| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: TheFabledCat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 04:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't even finished reading all of the chapters you have posted and I just had to review. This story is wonderful, I love it! So many twists and new things that I have hardly ever seen in any other fan fics. The lemons are tastefully done, and I really liked that. Most of the time they are a little too smutty and it makes me not want to continue on with the story. The characters are not that OOC and I like the fact that you tried to keep them as close to their original selves as possible. I have to thank you for the guides at the bottom of each chapter (I'm slow :P) I kudos to you on your writing. I can almost see everything playing in my head as a movie as I read it! (I'm a dork, I know.) ~TFC
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Reviewed By: phoenixburns [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 16:36 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you incorporated Kagome's missing father and explain Kagome's mother's strange willingness to let her daughter chase after monsters. The story is beautifully written with a clean flowing plot. Timelines and events fall into place without leaving the reader lost and confused. I love how orginal this take is or at least it is to me. I wait anxiously to read what new plot twist and turns you have in store.
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Reviewed By: gypsymuse [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 12:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm at a loss for superlatives with which to describe this delightfully original fic. (I had to come over here to keep up with it, so as not to miss out on the luscious citrus that FF.net will not allow.) I'm quite interested now to see what transformations Sango and Miroku will undergo (er, not that I'm biased toward that particular pairing or anything, no, not me). In character, deftly plotted, a genuinely unique premise, and perhaps my favourite Sango and Miroku lemon ever...I think you could say I'm hooked. :)
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Reviewed By: jade_pendant(nsi) On: February 02, 2006 07:41 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bravo damn i love your story, u got some real talent. dont keep me in suspence for to long k, update soon. arigato
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Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 22:16 PST
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Short, good, but short. Thats about all I can say for it right now. I'm a little confused, but I'll wait for the next chapter. I love this fic and look forward to every new chapter, load the next soon, and Keep writing. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Leo_mae On: February 01, 2006 17:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not afraid of having children I just don't like them. I don't know why, I just never really have so I don't want any till I'm at least 28. My mom says she was the same way when she was my age so I know my opinion is going to change just not in the near future. Anyway good chapter I figured that she put the barrier up because the first thing she remembered when coming to would be Kouga. And good Inu's mark is balanced that means that he should be ok right? I really like the way Inu is turning out he's getting alot cooler with all this control and harnessed and recognized power. ^.^ Well update soon ok and congrats on the nominations!!!!!!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 16:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, Grandma's back! Damn, fine story, Love it. Cant wait till you're able to update again. Oh, and BTW, LMAO, I just love the *Darth Sesshomaru* skit. But I have to ask, Nani Shiyagaru is the *NooNoo*? LMAO, Cuz I have no idea. Ok, nuff outta me, am off to find me M+M's. Update soon, onegai?
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Title: chap 43
Reviewed By: InuBaby369246, not signed on On: February 01, 2006 16:43 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So the thing on their forheads is a ying-yang? Cool! Also, I don't understand just what happened with Kagome, and the tree. It's a little cfonfusing because I understoofd that she died. But maybe I read it wrong... you never know.
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Title: Lovin' it!!
Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 16:28 PST
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Say where do you get these Latin quotes? I wanna know!! I love em. Especially when thet're so true. Anyway, sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, but I hope you'll update more often.
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Reviewed By: Selina On: January 29, 2006 01:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah I read the updated chapter. Now you goy to update some more please. i really like this story and hope you continue, oh yeah i wonder whats going to happen with barrier. uh-oh love selina
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Title: Another great chapter!!
Reviewed By: Tevrah [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 10:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, hey! Another great chapter!! I just love this fic!! And I agree that Rin is way too young for Sesshy right now, but in about ten years, it'll be perfect!! I do hope that you'll consider doing a sequel with them! It'd be great and I'd be sure to R&R!!
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Reviewed By: miakakiri [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 21:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nyaaa!!! Poor guys! Poor Kagome, too, 'cause I bet she's rather confused....but....I mean, the guys weren't even DOING anything, and they WANTED to help her! Oh well. They'll get over it. Right? At least Kagome's alive again, right? And now she can fix the time rip (been waiting for you to get to that since those dolts started fighting). And next time EITHER of the Brothers Inu bumps into that blasted pi--wolf...he's either gonna die or be castrated (depending on who catches him first....excuse my Ranma reference). I do hope the next chapter comes out soon (though unfortunately even if it does I probably won't be able to read it until next week, as I don't even have a computer, much less an internet connection...~_~*) It seems rather sad to leave poor Inuyasha and Fluffy-sama stuck to the wall like that....And I'd like to find out what the symbol on Inu's forhead IS. And why it bothers Miroku. And what IS Kanna up to....is she telling the truth or not? And is Midoriko OK? So many questions left by the ending of this chapter! So many more things to discover! *^_^* You certainly know how to hook your readers with cliffhangers! *^_^* Just don't leave us hanging too long....wouldn't want anyone to fall. Ne? *^_^* (Yeah, I guess that's just a nice and flowery way of saying "Please hurry and get the next chapter out!" but I'm not trying to be pushy or anything. ~_~* Please don't take offense!) Hope you have a great week! *^_^*
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Reviewed By: Leo_mae On: January 27, 2006 19:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! She lives!!! ^.^ I'm glad cuz if she satyed dead i would have had to kill you. lol. Anyway yea I know it takes a while, i'm in the fucking health academy at my high school. I've taken Anatomy & Physiology hon., Health Science I (crash course of anatomy), and now i'm taking zoology. There are so many things can happen to prevent pregnancy from occuring that I'm surprised women even manage to become pregnant. With all the shit an embryo has to go through to survive being in their mother's body it's almost like we aren't meant to reproduce. Which I kinda like the idea that my body doesn't like the idea of being pregnant. Sorry I have major issues with babies and small children, I'm not having any kids till my thirties. I want my 20's to myself. Anyway update soon ok ja!!!
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Reviewed By: Tara222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 18:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again I am in awe of your greatness. (bows) Unfortunately, I never got your e-mail. If it's not to much trouble, could you try again? I think I fixed the problem. Thank you so very much.
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Title: Absolutely wonderful!!
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 22:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is absolutely beautiful and I could find now flaws whatsoever! ^^ I would first of all like to say that anyone who thinks your story is too logn is a moron! I love every last second spent reading your story and it is one of the best I have ever read. ^^ Please continue writing logn and detailed chapters with such wonderful description that are full of plot. The fluff is wonderful too and I absolutely love what you've done with the Inu instincts and the various mating rituals. I must say you are a very talented writer and I encourage you to continue! ^^ This last chapter is killing me with suspense and I hope you update soon!!! I have to find out what happens to Kagome!
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