| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Title: W00t! Ch. 52
Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 03:53 PDT
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15 minutes to collect Rin and Shippou? I can't hrlp but feel some of that time was spent priming the kids. Also, being a heroic kind of guy, even if he himself doesn't think so, I'm guessing Inuyasha will try to save both. Looking forward to the next chapter and more Kirara/Sesshoumaru flirting!
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Title: Ch. 50
Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 19:39 PDT
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Sesshoumaru and Kirara flirting? That's a pairing I never considered! I like, if that's where you're going. But, call me kinky, you kind of ruined it for me by revealing Kirara has a humanoid form. (It's all good between informed, consenting, adult sapients.)
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 16:46 PDT
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I like the thing with Tenseiga requiring a bit of Youki; there should be a price.
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Title: Ch. 40
Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 16:37 PDT
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THat Kouga, what a bad egg.
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Title: Ch. 37
Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 15:50 PDT
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I always think Kouga is a total asshole (pardon my French) so I'm totally with you on Kouga. Nothing concrete to say.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 10:20 PDT
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'Because of this ability, we don't age as other humans do, and if you place a specific mental connection to another human, they won't age either."' -- Seems awfully convenient and doesn't make any sense, at least to me.
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Title: Ch 11
Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 19:49 PDT
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I like the details when they are all jammed in the bottom of the well.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 19:26 PDT
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I have read this before! A month or two ago. Don't know why I didn't add it to my favorites and I don't know what the last chapter I read was but that's OK 'cause it's keeping me interested rereading it.! Ouatic-7
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 08:29 PDT
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LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 09:40 PDT
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DEAR AUTHOR ... I HAVE READ YOUR STORY AND....IT ROCKS!!!!!!!!! I indeed think you could take on sueric... she is an amazing writer and so are you.You both have your own opinions on how Inuyasha acts and stuff. i love this story so much!!!!!! It is amazing... the whole time thing is really awsome.. i wish i had an imagination like that but i'm clueless.So i hope you continue this story because i love it!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Facets of the Living Jewel
Reviewed By: taishorin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 09:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The origionality of this story is fantastic, going indepth into the characters as all InuYasha lovers have always wanted. New characters are developed well and not just incidental. The enjoyment in reading this is a "can't stop reading" type of enjoyment. The author is highly educated in many things it appears when you read this story, as you learn new things as you go along. It is nice to see the true use of karate terminology and the reasons behind them. The author needs to be congratulated for her first fanfiction, it is excellent!
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 08:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, dont thank me...all thanks go to you for making 'Facets' in the first place. I have been enjoying this story from the start, so I thank you again for writing it. Am glad things are better for you now as well. A for the chapter: it was great. I still love how Kirara speaks her mind. As for Kohaku, makes one wonder if he did distract InuYasha or not. Cause Kanna is never up to any good. It was like she needed the blood for something, but what. Awesome chapter. Update when you can.
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: May 15, 2006 16:43 PDT
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Excellent chapter! Sess's interaction and sparring with Kirara is hillarious. I almost spit coke on the keyboard when she started kneeding his thigh. Only a cat. This story has so much going for it, the least of which is the bonding within the group. I can't say enough good about it! Thanks so much for writing for us! Caitriona
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: May 15, 2006 16:17 PDT
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Kirara is hillarious in this chapter. I don't know if I like her or the three faces of Inu better. Caitriona
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 04:41 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been so long since i've reviewed. I really enjoy this fic so much. I do love it, n sorry for not expressing it in the reviews, but now i'm doing it. This fic is so amazing!!!That Kirara is something! It almost seems as if she n sesshomaru might get together. My head still hurt when i'm trying to figure out the conection with Kanna and when that other soul thingy went in sango's body, n why she needed sango's blood. Not gonna tell me huh? Oh well no problemo, I'll jus wait for these wonderful updations like allways. I really love it!!! Ja ne!!
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