| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 10:43 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh yea i forgot....I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOO- *take a breather bubbles* -OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THAT CHAPTER SO VERY WERY MUCHY!!!! *toothy grins* lol, I kno I'm crazy, no need to inform me.lol they Ja ne!! ^_^!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 10:40 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!! !!! *pouts* That word...*growls* CLIFFY Are you sure you dont make them n it's only intereting endings?! KAMI!! I fell out of my chair and my butt is hurting *rubs butt while glaring at the computer* I HATE CLIFFIES. GRRRRRRRRRR!!!! Atleast my i wuz right with my hunches about sesshy having a thing for kirara. That scene with them wuz bootiful. OMFG!!!! Inuyasha and Sango both having sexual feelings towards each other and the same goes for Miroku n Kagome.I really love the way kirar tlks..'naughty kitten' tsk tsk tsk...she really does put a good name to us females;in my book. Even tho you said your not giving me any hints ( which i think is jus rude.*pouts*lol) I did find some in chapters, but i'm not gonna rat, i'm grateful for your writing style. I really am an inquisitive girl, mostly in the good way, but i tend to get a lil out of hand. I feel like I'm in heaven, you're blessing me with these wonderful chapters. *wipes imaginary tears from eyes*lol oh n in the chapter bfore this, i thought that inuyasha speaking in thirds wuz sexy. *whispers* ::dont tell sesshomaru:: lol. GREAT JOB!!!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 08:31 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well well well, first of all, i would like to apologize for not reviewing, or reading chapter 53 earlier. So, Gomen!! Now for my review. What can I say? I fucking love this fic!!!!. I really enjoy kirara's attitude. "Put me down, you overgrown chicken!" LOL, that wuz funny, and when she called him a fat chicken!lmao, kirara is so arragont and stubborn. Dam! And the way when she told the sensai, "listen well my pupil".lol. I'm gonna kill myself with laughter. She's so awesome!!! When she wuz in her human form n wuz shuddering cuz she had to touch the sensai wuz right out histecrical! I kno cats hate bath, n she's willing to take one cuz she had to touch him.lol. Oh, n dont forget the fight between those sexy inu. *drools* The image of them fighting is so fucking hawt! They are very wery bad Inu or should i say 'kittens?' lol. Bad bad inu's!! very sexy, but bad still!!!lol. I'm drooling over them too much,ne?lol really dont care.oh, that last part had me laughing when she wuz chastising sesshy about cleanliness.lmao! Funny, JUST FUNNY!! And for once, I'm gonna TRY not to beg for hints, since you clearing dont wanna give any *pouts* how cruel can you wonderful writings be? It's bad enough that you all know the meaning of cliffies!!! I've finally lost it. Your lucking your a wonderful writing. That word wonderful is an understatement for you ya kno? *sigh* enyway, i'm thankful that I tryna tolarate your dreadful cliffies. I LOVE THIS FIC, CHAPTER N YOU!!!! Thanx for making my day with this chapter. Arigato!!! Pwease hurry n update. No wait, I'll say that AFTER i read the next chapter. hehe...so, I'm off to read your last updations. I, ofcourse love this. Ja ne!!! ^.^!
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Reviewed By: Reignashii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 01:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is a cool story ^-^ hehehe i couldnt stop reading till i finished >-< im looking forward to the next chapter!
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Title: Oh goodness!
Reviewed By: monkeymary89 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 15:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! I have to say I've searched for a really good Inuyasha fanfic for a while. This is it. You have really returned to me my faith in fanfiction. You are obviously very intelligent. (Biologist? Oh my goodness! Science was never my strongpoint ^_^;;) Don't ever doubt your writing skills! You have style that I haven't seen in a loooong time. I absolutely LOVE this story, and can't wait for an update. By the way, what an evil cliffy you wrote! For shame! *grins* Still, you've given this girl quite a few laughs, and I want to thank you for that. This story ROCKS!
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Reviewed By: Jerri On: June 30, 2006 13:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm actually enjoying this story alot. It's different enough to not lull me to sleep and it's fun. Although I'm sitting here waiting for Dr. Who to show up somewhere...One of those things that cause me to be torn a "that would be cool"..."but I don't know if it would help the story"... A Dr. Who / InuYasha crossover...Hmmm....
