| "Always A First Time" Reviews/Comments [ 259 ] |
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Title: amazed
Reviewed By: star-brella (not signed on) On: May 19, 2005 18:15 EDT
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Another good chapter! I like the perspective on Bulma's pov and vegeta's past. I think this is the first time i heard somone say that vegeta doesn't have a biological mother and was 'made' from all the bloods of past kings....very very unique. ^_^ Keep up the awesome work cuz i'm definatly looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: rose of vegetasei On: May 18, 2005 12:02 EDT
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*breathless* Wow! That is one of the most creative description of life on Vegetasei I've ever heard (even if the story Vegeta told was short...so much was still said). Drats! Bulma's not pregnant yet?! I bet she will be soon though. *evil smirk*
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Reviewed By: GTT On: May 18, 2005 11:28 EDT
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This is so romantic
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Reviewed By: anja On: May 18, 2005 10:20 EDT
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Weew, good chapter, I just love it when Vegeta gets... er... sweet-kinda-thingy.. I don't have a word for it... hehe.. but i loved your chapter, update soon
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 20:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWW, I really love your chapters, they are so sweet. Vegeta is great, and it's really refreshing to read your writing! Twenty thumbs up, and update soon, with a longer chapter!
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: May 17, 2005 15:28 EDT
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wow that was very good, and very powerful... I loved the characters in that piece and that conversation between bulma and vegeta was priceless
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Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 11:00 EDT
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Awww... I know its not the most informative way to respond to a chapter, but it's what I felt in my heart when I finished reading this chapter. The few ending lines were just delicious as was the whole B/V interaction. It really rang true. Such great carachterization!
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Reviewed By: rose of vegetasei On: May 16, 2005 11:03 EDT
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Wow. Last chapter I sympathised with Yamcha, this chapter it was Bulma. The signs of a great writer is one that can toy with the reader's thoughts and emotions. *thumbs up* I love it whenever we get to have a glimpse of Vegeta's thoughts and emotions too. He's always a character where you want to know what he's thinking and we can in fanfics. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: catgirl26 (didn't sign in) On: May 15, 2005 00:35 EDT
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I REALLY liked how Bulma handled Yamcha in the infirmary. By having her keep her cool and try to react in a calm, rational manner, you've shown that her character has grown a lot. I really thought she was going to blow her top, but I was impressed! And besides that, the whole immature yelling, throwing breakables at the wall thing is so common, it's refreshing to watch Bulma act like the adult she is :)
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Reviewed By: Flamingo6584 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 21:25 EDT
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Well, Deb, I had to read it since you put my name in the story. You are so good at capturing Vegeta's feelings, the ones he has anyway. I like the lemon part too. Great job, update soon (I know you will)I don't like Yamucha much, but that is my personal opinion. You sort of made him pathetic, which I don't mind.
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Reviewed By: star-brella (not signed on) On: May 14, 2005 15:00 EDT
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wow, poor yamcha...but he had it coming. I guess everything is out now btw Bulma and Yamcha ^_~ better than letting it inside right? lol! keep up the great work and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Jess... hmmm.... On: May 14, 2005 02:09 EDT
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well that was good... except you didn't kill Yamacha j/k... well anyway... that was a great chapter... I loved the flashbacks veg had while he was straining to get to the surface. Liked the little moment between Bulma and Yamacha; he'll eventually realize its over for good... Can't wait for the next chapter... ;P...
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Reviewed By: catgirl26 (didn't feel like signing in, Deb!) On: May 12, 2005 19:36 EDT
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Wow, Deb, I wish I hadn't waited so long to get started on your fics! This is phenomenal! I'm really enjoying your Vegeta. He's arrogant and stuffy, but you're doing an excellent job of showing his vulnerable, more confused side, as well as giving us reasons for what he does, without spelling it out too much. Yamcha as the not-quite-villain is also very good. You've shown him as a good, emotional guy who is just having a hard time coming to terms with things. I can't wait to see how the Vegeta/Yamcha confrontation will turn out!
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Title: Hatred
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 00:04 EDT
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OMG - Bulma and Vegeta don't have perfect mind-blowing sex every single time? My vivid imagination was having a hayday with this chapter - poor Bulma's face was turning as blue as her hair before they finally gave up on "water sex!" I love how you keep him off balance just enough. He'll be all macho and rude, but then keeps his flying to a tolerable speed because she asks. Yamcha sweetie, get a clue. Pack your suitcase and move along; it'll save you a few hundred bandaids. ;)
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Reviewed By: EleneK *whatever* On: May 11, 2005 19:34 EDT
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Oh you evil, evil woman leaving it right there. Shame on you!!! I wasn't crazy about Bulma's behavior but I liked the tension between Yamcha and Vegeta.
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