| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Title: UPATE SOON!!!
Reviewed By: mel f On: January 25, 2006 16:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SO THIS IS WHAT I THINK YOU SHOULD DO: POST LIKE 3-5 CHAPTERS ALL AT ONCE BECAUSE WAITING TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT IS KILLING ME! :-)so update soon please:-)
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Reviewed By: Jessbit On: January 25, 2006 02:52 PST
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I just thought of anotherr reason it's good not to have the Kagome/Sess thing - how would Sess deal with having both Rin and Kagome in his heart? Kagome and a teenage Rin are currently running around in my head vying for Sesshoumaru's attentions, stopping occasionally to fight one another. Ouch, I think they hit something in there.
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Reviewed By: Jessbit On: January 25, 2006 02:46 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooohhhhh, you sneaky author. Particularly sneaky and teasy title too. I hope your beta gets better soon and I agree with the angsat - as much as I hate it, the story would be boring without it. Although I was VERY tempted to write a four thousand character review consisting of the one word 'gaaah' in capitals with lots of exclamations marks - I figured that you'd probably get enough of it anyway. :) Thanks for updating regularly, even if you're only leaving cliffies :) oh, and thank goodness you didn't make Kagome go after Seshoumaru, that would be VERY wrong ... and I'd feel so sorry for Inuyasha ...
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Reviewed By: kt On: January 24, 2006 19:35 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you need to update NOW! no more of wodering what will happen to kagome!
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Title: Wonderful story!!
Reviewed By: Tevrah [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 13:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful Inuyasha fic!! I just love it!! I can't wait for another chapter! And I hope that maybe you'll have a sequel one day that will be a Sess/Rin pairing! Other than Inu/Kag and Mir/San, they are my favorite couple!! Great story and can't wait for more!!
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Reviewed By: Selina On: January 24, 2006 06:37 PST
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okay so let me get this straight since sesshy can't revive her, soshe won't want to follow him (yyeeeeeeaaaaaahhhhhh) she is still going to stay with inu (YYYYYYYaaaaeeeeeeeeehhhhhhhhh) so she is still alive with that chakura thing thats so cool (yyyyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh) please update Love Selina
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Reviewed By: FieryFaerie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 23:43 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOh...I like that you've found another way to revive Kagome, without using Tenseiga. Way to be unpredictable, chica! I can't wait to see what happens next, what's up with Kanna, and Sango's eventual reunion with Kohaku. Hooray! And hooray for the Mir/San moments in this one. Anywhos, thank you for reading my one shot, I'm so glad you liked it! If you're bored I've got a few more! *cough* "Remember" is Souta as Kohaku's reincarnation, and I think that it's one of my favorites. It's been nominated (and seconded!) for best oneshot at IYFG for this voting time. Anywhos, I apologise for the shameless self-promotion. Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: Pairikan On: January 23, 2006 22:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've lost track of this one for a long time, so i thank you 'cos i read fics a lot but i rarely find one so really GOOD in spelling, redaction and story line. i even don't speak english but i study it in college, and it's always a pleasure to read such a piece of work so well written. thank you, you've just made me week at least! by the way, i loved what you did with Rin/Sesshoumaru, just brilliant!
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Reviewed By: yugiohgirl03 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 21:16 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep it up...if you don't...i will sic my teehting babys on you!!!
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Reviewed By: Wow! On: January 23, 2006 19:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reduced to a one word statement in responce to reading chapter 41!! That word is "wow"! Forgive a brief responce..dealing with a particularly severe bout with allergies tonight! (sniffle,sneeze) All I can say is thank you for your dedication in writing this story..I will remain dedicated until the end!! Namaste,my friend!! (huggies)
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Reviewed By: Leo_mae On: January 23, 2006 19:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I guess it's a good thing that Sess can't use the Tenseiga, we don't want her having an attachment to him for not only Inu's sake but for the living jewel as well. Why do I sense that Sango is going to have a miscarriage? With intensive training and all that seriously can't be good for the baby. And even though I know that miscarriages are sad I think it would be in the best interest. And what is on Inu's forhead? It looked just like a moon before and now it's becoming some elaborate symbol? *sigh* oh well anyway update soon ok cuz I want Kagome to come back to life so bad ok ja!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tara222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 18:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, totally AWESOME!!!!!!!! I only wish I could be even HALF the author you are!!!! (I can't even get a r&r.....) I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!! Ummm....where do you all the name translations and genaral info???? I TRYING to write a fic but lack information. Could you PLEASE tell me?? I would be forever in your debt. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: parvatilotus [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 15:34 PST
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ok.. so i'm still teary eyed... but i believe in you.. lol you wont leave me all sad and depressed forever right?
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Title: frani1375
Reviewed By: frani1375 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 12:52 PST
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I absolutly love your story. keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: firebird234 On: January 22, 2006 23:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't let Kagome die she can't die please please please don't let her die.
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