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Title: Chapter 54
Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: June 30, 2006 09:45 PDT
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I think that I've managed to confuse myself completely in this chapter. I'll come back to the first section in a minute. Section two, with the Kai-wolves confused me only in that I can't for the life of me remember what "miroku's thing" is supposed to me. I have thought about it and thought about it. I have even considered re-reading the entire thing since they came into the picture, but I can't for the life of me think of what that smelly thing could be. Perhaps I missed something. How about a hint.... The third section, with Kirara, sess and company.....You didn't tell us what her initial plan was, so I can't really tell what has gone wrong in this. I think that in this chapter you allude to K being scent marked as if she mated. I REALLY didn't think that was the case. Is it just that K was around him so much that she smells of him? Both Rin and Sess himself say that he won't hurt Kirara, so I don't really think that he will let her drown, but that was a good cliffy. Kirara really didn't think that THIS is what would happen to her. I don't know if it was your intent, but it seems that you are implying that Sess is becoming "interested" in Kirara. If mating with a human is bad, how much worse is mating with a CAT! Back to the first section. You did a great job of not only explaining some of the basic tenets of miroku's religion, but you also did some great work in the conversation between him and Midoriko. The relationship between the four of them in the group is so dynamic and you do a great job of making it realistic. You aren't trite with it. Oh well. Regardless, I think this is a wonderful chapter and I look forward to reading the next one. Caitriona
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 13:54 PDT
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Eeeep! Evil, evil cliff hanger!!! You wouldn't. Right?
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: June 28, 2006 13:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!!! Sorry I didn't review the last chapter, anyway is Sess attracted to Kirara? That would be cool if they got together but isn't he in love with Rin? And why hasn't he realized that she and Yourei Taisei couldn't have mated because he already has a mate? And what was the whole point to this anyway, what was she trying to teach them? She was obviously wrong about Sess so what is it that she was wrong about when it came to Inu? *shrug* I'm confused. And I can understand why Miroku would need Inu's permission but not necessarily Sango's Inu could hurt him way worse than Sango could and under mate right Inu could kill him too. Anyway the next chapter sounds like it's going to be very interesting so update soon ok ja!!!
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Title: Chapter 54
Reviewed By: lunatickat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 00:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I recently discovered your fic and I have to say that I just flew through it. It is absolutely engrossing. I just couldn't get enough. I love so many things that you've done. The whole time lord twist is unlike anything I've read before and I can't wait to see how the group fixes this "nexus" problem. And I must say that I LOVE what you've done with Kirara. I'm a cat person and it totally cracks me up how regal and defiant your Kirara is and how similar my own cats can act sometimes. I hope Sess won't leave her in that water too long. I like where their feisty relationship is going. Please keep up the good work. Hope to see more soon.
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Reviewed By: Twinkle On: June 27, 2006 22:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating. Excellent as always. I absolutely love the depth of character you have given Kirara. I am also thoroughly enjoying the dynamic between she and Sesshoumaru - Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Twinkle On: June 27, 2006 22:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating. Excellent as always. I absolutely love the depth of character you have given Kirara. I am also thoroughly enjoying the dynamic between she and Sesshoumaru - Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 21:09 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OH OH OH PLEASE DON'T TAKE TOO LONG UPDATING!!! I am so inlove with this story! I want to know what Sess will do! Poor Mir I probably feel the worst for him right now! What is that about the wild dogs? Are they paring themselves off as "belonging" to certian "humans"? I was a little confused about that. I really love this story and have been following it for awhile. Please don't let me hang for too long!
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: June 27, 2006 20:04 PDT
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He most likely is acting like that becuase he is attracted to her. I do not understand why she does not let anyone see her humanoid form. Sessy/Fluffy better save her!!! Update soon!! ^_^
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Title: soon
Reviewed By: sempai19 On: June 27, 2006 19:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhh!!!! I hate and absolutely loathe cliffy's. Please update soon and save me from my imaginative mind.
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