| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: firebird234 On: January 22, 2006 23:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't let Kagome die she can't die please please please don't let her die.
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Reviewed By: FieryFaerie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 18:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww man, this chapter was very sad, and very well written. Tenseiga!!!!! Anywhos, as always I look forward to the next chapter! Cliffhangers are evil, and I love them. And *cough* my story is a oneshot, so it won't take too long to read...hee. Anywhos, it's calle "With His Touch" and it's here on MediaMiner and on FF.net and such, and this is probably the lames treview ever, but I continue to love your story and such.
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Reviewed By: Leo_mae On: January 22, 2006 13:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't hate Kouga he just really pisses me off some times. You can't let Kagome die!!!! OMG!!! You can't do that. If she stays dead I'll never forgive you and I won't be the only one. You can't make Inu suffer like that, it's absolutely horrible. *sigh* update soon ok ja.
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Reviewed By: Selina On: January 22, 2006 12:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOO kagome can't leave us she can't die whats going happen. AAAAHHhh im so sad. she has to live,Please update Poor inuyasha please let her live it would be to sad.
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Title: wonderful
Reviewed By: mel f On: January 22, 2006 11:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i dont know if i have told you this before but your fic is one of the best i have read. i absolutly love it. this last chapter had me in tears. i hope that sesshomaru will help bring kag back. anyway cant wait till your next chapter.
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Title: Oh,no!!
Reviewed By: Inu4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 20:24 PST
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I can't stop the tears from falling as I read this chapter...Please tell me that after everything that Kagome and Inuyasha went thru,that she will die like that?? Daymn that Kouga! Sesshy should've castrated him!! There still is the chance for Tensaiga to be used,isn't there? I won't be able to sleep a wink until I know what happens!! Oh,what a cliffie to end with,my friend!! I will trust and have faith in you...(sighs) As always,namaste!!
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Title: After reading chap.37
Reviewed By: Inu4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 19:44 PST
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Miroku bought binoculars? That was the mysterious purchase he made?? HaHaHaHaHa!!!! Namaste,dear friend!!
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Title: May the force be with you!!
Reviewed By: Inu4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 19:32 PST
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I loved the alternate ending you provided! Tensei,Inuyasha and Sesshy as characters from Star Wars?? (laughing so hard,I fall off of computer chair!!) You rock,my friend!! Namaste!!
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Title: I'm finally catching up!!
Reviewed By: Inu4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 19:03 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello there!! I've read chapters 23-32 after I found your story here in one sitting!! (while trying to ignore various body parts falling asleep!) lol I am so happy to 'see' you again! I have missed you and this wonderful world that you have given me permission to see by casting it out into the universe that is cyberspace! Thanks for the tidbits about yourself that you mention from time to time...It's nice to glimpse the person behind the author..Forgive me for rambling on so,but I'm making up for lost time since the troubles with A/S! Have a blessed week,my friend..As always,namaste!!
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Reviewed By: miakakiri [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 18:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No, no, I did like the title....it just bothered me that it was first person singular active, rather than the infinitive. Sorry if I mixed you up or anything....~_~* Although....you might use the passive infinitive on the second term....making it "to gather, to be snatched". Except maybe that doesn't make as much sense as I though it did....~_~* Nevermind. It all works. It's just the conjugation that bothered me. Sorry. ~_~* Looks like Fluffy-sama will have to use Tenseiga on a human again. Either that or the Nexus will reset or something....except that doesn't seem like there was anything else she could've done. I am a bit curious as to WHY he's reluctant to do so. Perhaps the use of Tenseiga creates some sort of bond between Sesshy and whomever he uses it on? That would explain why he still lets Rin follow him everywhere. AND why he's so careful to protect her (ie the episode when Naraku has her kidnapped). Of course...it could quite easily be something else entirely. PLEASE hurry and get the next chapter out as soon as you can!! Everyone is on the edge of their seats, waiting to find out what will happen to Kagome!!! Please tell us!!!
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Reviewed By: ~parvatilotus~ On: January 21, 2006 17:45 PST
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*cries* if *sob* you *weep* don't *chokes* update soon *wails* I'll never forgive you. please? *looks at you with big weepy eyes*
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Reviewed By: miakakiri [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2006 11:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a REALLY great story. The Latin chapter titles add a bit of interest to the story. Much as I hate to say it, though....you might want to double-check the conjugation of the verbs. For example, chapter 38....your translation reads "Convoco, corripio: Latin; Convoco: to call together or convene. Corripio: to seize, snatch up, or steal" This makes sense...except that you didn't use the infinitives. (Which would be "convocare, corripire" if I recall correctly.) As they're written, the verbs are conjugated to the first person singular (active voice). Thus, they say "I convene/call together, I seize/snatch up/steal" which doesn't seem like quite what you're trying to convey. I realize it's a minor mistake and I probably shouldn't even bother you about it, but it's been bugging me. This might be the only place such a mistake of conjugation exists...it just kinda jumped out at me. However, I doubt that anyone else would really catch something like that. I happen to have a little background in Latin (3 years of it in hs) and a great interest in linguistics (which is why I carefully read the translation bits--it's interesting to know what the words mean). I do appologize for bothering you about this. ~_~* Anyhow.....a truely EXCELLENT story! I can hardly wait to read more!! *^_^* Will Kagome be OK? She HAS to be!!! And...how long before Sango's pregnancy is discovered?
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Reviewed By: FieryFaerie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 16:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha ha ha ... very funny! I am enjoying the story...and I wouldn't want it to end that way at all! Maybe I'm just impatient. XP And My best lemon nom was actually for Mir/San. I loved that scene. there's a real lack of good Mir/San lemons our there, and I really liked whta you did with that one. I heart Mir/San muchly (and I actually won best Mir/San romance at IYFG last quarter...I mean..what?). Anywhos, I can't wait to see what comes next...with Kagome out of commission, however are they going to close the time rip! Oh noes!
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Reviewed By: jessbit On: January 19, 2006 15:52 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, you've explained Kouga's behaviour. And from his point it's actually logical. Now I can't go on about how thick he is. Ah well. Another great chapter. I agree with Tara 222 - you three all have differnt strong points but from what I read of Silent Sky and Seuric's works, I think you're character depth is the best. Especially the way you treat Inuyasha's different sides and how we see both his inside and outer self and how the inner selves affect his outer self (appearence to others)
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Reviewed By: Leo_mae On: January 18, 2006 19:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A perfect score for this chapter!!! Mainly cuz Kouga finally got his. ^.^ Anyway sry for forgetting to review the last chapter I was going to do it later but I was just really busy and completely forgot. Thank you for updating now though, my b-day is tomorrow, i'm turning 18!!!!, and this was a lovely present. Anyway YAY!!! Kouga bashing!!! And yes I quite agree with you Kagome has been showing Kouga favor and I always feel like slapping her when she does it. But being human and obviously not fluent in either biology or zoology, which i'm currently taking, she honestly isn't aware of her actions. She's just being a friendly typical teen girl. And yes Kouga is a wolf so in NO way tame and yes even dogs can become agressive when provoked. Hell even my Border Collie will nip and growl a lil if my 11 year old sis takes her rough housing a bit too far. Anyway update soon ok I can't wait to see Sango and Miroku's reactions when they learn that Inu has gained control of his blood and all. ^.~
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