| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: Neko-Lady On: March 25, 2006 00:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was recommended by Fenikkusuken. She was right your story is very interesting and your lemons well written. I'm sorry you killed off Kagra, (and I know that's not spelled right) I've always hoped that she would get away from Naraku. Even if she is bad I like that she stands up to him. Question; Did you decide to use Time Lords in your story because of the BBC t.v. show, 'Dr. Who'? There really isn't any resemblance in the character, just the name of Time Lord. Well, I've stayed up too late to get this finished, hope there is some way to link to this story so I will know when you update. Cheers! Neko-Lady
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Kilika On: March 23, 2006 23:11 PST
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I've really enjoyed reading this story so far, and cant wait until it comes to a conclusion. You've really done some unique things with this story.
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Title: Very good!!
Reviewed By: Tevrah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 21:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was very good! I can't wait for more!!
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: March 22, 2006 14:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww....I was waiting for some more Inu/Kag fluff but there wasn't any. *sigh* oh well. So is Naraku's black hole thing that those other Time Lords are watching Miroku's wind tunnel? And thanks for putting Kensei's hypoglycemia in that was nice of you. So are Jinx and Bandit mated and that's why Bandit waas acting guilty? Because only the alpha members are supposed to mate? Oh well guess I'll find out later huh? Well update soon ok ja!!!
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Reviewed By: Ardent-Amber [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 13:52 PST
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Sry about the wait, but it took me a while to get around to the lemon...hehheh...naughty, naughty...sadly, my brain is incapable of functuning well enough to write a decent review, so yeah...MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 08:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. Very informative. Keep wondering what Kanna is up to. Can't be anything good. And poor Miroku. Can't wait to see what happens next. And I just happen to love your lemony goodness you serve. You are just so damn good at it. YUM! Old puter here was FUBAR'd for a bit, so hopefully no problems for a while. Update when you can.
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Title: great update!
Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 05:23 PST
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Thanx for the update. I REALLY like this story! I love how you have put so much thought into the story. Keep the new chaps comming!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 03:11 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was awesome, but i miss inuyasha n kagome n this chapter. Are you gonna make kag preggo during all the tough time their in now? what about sango?...i'm itching to find out what that other soul is..all tho i might have a hunch who it could b. Anyway..like i always say...UPDATE!!! oh yea...n i LOVE IT!!!
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Reviewed By: Mace On: March 12, 2006 21:30 PST
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Wonderful, I'm so glad you updated. This story if definitely progressing nicely. I'm glad to see that you can give the characters dimensions, develop them slowly, and still keep the ideas that Takahashi-san intended. Overall, your plot is complex while still being easy to follow, and I'm extremely impressed that neither Midoriko nor any of your original characters have become deified or have overtaken the plot. Also, I'm not really sure what the uproar about the lime content is about, but don't be discouraged. I found it to be both accurate without being clinical and romantic without being impossible. Well done, and I look forward to your next installment.
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Title: Great!!!
Reviewed By: Tevrah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 10:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really good!! I really liked the part about what Kagome did to Inu's hands!! And the ending was great!!
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Reviewed By: wishes to remain anonymous On: March 10, 2006 14:18 PST
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I don't know what scares me more; how you describe limes so well or the fact that you CAN describe limes so well!!
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: March 10, 2006 13:47 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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What an evil and magnificent bitch Kagome is! Her wraping of IY's hands was hillarious. His revenge on her was equally great. I'm lovin it. Shippou's offering of the pocky was rather cute. His slip of calling Kagome Ma- was sweet. I liked how Inu is including him more in the 'Pack'. Once again, on the triple aspect of the Inu, good amalgamation of it. This is one of the few stories that makes the demon!inu not an idiot. Thanks so much for writing for all of us. Your placing in the IY awards was in no way a mistake or a fluke. You have a seriously good storyline and characterization here. Caitriona
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Reviewed By: jessbit On: March 10, 2006 02:02 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONGRATULATIONS on your characterisation award! And your alternate endings are always funny, I love every one of them. Could the alien have pulled a soap-box out of somewhere as well though? I automatically connect that image with a soap-box, Don't ask becasue I don't know. Maybe it's got something to do with that vacumm cleaner sucking my brain before...
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Reviewed By: Evie_Lovejoy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 23:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this story. It's got a very original plot and the characterization is very complex. I haven't seen a Koga reaction like that to Kagome before, but it makes perfect sense. With Kagome's signals, it was natural to interpret her in that fashion. Plus, with his wild nature, his instant bloodlust was a follow-up that was inevitable. Personally, I don't really like when Kagome and Inuyasha end up together so quickly, but I'm such an angst whore. *Giggles.* I loved their first mating where they linked.. too bad that can't really happen. *Sighs forelornly.* It would be very... stimulating. -^.^- Please do update soon, I'm quite interested with what directing this story will go in. I haven't enjoyed a fic like this since I became obsessed with Sueric's writings. With all my respect, Evie
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 21:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOoooo, such a nice update. It ended so sweetly. It's about those two had a little alone time, poor things! Things never stay quiet for long though..can't wait until next time!!
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