Reviewed By: phoenixs_piaste On: February 23, 2005 10:22 PST
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Hmmm... That's where I thought your name came from but to tell you the truth I don't trust my memory about that. Me, spelling and grammar well lets say we really don't get along. i love the new chapter. Souta's reaction to Hiei was priceless. I think that was actually very funny *snickers* It really makes me wonder how many people have had a reaction like that to him showing up in that way. *taps chin with finger* You know I wonder if he could get away with it and not get yelled at by Koenma if he would actually scare (by showing up like that) random poeple just to watch them have heart attachks. He comes across to me as having a slightly twisted sense of humor. How come the story says that its complete in the status bar?? Are you sotpping there and making a sequel? or did my eyes lie to me. Which by the way is very possible. As my husband say I'm blinder then a bat if I don't have my glasses on or contacts in. Can't see more then like .....um.... a foot or two infront of me before everything get blurry. Which brings up a question. Why do most super heros have perfect eye sight?? Do htey all have to have twenty/twenty vision?? Anyway stupid question. Can't wait till the next chapter
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