| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 16:39 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOOPEE!!!. you update n it made me love this story even more(if it's even possible).Now, this is my wonderful word for all the magnificent authors out there: UPDATE!!!!...I love it....LOVE IT ALL!!!!
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: March 08, 2006 19:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could kill you. I was so happy when I saw that it said you had updated on the third,only to find out that it lied!!!! Then I had to wait 5 days for you to post the next chapter. *sigh* oh well I enjoyed it so I guess it was worth the wait. And yes hypoglycemia does suck, thankfully I'm only borderline so I don't have to worry about what I eat as much, as long as I get some form of protein every day. And I gotta make sure I eat before I drink cuz one time I didn't and it fucked me up bad. lol. Anyway this is a really cool story and I like that I'm getting to learn a little latin and some quantum physics as I read. Well congratulations on your win and update soon ok ja!!!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 03:50 PST
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WOW!!! I loved this story! Your amazing. I'm so gonna put you in my fav. Update!!!
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: chanda (not signed in) On: March 05, 2006 10:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what a wild sexy adventurous ride this story has been so far. I love the depth you placed in your story. I will definetly put you on as my fav author on this site. Please update soon. Thank you Chanda.
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Title: Chapter46
Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: February 28, 2006 10:31 PST
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Another great chapter. I am really enjoying this chapter. I wonder a lot about Kanna and what her purpose really is with this story. I like her, and I like that she is not Naraku's lapdog any longer. My favorite part of this story is not only when Inu's demon side comes out, but also when the three sides come together and talk to those around him. Just the way that you write it leaves the reader with a sense of the power that he really does possess. But the line "Screw being Inu-no-Taisho" cracked me up completely. I wondered why Miroku collapsed, but I was much more concerned about Kagome's sudden Hypoglycemic episode. Even if she was having a lot of adrenalin pumping into her blood stream, she shouldn't have just dropped like that. Did it also have something to do with the amount of miko energy going out of her body and the amount of 'energy' she used up with Inu earlier? (but I did like how you didn't ignore the growing symptoms and just have her pass out, but rather had her weaken and then drop.) Thanks for writing for all of us. I have really enjoyed this piece and just know that I'll enjoy the rest too. Caitriona
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: Tevrah [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 20:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! I really liked it! And you've still got me wondering whether or not Kanna has turned over a new leaf, or if she's still the evil little spawn we all know and love...
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: February 26, 2006 18:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why do I love Inu?...umm cuz he's awesome!!! ^.^ And I completely know how Kagome feels right now. I'm borderline hypoglycemic so I can get like that, I haven't had a bad attack of it though in a long time, now I mostly just get depressed. It runs in my mother's side of the family, my uncle checked himself into a mental institution once because he was hearing voices cuz his blood sugar was really fucked up cuz he wasn't eating right. It took them a week to figure out that it was cuz he was borderline hypoglycemic. Anyway, yea I understand and this was a really good chapter so update soon ok and if Kikyou does come back....lets just say whatever reaction I have will not be pretty.
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Title: Awsome!!!!
Reviewed By: mel f On: February 25, 2006 00:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok what the hell is going on with Kagome? Tell me she just fainted, and she is not dieing all over again. You know i think you love to torcher us by leaving ciffys! "its not nice :-(" anyway love your story looking forward to the next chapter soon i hope.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 15:18 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! This is such a terrific fanfic that I don't even know what to say! You've had me absolutely riveted. You're a fantastic writer and your story line is so perfected and deliberate. I've been so moved by the mate and pack references between the characters, it's so beautiful! You definitely have my complete attention and I can't wait until your next update ;)
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Reviewed By: Neko_angel666 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 09:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO NO NO NO NO NOOOOO!!! OMG YOU ARE EVIL!!! PLEASE PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!! I'M IN LOVE WITH YOUR STORY AND I MUST READ MORE!!!! Love ya, Angela
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Reviewed By: Leo_mae On: February 14, 2006 20:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*crosses arms and pouts* Feh so I'm not a big Kouga fan. *shrug* there are worse things in life. I like him more than I like Kikyou. But then I even like Naraku more than Kikyou. I wish she'd just stay dead, she's died three times and yet she can't seem to just stay that way. I felt like smacking Kagome when she healed her, stupid girl, doesn't she know you're not supposed to help your enemies? Anyway good chapter but I'm a little confused on how exactly that reaction to the Tetsusaiga occurred. *shrug* oh well update soon ok ja!!!
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Title: Very good!!!
Reviewed By: Tevrah [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 17:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very good!!! I can't wait for more!! Will there be more Rin in this fic???
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Title: Chapter 45
Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 09:07 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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At the end of 44 I wondered a little what would happen when the combo of Inupapa's youki and Inuyasha's youki met and melded with that of Kouga's claw thingie (whose name escapes me). Since two deads outweigh one living I wondered if there would be trouble. Would the addition of Tenseiga (living even though dead) and Sess's Youki help out any? (three living versus two dead) Anyway, onto the review. Another enjoyable chapter. I like how you incorperated Kirara into the Pack Call. I don't know how many times I knew that my cat wanted to do something that I had "asked" it to do, but then it's very catness foiled me. I also liked how the humans react to the Pack ideal. It really made me think about how humans are pack creatures just as much as anything else. Kanna had some interesting thoughts and comments in this chapter. She brings up that she was created in much the same way that the kazanna was. I can forsee many interesting conversations between Kanna and Miroku should he survive this latest ordeal. Should he start to loose and was drawn into the time vortex would that destroy the vortex. It is the whole portable hole in a bag of holding thing from AD&D. An interesting thought nevertheless. On a mostly unrelated thought, have you ever read the Necroscope series? I think that Kagome's time lines are somewhat similar to Harry Kough's life strings....kinda... Thanks for writing for us. I look forward to seeing how this works. Caitriona
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Reviewed By: LavenderRose(nsi) On: February 14, 2006 07:47 PST
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Another excellent chapter. You must be owned by a cat, judging by Inuyasha's reaction to Kirara's jumping on top of his head and kneading his scalp! I could sympathize with that one. Keep up the great work, but the cliffies are killing me!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 20:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh, sneaky author and your cliffys,lol. A shame really, InuYasha goes through so much just to get sucked into that? Now that would really*suck*. And am still wondering what Kanna is up to. She hesitated when she spoke, so...hmmm. And Sesshomaru is leaving? He is needed elsewhere? Whoa! So much going on in one chapter, heh, that what makes them so great. Update soon. On a different note: The Teletubbies? You have actually watched the Teletubbies? Kami, Im old! Lmao, I would never have know what a Noo-Noo was if hadn't told me. Still love your small skits though.
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