| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Title: frani1375
Reviewed By: frani1375 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 12:21 PST
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This is such a great story. I totally agree with the way you portrayed Kouga. He's only being nice to get what he wants and if that was taken away from him, I could totally see him going balistic over it. I can't wait for you to update. Now, if I could only update my story......
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Reviewed By: FieryFaerie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 23:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I nommed you for best lemon! Whee! I'm really enjoying this fic. It does seem like things are being dragged out quite a bit...I really want to see how the group is going to work together as the living jewel, etc, and I want to see what happens with Sango and Miroku and the whole pregnancy thing. Whee! Anywhos, I really appreciate that you update this so often...I get impatient when authors take forever to update, and I've really enjoyed the story so far. Your characterizations are spot-on, and you've definitely got a compelling plot. I do think that Kouga's a bit more of an asshole than he should be, but everyone else is awesome. Whee! And I just said "Whee" far too many times, and you probably think I'm one of those crazy reviewers. Who knows, maybe I am. Anywhos, wonderful story, keep up the good work, and congrats on all your nominations!
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Reviewed By: jessbit On: January 16, 2006 01:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I love you. (not in THAT way, just your writing) Thanks for answering my question. Things are getting interesting. I'm not sure that I trust Kanna, she just never seemed to have any thoguhts let alone free will, so how could she even consider going behind Naraku's back. On the other hand, she might just be smarter than Kagura and act obedient. guess I'll find out eventually, huh? Pocky sounds yummy! Chocolate AND lollies! I could just eat, and eat, and eat, and ... I'm beginning to see a problem. Just as well virtual selves can't get obese or diabetic or anything. So if you get sick of pocky I can be your official pocky eater, if you want to, of course.
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Reviewed By: firebird234 On: January 14, 2006 17:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Kouga is trouble doesn't he realize he has never had any rights to Kagome since Inuyasha is higher up on the royal scale then he is, but we all now how dense he is. I love this story can't wait for the next chapter, it will be fun to read Kouga getting his tailed behind kicked royally.
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 17:32 PST
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Uh oh. Somwthing tells me that Kouga is in deep s@#$. Inuyasha and Sesshomaru are not likely to allow him to live after this, reguardless of what Kagome wants. Oh well. I can't wait till Inyasha gets a good sniff of Sango though... Keep up the excellent work and update soon please. I love this!!
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 22:41 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. I hope that InuYasha lets his demon out and kills Kouga or beats the hell out of him. But how could they of not noticed him? Where were the Kai Wolves? O'well hope you update soon.
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Title: OH MY GOD!!!
Reviewed By: mel f On: January 13, 2006 21:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god! Oh my god! Oh my god!!!! What a cliffy. how could you leave it like that? Oh you better update quick!!! i might die if you dont!:-)
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 20:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, I know I havent reviewed in a while, but that doesnt mean I havent been reading. I have loved this story from the get-go. Cant wait to see what happens to Koga when InuYasha catchs up to him. Should be pretty interesting. I like Koga, I really do. Tho I just love and adore InuYasha out of any of them. But Koga, lol, I dunno, he's not the brightest bulb out there. LMAO, maybe saying he's dense would be putting it mild, I dunno.
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Reviewed By: Tara222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 19:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly love this fic!!!!! I cannot wait for the next chap. Your one of the very few whom is accually consistantly good!!!! Me, I think you are on par with Sueric & Silent Sky, if not better!
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Reviewed By: parvatilotus [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 19:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. I love it. I can't wait for the next chapter! Lol i know this is a useless review, but I just wanted to express my gratitude. :) I've been waiting for a new epic IY story, having reread EVERY Sueric one, I was getting desperate for something new and then this lovely peice of art shows up like a gift from the gods. :) I could hug you! lmao. ~Kat
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE!
Reviewed By: WOW! On: January 10, 2006 08:59 PST
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WOW! this is an awesome story and i loved how the story line is different. it keeps me interested and that is very good, keep up the good work and continue to upgrade more chappies!!! PLEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: cutie pie hentai *not logged in On: January 09, 2006 20:17 PST
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I will admit, I'm terrible about taking the time to review. That said- I started reading last night, read on my breaks at work, and even carried by sidekick into the bathroom (sorry, too much information) so I could keep reading! Great plot development, characterization, continiuty, consistency w/ the original and superb sublety. I look forward to more!
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Reviewed By: Leo_mae On: January 09, 2006 09:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! Kouga's gonna get his ass kicked!!! ^.^ Ha!!!! I really want Inu to get a piece of him though. I'm sick and tired of Kouga being a cocky bastard and believing that Inu isn't as strong as he is. Inu could easily rip him apart if Kagome would only let him. *sigh* *grin* but now she doesn't have the beads to hold him back with anymore. Oh it's gonna be open field day on Kouga's ass and I'm going to enjoy every minute of it!!!!! ^.^ lol sry I kinda have a violence fettish and Inu is getting all this extra power and I just want people to finally take him seriously. Oh well update soon ok ja!!!
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Title: Lady Banshee 999
Reviewed By: ady anhee 999 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 20:14 PST
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Wonderful story. Simply brilliant. I am so enjoying the many different aspects that are pulling this story together in such a complex way. It makes for such a enjoyable reading experiance. To many times the stories tend to become a bit simple or plain. It is very refreshing to see a story with so much going on. I eagerly await the coming chapters to this story. And I must admit, I got quite a chuckle out of your little "Star Wars" spoof at the end. Especially with Myoga talking like Yoda. *snicker* Till then TTFN! Lady Banshee 999
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Title: WOW!!
Reviewed By: mel f On: January 07, 2006 19:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a cliffy!! this story is amazing. i just started reading it today and i am in love. you are a gifted writer this fic is absolutely perfect. it's been a long time since i have read something so Exciting, so interesting. i look forward to your next chapter. so please update soon.
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