| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: May 14, 2006 15:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I'm glad u updated I was begining to think you were dead. I'm glad that whatever was making you sad is better now though. *sigh* I agree with Kirara Sess is being an idiot. And I really feel like hitting Yourei now....he was such an asshole!!!! I understand what he was trying to teach them but he was still an ass. I really wish Inu had bit him. But I am very proud of Inu for not flinching when Yourei pressed that sword to his throat. Well update soon ok and I'm trying to be patient but I just really would love to see Inu kick Sess's ass. ^.^
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos (nsi) On: May 14, 2006 12:31 PDT
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i just had to review even though i'm not signed on. i absolutely adore how you portay kirara! as the proud mama of a very tempermental and territorial kitty i always smile when she gives it to the dogs. and inuyahsa is showing a wonderful new found maturity. i think it was always there below the surface but never brought out. he did always wrry about his demon hurting people and exacting revenge but sometimes i think humans hold grudges much worse. the demon only seeks to eliminate the threat, the human side seems to want to cause pain and misery, bent on revenge. and sessy...ahhh smelling like a neko. i'm lokking forwardto your next installment. i'm curious as to why kagome and miroku are having such trouble with the mind meld. but does she and inuyasha know they have one? and does his demon still want the full moon with "him" being out so much more often? wonderful work! (if you feel the need to respond, i'm an author so my email is in my profile)
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 01:04 PDT
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Your story has won Second Place for Best Best "In-Character" Fiction (for your characterization of InuYasha) from the Feudal Association. Your award can be found here - http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/april2006awards/Best_In_Characte r_Fiction_2.jpg The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 00:19 PDT
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Your story has won Second Place for Best AU/AR Fiction from the Feudal Association. Your award can be found here - http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/april2006awards/Best_AU_AR_Ficti on_2nd.jpg The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/
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Title: OMG! ^^
Reviewed By: inuyashas [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 16:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!! this is the best story i have ever read!! plez keep it coming! @-@
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 09:54 PDT
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Wow, you've really done your research and it shows. Ch. 50 is one of most enjoyable things I've read in a while. I loved the interaction between Sess and Kirara. Is that a little bit of sexual chemistry I'm detecting? Poor Sess, if there is he is doomed. Kirara would definately be someone who could keep him in his place. The lick was just perfect. I have a part siamese who is very vocal and I'm sure that her language is not nice at all. I'll be sure to take notes and learn what Neko I can. The idea of a cross over with the Dr. Who universe and Inuyasha is a good one. What with the well I'm surprised I haven'ts seen it before. I was really expecting Kagome to regenerate when she died instead of just reviving. What happened? It can't be because she is half human since the Doctor is too. Good luck in the first quarter voting at IYFG.
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: April 23, 2006 20:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea you did make me wait but it was a long chapter so I'll forgive you. I like the opinions Kirara has of Inu, it's nice to see him get some more recognition. And it's about damn time that Inu put Shippou in his place. You know since he is a kitsune I think Shippou gives Inu such a hard time because foxes are cunning and Shippou is just testing Inu to see if he deserves his respect. *sigh* I really do want to see Inu and Sesshy go at it. That would be soooooooo cool!!!!! And yes I do understand how vacations are few and very important. I was kinda taking my own by being at my friend's house all weekend. Well I loved the chapter and update soon ok ja!!!!
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Title: Forgive my delay!
Reviewed By: Inu4ever(NSI) On: April 23, 2006 15:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was such an entertaining chapter to read! Thank you for sharing more of Kirara's personality with us! I love the Neko! Having her spar with Sesshy was priceless,but when he licked her,I thought I'd fall off of my chair in a fit of laughter!! Bless you,my friend..I just love your story...Will update you in private about how life has been with me...Namaste,my dear LP!
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Title: Vampire?
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 06:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I forgot to ask. So, the boar was drained of blood. Hehe, is that what Sesshoumaru had for dinner? Hehe. It's plausible, and for vampire fans, exciting.---Snow
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Title: Awsome!!!!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue not signed in On: April 22, 2006 23:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all i can say is awsome!! WANT MORE!!!
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Title: frani1375
Reviewed By: frani1375 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 20:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Please update soon! BTW, what site is PM? I've never heard of it. Could you e-mail the link to me at bracletbab@yahoo.com? I am always looking for more stories to read and sites to post on. Your story is really good.
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 16:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter! Loved Kirara's attitude and all her discussions. Wonder what will happen next time Sesshomaru comes around her, lol. And Kanna....shes up to no good. When has she ever not. Heh, as for the psych book? Its all Latin to me, so I know I wouldn't understand any of it anyways, lol. Great chapter tho, cant wait till you update again. And you're most welcome about FA. I think you're also correct with the typing of your story as well. Maybe IYFG should make a cat. like that. I dunno. Anyways, update when you can, soon hopefully.
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Title: My oh my, The Cat's in the Cradle
Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 14:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My oh my, the cat's in the cradle And Sessh's temper is all else but stable; The challenge's been launched Hackles raised, shoulders hauched, To the 'Puppy no Taisho' of t'fable. But Kirara just can't give a toss Cos she's sure to show Pfffft Hhhssss who's boss. The Cat's out of the bag And there's fun to be had; Something tells me Sessh's in for a loss! But right now I cannot get rid Of the image behind my eye-lid Of the bawdiest nature With one inu and neko On their wedding night, who's to be bottom'd. *snickers* Fireworks just doesn't cover the dog-cat interaction of this chapter darling. I enjoyed it specifically when Shippo was having his little interaction with Inuyasha, though. That was really precious. Although now I'm beginning to suspect that the way Kohaku's behaving is tightly tied to Kanna's presence there. I think the closer she is to him, the stronger Naraku's hold on him is. Or perhaps that is what you want me to think while you're really brewing something all the more deviant in the background... I'll soon know! ^v~ M-sama
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Reviewed By: selenityshiroi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 13:22 PDT
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The Sess/Kirara thing in this chapter is creeping me out, but otherwise this story is wonderful!
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Title: Chapter 50
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 07:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! You literally had me laughing! Especially when Sesshoumaru licked Kilala. That was too totally awesome. I was amused with your author's note, but wondered if I would really enjoy the chapter. It was just great. I have always wondered if Kilala had a bi-pedal form. Hm, does she have kitten ears? Or ears like Sesshoumaru? I really, really want to know. I hope that this is the beginning of a romance. Squeee! It sure looks like it. I'll be smiling all day, envisioning Sesshoumaru licking her. Please have some more neko/inu love bickering.---The section with Shippou was great. And I'm really confused about the time thing that narrowed down to whether or not to feed Inuyasha. Maybe it kept him from burning himself.---It will be interesting to see how they will help Miroku. That is suspenseful as well as intriguing.----One more time; pleeeease, more neko/inu love digs at each other. That was just too much fun. I loved Kilala's language and names for things. You did a terrific job with her character. Inuyasha understanding her really proves his intelligence.---Sorry that this is so jumbled, but I'm kind of in a hurry and I will definitely be reading this chapter over again.---Snow
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