| "The Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse" Reviews/Comments [ 452 ] |
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Reviewed By: AngelHeart2122 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2011 03:37 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this story! You did a wonderful job of keeping with the original story and yet making it your own. I loved reading about how much the characters had changed in 500 years. You did a great job of making sure they were different and yet still the same all at once. I was impressed with all the detail you put into writing this. I hope you will continue writing. |
Title: I loved it!
Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2010 07:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe I haven't read this story sooner! This is definitely going into my "fanfictions I read all the time" list. This story was AMAZING from start to finish. I loved it. LOVED IT.
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2010 19:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY WAS AWSOME I LOVED IT ALL THE WAY TO THE END!!! I THINK U R A EXCELLENT AUTHOR!!!!HPE U DECIDE TO WRITE ANOTHER FIC SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2010 19:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY WAS AWSOME I LOVED IT ALL THE WAY TO THE END!!! I THINK U R A EXCELLENT AUTHOR!!!!HPE U DECIDE TO WRITE ANOTHER FIC SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2009 22:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww this was GREAT!!! I finially finished it and i wasn't disappointed. your a great writer with a good attention to details. i hope u write more stories! maybe one about Rin and Sess! hing hint lol
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Title: Very nice
Reviewed By: damocles7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2009 21:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't really say much 'very nice'. Well executed enjoyable read. The Seven was a bit of a long drag, but well done. :)
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Title: Finally
Reviewed By: TiffanyM [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2009 23:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I finally got around to finishing it lol, it was absolutely amazing as is your writing. Sorry it took my soooo long but work has been extremely hectic =] This is definitely and fave of mine now =]
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Title: just stumbled in
Reviewed By: TiffanyM [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2009 20:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing story thus far.... I only paused long enough to type this up As for the Sess/Kag comment in the last chapter, I completely understand.... after her and Yash mate she will be his sister so he would in fact have respect for her as well as some form of affection. Off to actually read this chapter and the ones after it =]
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Title: Award Nominations
Reviewed By: FlameTwirler [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 01:45 PST
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Congratulations Fenikkusuken - your stories have been nominated at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008: The Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse for Best Completed Serial One Hundred Thousand Lifetimes for Best Canon and Best Oneshot Revelation for Best Comedy, Best Lemon, and Best Oneshot This is only the first step in the process though - all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at http://inuyashafanguild.com (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions - their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again! FlameTwirler
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Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2008 15:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So my question to myself it: HOW THE HELL DID I MISS THIS FOR SO LONG?!?! Excellently, excellent fiction. I've always been a fan of girls who kick major ass so your Kagome is officially my hero for life. Not only was your canon believable and original it also stayed true to the core of the InuYasha story. I've spent the last week reading this and I'm pissed that it's over. Reread time!!!
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 12:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg your fic was sooo awesome! i loved itXD one of the best ive read=D actually to be honest...i saw this fic a couple months ago... and was like...is this one of those kagome in the future ype fics so i just scrapped the idea of reading it...then like a couple weeks ago i saw it again and decided to read the first chapter cuz all your reviews were sooo good and you had alot of views....i have to say...i loved it form the very beginning=D i couldnt get off the computer! and i had a lot of hw at the time too=D just finished it yesterday=D so kawaiiiXD i read it like nonstop...you have really good talent..just wondering...are you gonna make a sequel? cuz i keep imagining diff scenarios in my head for sequelsXD lol just means i love it so much that i want moreXP
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Reviewed By: ezaangel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 03:36 PDT
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Moving, I was immensely impressed by this fiction, so much so I took two days off university to finish it :) But anyways I loved the ending yet I was saddened by Kagomes loss of power in sorts Ohh well I'll just have to get used to it... Thank you for this
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Reviewed By: God Amongst Mere Mortals [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 14:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah I have to say Fenik, I have read just about all of your competition. The purities, chronicles, lucky ones, the extended mating season, heart's landfill... well and just about any other high caliber Inufic you could name. This one still impresses me the most. By far it is superior with its AU setting twist and the characters are well developed. Besides the shear tenacity you have shown at the length this thing is is truly remarkable. Good job! I always look to this fic whenever I feel stuck on my own! I'm trying one Continuation/Divergence fic and one AU with mecha/ scifi themes. I hope I can be 1/5 as successful as you have been. TY for the amazingness, and I would very much like feedback on my fic some time from you! Message me since I don't solicit other fics in reviews XP
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2008 23:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be one of the best stories I've read! And you finished it! You did a wonderfull job!
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 02:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was amzing... it took me forever to read it, but wow.... that has to be one of the best stories i have ever read... i loved it... kagome was so strong and powerful.... i loved how you switch from one time to the next... and i loved yashita... some of my favorite moments were with him... you did a great job in recapping the anime.. i loved this story... i hope you continue to write so that there will be more great stories like this to come!!!
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