| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 17:45 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really love this story! While there is a lot of the "time stuff" that I don't quite understand I think that you have a wonderful story going on here. Characterization is awesome. The whole concept of Pack is extra awesome and I just overall like it a lot! Thanks for writing! Caitriona
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Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: February 11, 2006 21:16 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read through chapter 17 and I must say that this is a REALLY intrigueing and original story. I don't know what I want topic I want to comment on first.... The concept of the time lords is a little confusing. The idea that the four of them must become a living jewel is facinating and I love how you are doing it. But the thing that has grabbed my interest the most so far is what you have done so far with Inuyasha and the concept of Pack. While I'm not going to read more tonight, I can't wait to start in the morning to see what grows out of this. Inu with the dogs after the park was especially great. Conversations between the three incarnations of Inu aren't anything new, but I like HOW you have done them, and I like that you haven't make the Youkai incarnation into a mindless killing monster. Thanks for writing! Caitriona
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Reviewed By: jessbit On: February 11, 2006 03:49 PST
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I knew there was a productive reason for me to review - how do we vote? Good luck with your nominations. And why do I get this ominous feeling about their plan with the wind tunnel/air void/air rip/whatever you call them thingies. I'm probably trying to read too much into your titles, hmm?
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Reviewed By: jessbit On: February 11, 2006 03:45 PST
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Kagome and teenage Rin are no longer destroying my brain! YAY! They were sucked up by the vacuum cleaner .. unfortunately, so was my brain, hence the not reviewing : ) *shudders at the mere mention of Teletubbies* Can't stand them, not at all. But but my brain's back so all's well! Great chapter, as always, but one gripe - YOU STOPPED TOO EARLY!!! Nasty cliffies! Grumble, grumble ...
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: ~parvatilotus~ On: February 09, 2006 20:59 PST
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oooohhhh... I'm all excited.. whats gonna happen?? I feel like im 6 yrs old and cant wait for anything lol. great chapter. :) good luck on your nominations and the voting! I wish I knew how to vote, but i dont. :(
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Title: Great Chapter!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2006 19:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like it, I love the story. Have from the get go. As I read, I was wondering if thats what Miroku had up his sleeve, or rather, up his hand. To use it against the time rip. Hmmm...should be interesting to see if it works. And wonder whats up with Jinx and Bandit? Still trying to figure out what Kanna is up to. Its never any good. Great chapter though. Update when you can.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2006 18:40 PST
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yeah, a week, cuz of school. Well, anyways, good chappie, update again soon please. ^-^
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Title: Chp 44
Reviewed By: InuBaby369246, not signed on On: February 09, 2006 18:27 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter! And yes, the whole deal with Kagome makes alot more sense now, thank you. Kanna is evil, and the Kai-wolves are right not to trust her, but hey what can you do.
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Reviewed By: Leo_mae On: February 09, 2006 17:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol there does that make you happy? I liked the last chapter but I admit not quite as much as a good Kouga bashing. I liked this chapter too cuz Inu got to be all authorative and there's just something really sexy about him being that way. Anyway I have an idea, what if Inu and Sess attacked the vortex together? The Tenseiga can counteract the death energy within the rip and the Tetsusaiga can draw out the youki that keeps it open. Well anyway it was just an idea. Anyway it was a good chapter and yes more Kouga bashing would be appreciated. ^.^ Update again soon ok ja!!!
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Title: AAAAHHHHH!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: mel f On: February 09, 2006 14:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God i love your story. i wish you could post like 4 chapters at one time but i wouldnt want you to kill your self just to do it:-) anyway i cant wait for your next chapter.
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Title: Very good!!
Reviewed By: Tevrah [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2006 10:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very good!! I can't wait for more!!
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Title: KEEP GOING!!
Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2006 10:15 PST
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WOW WOW WOW!!! I am so happy that you did another chapter!! Please don't take to long doing more!! the suspence is KILLING ME!!!!! congrats on the nomonation!
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Reviewed By: yugiohgirl03 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 21:52 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok good...keep it up...and yes you should remember me look at your past reviews...keep it coming or i will sic my teething 8 month old on you...evil grin...:P
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Title: Very nice!
Reviewed By: Tevrah [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 19:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was, once again, a very nicely written chapter!! I can't wait for the next one!! And I'm so glad that you might be doing a Sess/Rin story someday! Hopefully someday soon!!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 17:10 PST
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I really like your fic...even if it did take me a week to read it. ^-~ update again soon please. ~~Kuramas gurl
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